Th2#Dhokha Ya Sachha Pyar Part 29 pg 47-48 Dec 25 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
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Sam dad and Arjun dad r political leaders great
And they are opposite to each other
But they choose wrong way
Riya know why Arjun marry her
But aisha is in black
What happened when she got to know truth
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update plz.. The previous update was awesome...''
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PART 29



" Aai vo aaj hame bahar jate hai... ready rehna aap " Arjun informs from Kitchen door & goes back.. His Mother is in Kitchen making Tea.

" Kya karu??? jaau??? ha shayhd.. nahi agar koi galat baat hue to... ha per baat meri beti hai...

unhe... nhai vo ghussahonge , aur Arjun... nhai nhai... shayhd... per ab Arjun bhi to... kya karu???? kya na bolu Arjun ko??? per agar vo karan puche to??? nahi nahi... shayhd mai Arjun ke saath... per use pehele puch leti hue... ha... " Aai thinks while wrking in Kitchen...


She look at Tea & pour it in Cups & goes to Ariya's room.


" Arjun Chai " Aai says & hands him Cup.


" Arjun Chai " One melodius tone says

Aai look here & there while Arjun just mackes face


" Arjun sab thi to hai na?"Aai ask & again


" Arjun sab thik to hai na?"


Now Arjun keep side his cup & goes to Leftside table & pick up that doll & turn off her battery...


" Kya hua ?" Aai ask

" Kuch nhai bas ise gungi kar raha tha , Riya ki best friend hai... " Arjun says with smile & shows Doll to Aai..


" Are ye kab laaye?"


" Bahar gaye the pichle haft tabhi.. " Arjun informs & places Doll on table... & smile at Doll.


" HaAai aap kuch puch rahi thi?"


" Ha... sab thik hai na ,tune achnak se mujhe chalne ke liye kaha ... "


" ha bas aise hi... acha aap ready rehna hum sham ko jaldi nikalnge... "


" Thik hai Aur Riya? vo nahi aayegi?" Aai ask


" Nahi.. Aai kabhi to mujhe ehsaas hone di ki mai baccha hue... " Arjun says & Aai lightly smack on his shoulder...


" Vaise Sunbai hai kaha?"


" Vo Terrace per hai... keh rahi thi khile hue gulab dekhne se mere baby achi hogi , khubsurat... tumhari shakal dekhngui... to mere bacche bhi ban jaayenge...tumhare tarah Mummy... vo bhi Egypt wali "



Aai smiles & Arjun take sip of tea & immedatly cough loudly...

" Arjunnn... are dhire baccha... " Aai paths his back..



Arjun smiles & ask " ai kis janam ka badla le rahi hai aap, ye namkin chai dekar?"


" hey bhagwan lagta hai kaam ke chkkar mai ... ruk mai abhi dusri chai bana deti hue... " Aai says




Raesha


" nahi... vo aaj mujhe kuch aur kaam hai..."


" ji... vo jaruri hi hai"


Sameer keep cell side & sighs


" Sorry Dad , per aaj kisi ki khushi ke liye mujhe... " he again sighs.

He cometo room * sees Ayehsa is in balcony.

" Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"


Ayesha turn & look at him ... bas aise hi... bore ho gyi Tv dekh kar isiliye yaha aayi... "


" Oh ... acha Aashu vo kuch baat karni thi... ammm puchini thi... "


" Ha kahiye na.. "


" Agar hum kis ache kaam ke karan kisi ko zhooth bol rahe ho to... kya vo acha nhi hota?"


" Sameer sach kahu???? mera maana hai ki aap kuch acha kaam kar rahe ho us mai chupane ki jarurat?????? "


" Ha ye bhi sahi hai "Sameer says is dis appointed tone.

Sameer just look at watch... ye time aaj itna fast kyu jaa raha hai?"



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Posted: 10 years ago
Supeerrbb update dii...both sam and arjun wanna unite mom and daughter...hahaha riya ki best friend bilkul usiki tarah hai chup nahi rehesakte...riya's mummy wala dialogue was funny...cont soon dii...aaj second time hai me first to comment
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Arjun & Aai seat in Car..


Arjun driving today & Aai take Co-Passenger seat. Arjun notices that his Mother is thinking something... she is looking lost...


Arjun start Radio... & look at his Aai... Aai suudenely smiles little knowing her son...


" Mer Ghar aayi ek nahi Pari... ek nahi pari... " song starts & Aai smiles to herself... rembering Ayesha, her second daughter... she is sweet , mautre... at age of 6 she handles her father...

" Sach hi kaha tha kisine Ladkiya bahut jaldi badi ho jati hai... Aashu bhi kab badi ho gayi pata hi nahi chala hamhe... " Aai thought..


Arjun look outside & sees they reach there destination...


" Aai hum pahunch gaye... "Arjun declares

Aai smile at him & look outside & shocked...

Its same Temple where Chit Owner wants to meet her... she suddenely feels all her strenght gone...


and song starts on Radio..


" Takdeer se... takdeer se bigdi hue takdeer bana de...

apne pe bharosa hai to ek daav laga de,,,

laga de daav laga de... "



" Hey bhagwan kaise Paiksha ( exam ) le rahe app hamari... ek taraf vo ajnabi... aur dusri taraf mera apna beta... kya karu???? " Aai thinks & look at Arjun...


He take her to Mandir... both take Darshan & also surrounded by Bodyguards...

Krishna is smaile at her & Aai look at him with hopeful eyes...

" Kisi ka saath du kanha ... kya karu???? dono mere apne per aaj meri beti ko meri jarurat hogi... kya vo Chit usne to nahi bheji??? meri madad karo ... " she plaeds him thrugh mind...


and slwoly takes her steps backword... she turn & bodygurad look at her... but she shows him her hand... he try to speak but she already starts to walk.. she come outside from darshan area & stands near Shoe rack...


" Hum yaha aa to gaye... per vo kon hai , kaha milega, ye to hum... " she thinks suddenely one boy comes & give her something... she sees one small paper...


" Pata tha , aap aayegi jarur...

Madir ke peeche vo ghana jungle hai vaha aana... "


aur ha ye chit phad kar dustbin mai phek dena... "



she reads it & look everywhere , but she does not find him / her... she torn chit in small pieces & throw them is dustbin...

She take her pallu on her head so nobody reconzise her .. she starts to walk towards Jungle..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Arjun's Aai is confused...😃😃😃
Riya's best friend...😆😆😆
Gulab dekhne se baby khoobsurat hoga...😲😲😲
Arjun ko namkin chai mili...😆😆😆
Aai missing Aisha...
Arjun bhi Aai ko mandir le aaya...😃😃😃
Aai jungle mein chali bhi gayi...😃😃😃

Continue soon...
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She entered in deep... & stop looking here & there...


" Mai jaanta tha... aap jaruru aayegi Mrs.Rawte... " one cold but deep husky voice says .


Aai look at every where & found someone stand little away from her , she can't see his face , because his back only visible... he wears dark black colour Hoodie.. that totally cover him... Backside of his Hoddie ther is pic of flying dragon...


" Kooon ho tum?" Aai says , she knows she scares , but have to to strong...


" Itni jaldi kyu hai , meri pechan ki? vaise aapki beti ke bare mai nahi jaana aapko?" he ask


" Kya hua Aashu ko?" vo thik , vo... vo... use kuch... "



" Relax... vo bilkul thik hai... per bahut Pativrata hai... ekdum achi bhali ladki... aur ha tabiyat bhi theek hai uski.. " he says & rest his hand on Tree branch..


Aai sees his Dimond Ring...



" Ye to bahut mehngi hogi.. matlab ye koi aam aamdami nahi.." Aai thinks..


" Per ye baat karne ke liye to tum mujhe call kar sakte the , ya milne bhi aa sakte the ... " Aai ask.


she hears he sighs ...


" Acha... aur kya gurantee ki aapke Pati , aur Aapka Arjun mujhe jinda chod dete???????? ( with that he turn to face her & removes his Hoddie cap ) Sasuma... "




" Sameerrr... tum???? agar ye tumhari koi chaal hai na... to sochna bhi mat... " Aai warns him & start to go backwards as sameer comes to her...


" Dariye mat... mai sach mai kuch nahi karunga... " he says with serious tone & shows his empty hands...


Aai knows she can't believe him.. He is Man , that destroy their happiness , ther world... her daughter loves him very much... she leave everything behind for him.. she dn't know how she is now?? is she still alive????? she knows her daughter did grave mistake by marrying Man who only make fun of her love , her emotions...


" mai jaanta hue , aap kya soch rahi hai?"

Aai look at him suspiciously..


" Aap baithye yaha... " he shows her big stone... she reclutant , but her request... so she finally seats down..


" Aap yahi soch rahi hai na , ki mai hi hue jisne aapko aapki beti se dur kiya... ha vo sach nahi jaanti... is chahre ke peeche ka sach... ek aisa sach jise mai khud abhi samaj paaya ... is zooth chahre ke peeche ek aisa inssan ka chehera hai vo aapki beti se pyar karta hai... itna pyar ... ( he sighs ) vo khud nahi jaata..."


" yakken kar lu is baat per?" Aai scarsctiaclly ask..


Sameer smiles faintly... " Bharosa karna ya na karna... ye aap per hai... lekin... aaj Riya ko jab khush dekht hue tab ehsaas hota hai , ki maine kya kiya... Riya sach jaan kar bhi Arjun ko apna sakti hai , aur aap bhi sab kuch jaan kar use apna rahi hai, uske is halat mai bhi... uska dhyan rakh rahi hai... "


Sameer smiles himself...


" Jab Baap itna bada ho , paisa wala ho,,, to ek bate aur kya kar sakta hai????? khaas kuch nhai.. bas ladkiya patana , aisa karna aur baap ke paise uda dena... aur phir use pata chalta hai ki uske Bap ka ek dushman hai... aur uska baap use aage nahi jaa pa raha... phir... us ladke aur uske baap ne.. mil kar kuch challe kheli... uski kamjori pata lagayi... uske ghar mai sab se kamjor ek hi kadi thi... .. bas use todna tha... uski beti... hmmm. us ladke uske saath pyar ka naatak kiya... aur bhagha kar badi hi aaram se shadi bhi karli... ..

us ladke sirf itna pata tha ki uske baap ko kisi bhi taraf vo mukam , vo jagah chayie... aur us vo dilani hai... bas... shayhd tab tak vo ladki,,, ek khlino thi us ke liye... jab chahe vo usper pyar barsata , jab chahe use zkham deta... .. per dhire dhire sab... badal gya... nahi soacha tha ... vo hone laga... itna kuchhone ki baad bhi vo ladki uske saath rahi , uska pyar , us aldke ko badalne laga... use ye ehsaas diane laga ki duniya mai aur kuch bhi jiski vo gulami kar sakta hai... " PYAAR"


aaj vo khud nahi jaanta hi us ladki se kab se pyar karne laga , aur kyu karne laga,,, uske hassi , yahi ek vaha hai ,, us ladki ki jeevan ki... uske aasu use bhi takleef deti hai... use bhi dukh dete hai... pata nahi kyu... us paagal, aawara ladke ke saath bhagwan ne us ladki ko kyu bandh diya... takleef hoti hai... ( he sighs & wips his eyes ) takleef hoti jab us ladki ka pyar mehsus hota hai... Dil per patthar barsate hai , tab mere chillane ke baad bhi , mere itne dukh dene ke baad bhi... vo mujhse aakar ye bolti hai... " sab thik ho jayega Sameer , mai hue na... mai kuch galat nahi hone dungi... "


" Hummm , jiske saath itna galath ho raha hai , vo ladki khud mujhe dilasa deti hai... dar lagta hai ki jab use sach pata chalega... to kya vo... har ek koshish karta hue ki vo sach tak kabhi na pahunche... uska yahi ek zhooth uske liye khushi hai ,uski jine ke karan hai... "


sameer stops & takes long braeth & look at Mrs. rawte...


" Aai... shayhd ye kehne ka hque nahi hai mujhe... per bhi .. aaj vada karta hue aap se.. aapki beti ko aaj tak jo pyar mila , jo kushi mili... vo sirf ek banavat thi , dhokha tha... lkin ab use uska pyar , uska ehsaas jarur milega... jab Riya aur masa ko saath dekha... aur khaas kar ke Aashu ki baichani... tab ehsaas hua , ki kya khoya hai usne... " sameer says & look at Mrs. rawte...


" Vo kabhi kaehgi nahi.. uska darad kabhi uske face per nahi aayega... vo use kab chupa degi... ye to pata bhi nahi chalta ... akeli roti rehegi... per sab ke saamne ... sirf hasi hogi uske cahhre per... sirf hasi... "


Aai's eyes moist hearing this...

" Kya aap milna cahegi,,, meri patni se???? Meri Aashu se?" Samer ask in hopful tone...


" Ha... mujhe milna hai meri beti se... meri Nahi se bacchi se... " Aai says & wipe her eyes with her pallu...


" Ab hamhe chalna chayie... andhera ho raha hai... "


Aai look at surroundings...


" Mai aapko bahar tak pahuncha deta hue.. " sameer says & walk with her towards Entrance of Jungle...


Suudenely Aai's leg slips & she fell. sameer immeadtly held her & hold her by shoulders...


" Aap thik to hai na?"

" Ha , bas Dr. ke paas jana hoga... "

" Hmm " sameer reply...finally they come outside ...

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Aai try to leave his hand... but she can't...


"Plz... aap nahi chal pa rahi..."


" Agar usne dekh liya to?"


" hmmm , to... maar dega, aur kya?" Sameer says


" Per mai nhai chahti ki Mere Damaad ko koi kuch kahe"Aai says & sameer just look at her...


but what Aai fears , that happen exactly... he sees his Aai with him... the person he hates most... he wants to kill that person but can't , bcoz his sister happiness & his wife love attachd to that person... he immeadtly rush to them...


Both sees this... Aai immeadtly wishpers

" call karna mujhe aur bata dena, ki kaha milna hai... "


" Per aapka no... " Sameer absent mindedly says


" Jo mere ghar per mujhe Chit send kar sakta hai , kya vo ek Phone no nahi pata laga sakta?" Aai ask him & smile..




" Aaai " Arjun somehow controls his voice..


Sameer immeadtly laeve Aai ..

" Vo... gir gayi thi parikrama karte samay... shayhd moch ho... "

Arjun immeadtly hold his Aai by shoulders..


Sameer laeves from there wearing his hoodie... before anyone notice him...


" Aaai aap theek to hai? usne kuch???" Arjun worridly ask

" Mai theek hue... bas gir gayi thi... ghar chale Arjun? raat hone wali hai...aur tere Baba ghar aa sakte hai... "


" Ji.."


Arjun says & help her to walk..


Sameer retuens Home & goes to room... he hears some voices ...


He enters in his room & smiles happily...


" Bhavna... tum????? are Bhabhji... " he give morestrees on word bhabhiji...


" Shut up... U Rawdy Rathod... vaise hame shadi pe kyu nahi bulaya?"


Sameer comes & seat on Bed..

"Aap ko ko kya . maine to apne maa - Baap ko bhi nahi bulaya... "ans winks..


" Oh... "

Ayseha smile at this...


"vaise Aashu... " sameer saysbut Bhavna cuts him...


" Ammm Ashu... ha love & all that... per maine to suna tha ki inka naam Ayesha hai..." Bhavna says playfully...


" OH God...Bhanva tum abhi tak nahi badli... pata nhai mere us serious bhai ka kya hota hoga, kaise rehta hoga vo is Shaitan ladki ke saath... ?" sameer says with drama...


" Tumhe to mai... " Bhanva says with fake anger & gets up from her seat , sameer aslo get up & starts to run , he open door & bump on someone...


sameer look at him & hug him tightly...


Bhanva also stops ..


That person look at both .

Bhanva immeadtly staedies herself & give him sweet smile..

"Gatham... vo so gayi?" Bhavna ask


That person is none other than Gautham Rathod... a Multi Billonire & sameer's first cousin...

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Precap :


"Nonsense " She says

" Nonsense "

" Utter Nonsense " he says

" Utter Nonsense "


" Riya... " he warns


" Riya... "


Riya smile & kiss on Doll Cheeck...


" Kya karu Raam , mujhe buddha mil gaya... " she sings

" Kya karu Raam... " Doll abt to complete song but Riya removes her battery.


"I love You... " he says & pull her on him...

Ayesha just wipe her taers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Di it's wonderful update
Loved Riya's comments on Arjun
Wow conversation between Arjun's mother and Sam was emotional
It's superb
Loved Raisha
Precap seems interesting
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd Thanks for the pm di

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