Bound by Blood, ek Alag love-story.(KR+SS FF) *Updated Ch5* - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -spongy-


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okay this story really has something in it which just makes me to read more
it is really interesting
and in chapter 2 it just became more interesting
i am loving the way you write this story.

well sharon was classic.
now i see the complicated character of hers. That is why she is your fav. character and i see the REASON as well. 😉

well desperately waiting for chapter 3
thanks for the PM
update soon and do PM me

PS. loving this story a lot 😳



thanks a LOT girl..🤗
am soo glad u understood Sharon, yes she is complicated, and she is also straight forward..😊
thanks a lot for the comment, I keep waiting for these kind of comments..😆😆 I'll try to update soon..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

Awesome update
But wht happening samjh mai hi nahi aaya
Swayam kriya ka gaurdiam
Why sharon want to take kriya with her
Why the both fighting
Number of q but answer only u
Kriya ne kya kiya khud ko punish kar diya
Update fast next
Confusion tho clear hoga
Upda te fast



haha😆😆 next chappy mein I'll try to clear most of the confusion, bt well, ab confusion hain, tabhi to aap log pad rahe hain..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the chapter was good... something has happen bad in past...
i think swayan and sharon both know this... and hope see all this rey is tense...
do continue soon and pm me



thnx a LOT..😆 I'll try to update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Read the chapters and they are just amazing.👍🏼👍🏼
Awesome story.👏
Update soon and pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Arsha_Arshi

Read the chapters and they are just amazing.👍🏼👍🏼

Awesome story.👏
Update soon and pm me.



will surely do..😊thank u for liking it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
hey nice ff .. but m having a feeling its inspired by vampire academy .. if its so ..
dont put swayam in role of dimitri .. but gr8 story as far ..
plz update soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: shivangi1112

hey nice ff .. but m having a feeling its inspired by vampire academy .. if its so ..

dont put swayam in role of dimitri .. but gr8 story as far ..
plz update soon ..



wow, are you a VA fan..?? scrap me, I have a loads to talk about..
yes, it is inspired by VA, but not entirely, NOT AT ALL... and Swayam will Not be like Dimitri, Swayam is Swayam... honestly, I don't like Dimitri much, so there's NO WAY am gonna make My Swayam like him..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesome update
baad mein lamba update dunge
exmss hai ab
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You know when I started reading this fic pehle pehle I didn't catch as many things in the prologue as I did this time around. I read all three chapters back to back and yes! I love your Sharon and Swayam. I'm actually surprised I say this because I was convinced I would love the betrayed!broken!Rey lekin by the end of the two chapters, I'm sooo hooked onto your Sharon-Swayam. I love how you have shown them to be equal on all accounts. I love how she has played on his mind throughout and he knows her so well. And as for Sharon, I love the anger and aggression that comes from being misunderstood or rather never understood. And the whole equation of right and wrong and how nothing is ever black or white but shades of grey. That was awesome.

As for Kriya, I'm actually shocked with the way you have portrayed her. But I can feel her issues, her self loathing coming through but yet I'm still shocked that she would do something like this but I love the way she is shaping up.

Overall, I really enjoyed it and yes, I have a special place in my heart for jeaous!Rey.

Please update soon! I promise to read sooner this time. Heh. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

You know when I started reading this fic pehle pehle I didn't catch as many things in the prologue as I did this time around. I read all three chapters back to back and yes! I love your Sharon and Swayam. I'm actually surprised I say this because I was convinced I would love the betrayed!broken!Rey lekin by the end of the two chapters, I'm sooo hooked onto your Sharon-Swayam. I love how you have shown them to be equal on all accounts. I love how she has played on his mind throughout and he knows her so well. And as for Sharon, I love the anger and aggression that comes from being misunderstood or rather never understood. And the whole equation of right and wrong and how nothing is ever black or white but shades of grey. That was awesome.


As for Kriya, I'm actually shocked with the way you have portrayed her. But I can feel her issues, her self loathing coming through but yet I'm still shocked that she would do something like this but I love the way she is shaping up.

Overall, I really enjoyed it and yes, I have a special place in my heart for jeaous!Rey.

Please update soon! I promise to read sooner this time. Heh. 😉



awww thank youuu for the lovely comment.. yaar I always look forward to your comments, u write it so well and always give me the "exactly, that's what I wanted to say"-wala feeling, love you for that re..😆
am happy that the never-understood Sharon is conveyed...😊 and trust me, Kriya is pretty messed up here..😆
aaand Rey's jealousy, yush, am gonna work on that A LOT..hehe😆😆

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