Arakshi: EK DOOJAY KAY LIYAY update part 18 - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
i had a blank expresion while reading it.
and every pain of sakshi was eaisly visible to us...
u write the pain which sakshi suffer...is so real that i shril...
poor sakshi she gets ready to pay the punishment of her sister's deeds...
arjun ji..ye tune kya kiya.??????
use felling share karni thi to bat bi kar sakta tha...ye alcohol...galat tha...
u know first time...i fell an angrines towards arjun...
pata nai ab age kya hoga..
poor sakshi...use pata bi nai aur kitni pareshani utani padegi...
i have tears in my eyes while writing this...
but the way u describe the emotions...weather it is pain,,,,love,,,sadness,,,happiness,,, aur anything else is beautifullyyy...
thanks for pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
1st of ol really really really sry 4 dis so vry l8 rply.. ws slytly bsy so ws unabl 2 read ur upd8s.. 2dy finally I gt d tym nd read ol d pndng prts at 1 go.. wel I hav jst 1 wrd 2 say.. MINDDBLOWINNGGG 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
D wy arjun tuk cre of sakshi in d jungle, his tying d hanky arnd hr wound, takng d bngle piece out of hr hand wid his mouth, savng hr 4m d goons ws ol vry beautifully writn nd also vry romantic 😳..
luvd d prt whre u'v mentnd abt sakshi's likng 2wrds arjun 😳😳 nd dt she dint tel him abt hr tirdnes so as nt 2 bothr him in d tnse situatn.. so thoughtful of hr!!!!
sakshi is way 2u inocnt.. hr hrt is really vry pure nd dis is wat I luv abt hr charctr
THEY KISSED 😲😲😲😲 hayyyeee maar hi dalaa!!!!!!☺️
finally arjun-sakshi wre safe 🥳 nd wo ministr 😡😡 khair.. aakhir to pkda hi gya
luvd sakhi's bnding wid evry1.. nd its really swt of hr 2 tke cre of arjun's small-2 needs ❤️
arjun's mind view ws beautifully xplained.. wel it's also nt easy 4 his prt 2 accept evrythng so easily..
Sameer's mom is really vry naughty 😉 bechaari sakshi ko kitna tng krti hai 🤣🤣
receptn's descriptn ws awsme 😊 arjun to yaha bhi lattu ho gya apni patni pe.. are koi to rok lo 😆😆 bechaara arjun hamesha uspe flt ho jata hai 🤪🤪🤪
un auntiyon ka to khun krne ka mann krr rha hai.. hw dare dey 😡😡😡😡 unhi k wjh se arjun ka achha khasa dimaag khrb ho gyi nd hi gt drnk..
wel usk baad ur 18+ wala upd8 ws vry gud 😳 ☺️ waise 🤬 bhi likhti to bhi sb ko chlta 😉😉
bt watevr it ws, ws really sad 4 sakshi 😭 she had 2 surf so mch dt 2 4 hr sistr's deeds.. acha hua mar gyi 😡
wel aur nhi pakaungi.. saare pndng upd8 ka feedback maine de diya.. hpe aftr reading dis lammbaaa wala comnt u'l 4giv me 😕
nd of crse hw cn I 4gt 2 thnk u 4 ur pms 😃
waitng eagrly 4 ur nxt upd8 nd arjun's reactn wen he'll cme bck in his senses😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Omg arjun hurt her soo bad ... Feel terrible for sakshi he practically raped her oh god... Hope he regrets what he did...
Nice update
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
No words 4 ths update dear evri thng is veri well n beautifully written either pain,love, sacrifise or revenge in simple: "love that both kills n heals"

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...


Ooo Teri...😲
Tussi chhaa gaye ho...
Kea baat hai... 👏
18+ dhamaka... ⭐️
Wonderful...
1st time & woh bhi etna classic m salute u dear...
And 🤬 q kea...? 😡
&
Lungi dance, lungi dance
"Ajj mai upar asmaan hai neechay"
Mere liye 18+ alag se wow 🤗
love you dear ❤️
M w8tng 4 . . . . 😉



Accha 18+ nahi laga 😭
Oh god you need me to write more 😲 😲
I try to use the situation in decent sentence
And decent way with full effort to explain both mental condition
Ok just wait aissa 18+ doon gi Kay 😡 😡
You just thinking is it really rehana written that
Pakka promise 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

ok thank u but yeh 2 batao 😭
censor kya kea? 😡



You don't feel that I censored 😲
OMG what I have done?
I think I did well
Sorry yaar
Can you guess what I might censored?
Just for curiosity when I write specially for you
Than you understand 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shymali

sakshi ke bhare mein sooch kar bura lag raha hai😭

Arjun ne galath kiya sakshi ke saath
but nicely wriiten emotions of sakshi was well sketched...



Thanks dear
Iss liyay toh sharab insaan ki dushman hay
Acchay bhalay aadmi ka dimaagh kharab kar daitti hay
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25



Accha 18+ nahi laga 😭
Oh god you need me to write more 😲 😲
I try to use the situation in decent sentence
And decent way with full effort to explain both mental condition
Ok just wait aissa 18+ doon gi Kay 😡 😡
You just thinking is it really rehana written that
Pakka promise 😃

hahahahaha mai ne kab bola 18+ ni hai haan 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angle1shanu

i had a blank expresion while reading it.

and every pain of sakshi was eaisly visible to us...
u write the pain which sakshi suffer...is so real that i shril...
poor sakshi she gets ready to pay the punishment of her sister's deeds...
arjun ji..ye tune kya kiya.??????
use felling share karni thi to bat bi kar sakta tha...ye alcohol...galat tha...
u know first time...i fell an angrines towards arjun...
pata nai ab age kya hoga..
poor sakshi...use pata bi nai aur kitni pareshani utani padegi...
i have tears in my eyes while writing this...
but the way u describe the emotions...weather it is pain,,,,love,,,sadness,,,happiness,,, aur anything else is beautifullyyy...
thanks for pm...
continue soon...




I really appreciate your comments
I really thinks twice may be I go through this or not
But this is my story demand if I show just lovely SR it's ruin my story theme
Hey but you didn't comments of bedroom setting and decoration
You don't like it
Thanks dear for just un amazing comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

No words 4 ths update dear evri thng is veri well n beautifully written either pain,love, sacrifise or revenge in simple: "love that both kills n heals"



Thanks dear
So are you ready to update your
Look I update my one without delay
Where's your one?
Do it today

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