Arakshi: EK DOOJAY KAY LIYAY update part 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6

They reach arjun house...big iron gate open...security scanner on...when they drive under that buzzer start beeping...they stop...while security guard come and see them he allow to enter and stop that buzzer...this buzzer design specially catch weapon...today, that buzzer catch their guns and beep...arjun move his vehicle to the garage and park...both see each other and get down...they instruct Ayesha to come with that girl after 10 minutes...she nodded and they go inside.

Maa look both coming and happy...Mrs Rawte is a middle age woman...she maintain herself very beautifully...she is well educated lady but prefer to be house wife...both come near her and touch feet...she bless them and peak both forehead...

Maa: kitnay din baad shakal dekhai hay...sameer...timhari maa say sikayat karoon gi...yahaan rahtay huay bhi...aatay nahi ho.

Sameer: maa, aap jaanti toh hain kay kitna busy rahta hoon...magar aap ko phone toh roz karta hoon.

Maa: haan sirf phone karkay awaaz sunna di...aur farz pura ho gaya...she become angry.

Sameer: accha maaf kar dain ab nahi karoon ga...(he hold ear lobes) aur aata rahoon ga...magar aaj toh main khas taor say ek kaam say aaya hoon...(he hold maa hands and emotionally said)...maa sirf aap hi meri problem solve kar sakti hain (arjun hide his smile to see sameer acting)

Maa get emotional and said: haan haan bolo baita...main nay tum main aur arjun main kabhi bhi farq nahi rakha...bolo kiya baat hay.

Sameer tell her whole story with request to give her shelter...but maa become angry...she stands in anger and said.

Maa: tum dono pagal ho gay ho...ek jawan larki ki zimaidaari kiya hoti hay kuch pata bhi hay...nahi...bas aa gay kay ghar main rakh lo...(she start scolding both in anger) her sentence cut when sweet voice comes...aap itna naraz kyun ho rahi hain?

Maa, sameer and arjun turn that side...see that girl standing on the door...ayesha is behind her...maa freeze on her steps and keep looking her...then taking steps towards her...she stop just front of her...that girl bend down and touch her feet...maa hand stop on her head...while she back and stand...

maa raise her hand and cup her face...peak on her forehead and said: kahaan chupa kay rakha tha iss chand kay tukray ko.

Arjun and sameer got shock...they look each other...don't understand that just a second ago maa angry on them...taking one unknown girl in her house and suddenly she change the track...

Maa hold her hand and make her walk inside the room...then she call one maid...maid comes...maa instruct her to go and ready one room for her...a tons of load comes down on both ACPs head...they sit in relax...and sigh relief.

Maa make her sit and ask Ayesha to sit as well...ayesha say thanks and briefly tell maa that girl condition...which make maa eyes wet...she hug that girl again...said: aaj say yeh meri baiti hay...(she look that girl...cup her face and said) tum mujhay maa kaho gi na...

Girl look maa eyes which is pouring love and care...showing hope...she smile with open her heart...hold maa hand and nodded positively...said: ji maa...I am calling you maa...hearing this maa is very happy.

Girl: aap in ko daant kyun rahi thi...aap ko pata hay gussa karnay say...insaan ka dimaagh kamzoor ho jaata hay...aur khoon ka pressure barh jaata hay...jiss ki wajah say dil par bura asar parta hay...(she said innocent way)

Ayesha: tum ko kiss nay bataya...

Girl: papa nay...woh kahtay hain...pari, agar gussa karoo gi toh phir top nahi karoo gi...pata hay didi...iss liyay main gussa nahi karti...smile karti hoon...aur har saal top karti hoon.

Ayesha in hurry...toh tumahar naam pari hay...

Girl: nahi, woh toh papa mujhay pari kah kar bulatay hain...

Ayesha: toh phir tumhara naam kiya hay...

Girl: mera naam kiya hay...she start thinking and put her hand on her head...shakes her head in confusion...repeating...mera naam...mera naam kiya hay.

Tumhara naam kuch bhi ho...magar hum toh tum ko pari hi kahain gay...right...this voice comes from door side...all see Mr Rawte comes inside...he come and place his hand on her head...girl look him enquiringly and step back...

Mr Rawte (understand her state and introduce him) I am Mr Suryakant Rawte...his sentence cut by that girl...one of top business man in India...

All see her in shock...even mr and mrs rawte...

Ayesha the first one who gather herself and said: tum ko kaissay pata.

Girl: papa kay sab say acchay dost...papa kahtay thay woh India kay top business man hain.

Mr Rawte: aur tumharay papa ka naam kiya hay. He asks instantly.

Girl: un ka naam...she confuse again...shake her head...her breathing fast...look here there...everyone's hope goes down...

Mr rawte: it's ok...you call me baba...because I am her husband(he pointed at maa)...if you call her maa...so technally I am your dad...what you said.

Girl think sometime then nodded and come forward...touch his feet...baba smile and caressing her hair...bless her...

Ayesha, sameer and arjun feel ton of loads come down from their shoulder...they all know that she is safe here...now, they have time to find out her whereabouts...all are lost their thought.

arjun snap and said: maa...what's for dinner?

Mr Rawte: haan bhai mujhay bhi bhook lag rahi hay...chalo khana khatay hain.

Mrs Rawte go inside to arrange dinner...while others chit chat...sameer briefly tell that girl situation to mr rawte...he look that innocent girl with sympathy...Soon, they start dinner...that girl a bit confuse and looking here there...

Ayesha: kiya hua pari...tum ko toh bohat bhook lag rahi thi...ab kaho na.

Pari: didi, iss ko kaissay kahtay hain...without fork and knife...she pointed at rice dish...

Maa: sorry baita...ek minute...she call her maid and ask her to bring...knife and fork...

Pari take those and said: thanks...

she holding accurately fork and knife in her hand and eat in decent way...they all observe her eating...after finishing rice she take one kabab...she eat that and soon her face become red...ayesha quickly fill the glass of water and give her...she drink water in one go...all hide their smile...ayesha stop her eating that kabab again...

Ayesha: if you can't bear chilli...leave it.

Pari: No, if I leave it...it's going in rubbish...which is not good...you know in this world how many people have nothing to eat? If we had many things to eat that we should have to thank our god and try not to waste that food... (Her innocent talk spread smile in everyone faces)

Ayesha: but it's chilli...pari cut her and said: it's ok, di, after eating this...I quickly drink water.

Maa: No, you no need to do this...give me here your kabab...I eat it...it's not going in waste (all stunned hear this because they well known her) maa feel gaze and said: haan, meri baiti hay...toh main iss ka jhoota kyun nahi kah sakti...lao mujhay do...ayesha give her pari plate and she eat her kabab.

Pari eat nothing but like dessert which is very delicious carrot halwa...she eat first a little bit...find sweet and tasty...she fill one bowl and eat...everyone happy to see her eating and enjoying.

After finish dinner, they come and set in sitting room...when arjun ask his mom to make tea for him...maa ask others...everyone want tea accept Mr Rawte...his want coffee...

Pari: can I come too...I make coffee for baba...while you make tea for others.

Maa: yeah sure, come with me...ayesha you also come baita...

Three female goes to kitchen and left behind men talking with their favourite subject politics...busy talking when coffee fragrance fill the room and pari serve coffee to Mr Rawte...

He sips and said: amazing...what a taste? I love it...did you make...he look pari and she nodded...baba take out his wallet and drag some money and give her...said: this your award...for making this wonderful coffee...and promise me...always make this for me...

she smile and promise but not raise her hand to take money...she is shy but after insist everyone she take money and say thanks to baba...by touching his feet...baba caressing her hair and bless him.

After that sameer and Ayesha ready to go...pari is sad looking Ayesha is going...ayesha sad too but anyhow she manage and say she will back soon to meet her...both hug each other and they gone...she is standing there looking their SUV for long...when feel one soft grip on her arms...maa look her...smile on her and make her walk with her.

Maa take her inside...showing her room...it's very big and beautiful room...

pari like it and said: thanks.

Maa: this is your own house...I am your mom...don't need to say thanks...she pat her cheeks softly...ab jao so jao...araam say...haan...mera room...tumharay right side par hay...aur arjun ka room tumharay left side par...agar koi bhi pareshani ho toh knock kar daina...utha daina mujhay...theek hay...she finish her instruction...peak her forehead and go back...while she go to bathroom fresh herself and buried under the blanket.

Arjun finishes his bad time chores and go to bed...he is reading book before go to sleep...this autobiography is very interesting...he haven't finish it...he is lost in reading that book...after sometime...he look at clock...it's nearly 12 o clock...he read for long time...close book and close side table lamp...he ready to sleep...close his eyes...suddenly, he hear voice and quickly open his eyes...thinking what kind of voice he just hear...he open side table lamp...get down from bed...and walk towards the voice.

Voice lead him to the terrace...he open the door and comes on terrace...terrace is empty...no sign of anyone...he about to turn when he hear again that voice...this time he catch the true direction of voice...its comes to next bedroom...two bedroom share one terrace...he goes to that side...he remember that is pari room...his mom allocated this to her.

He enter inside her room via terrace door which is partly open...she is sleeping...he look in the light of night bulb...she look so beautiful...but one thing amaze him...her cheeks are wet...tears rolling down...during sleeping...

she is restless...moving her head right left...struggling for breathing...she moving her hand try to push anything to her...murmuring...nahi maaro papa ko nahi maaro...didi ko chor do...didi ko haath nahi lagana...chor do...papa...she scream ...

arjun quickly move further and try to wake her up...he pat her shoulder and call her name in slow...pari...pari...

she open her eyes...look him once...she rush to hug him saying: please, save me...woh mujhay bhi maar daingay...mujhay marna nahi hay...papa ka wada pura karna hay...mujhay baccha lo...she keep pleading him...she try to hide in his arms...arjun confuse what can he do?

Automatically, his arms enveloping her...pull her against his body...he hides her in his arms...hold her tight...he feel her body relax under his...she quiet and drift to sleep soon...after some time...when he try parted...he take deep breath...as usual she clutches his shirt...he even can't move...he try to lay down her on bed...set him next to her...she still clutches his shirt...close her eyes...sleeping peacefully like aware of this fact that he is her protector...he is busy looking her...don't know when he slid on sleep...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

so sakshi came back from coma but have lost her memory

it seems arjun is smitten by her and sakshi feels save in his arms coz evrytime she is in afraid
she hides in his arms
sakshi going to live with arjun hmmm😉
thanks for pm 😊




in this story her character is simple
and innocent girl
who afraid of loud voice
love have own language
she feel solace in his arm😳
thanks dear liking my story😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
lvly part dear
w8 fr d net prt
give soon one part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely upd8 dear
pari was so sweet
mother father and daughter bonding will be sweet
frm this upd8 i guess some of the reasons for torturing is known
nice and a superb update
please pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Kea update dia
u ne 2 kammal kar dia
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awesome update. Waiting for MA to discover them together..😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Where do you come up with these stories???

Great job!!! Loving Pari and her sweetness.

Arjun's maa and baba are do kind and caring. So Sakshi is Mr. Rawte's friends daughter. Can't wait for that to get cleared.

Please continue!

Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Wonderful Part

Emotions very well portrayed.

Continue Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: keenu_kk

<font size="4">lvly part dear</font>

<font size="4">w8 fr d net prt</font>
<font size="4">give soon one part</font>




Thanks dear 😃

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