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Posted: 11 years ago
Revenge...

Revenge on him her goal ultimately
Her heart deceives her unknowingly ?
Emotions a pretence she thinks to be
But care for him she does unknowingly

His past to us is now revealed slowly
Love, respect and proud of his family
Every obstacle crossing successfully
Creating an empire very determinedly

The love of his life was his Khushi
To have her in his life he felt lucky
By his side she stood in harmony
Her silence he understood perfectly

Her childhood spent unhappily
By her mother abused physically
The proof etched in his memory
Causing him to feel rage & fury

Fasted for his life she did ironically
A wife she would be very dutifully
His strength he claimed her to be
Little did he know the harsh reality

She was deceiving his love sadly
Destroying him very slowly slowly
To appease her Guru trying was she
To take revenge started her journey

Who all were a part of this treachery
Someone introduced to us already
The aura of suspense and mystery
Zee, I am mesmerised seriously


Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Revenge...

Revenge on him her goal ultimately
Her heart deceives her unknowingly ?
Emotions a pretence she thinks to be
But care for him she does unknowingly

His past to us is now revealed slowly
Love, respect and proud of his family
Every obstacle crossing successfully
Creating an empire very determinedly

The love of his life was his Khushi
To have her in his life he felt lucky
By his side she stood in harmony
Her silence he understood perfectly

Her childhood spent unhappily
By her mother abused physically
The proof etched in his memory
Causing him to feel rage & fury

Fasted for his life she did ironically
A wife she would be very dutifully
His strength he claimed her to be
Little did he know the harsh reality

She was deceiving his love sadly
Destroying him very slowly slowly
To appease her Guru trying was she
To take revenge started her journey



there couldn't have been a better poetic summary!
its SUPERB VS...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
What the eyes see is not the truth always
What the ears hear may not be real ways
Is khushi just a brainwashed tool is a doubt that is hazy
Can't wait to see the story unraveling by our dear lazy !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

What the eyes see is not the truth always

What the ears hear may not be real ways
Is khushi just a brainwashed tool is a doubt that is hazy
Can't wait to see the story unraveling by our dear lazy !!



that was indeed beautifully worded... vijji👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uthara dii nd Vandana dii 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope Kushi cry tears of blood before she and Arnav reconcile.. Revenge is never the answer no matter what the crime was.
Love your story a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update...

I thought that Arnav would choose to go to khushi but I forgot he is ASR too... Loved how he dealt with both the situation... His presence was needed at both the places and he didn't leave one for other...

But why is khushi doing all this?? She loves Arnav but still she is destroying him... There must be a big reason behind this...

Feeling bad for khushi for what Garima has done with her... She is craving for her mother love but at the same time deceiving Arnav's love...We don't know what we have until we lost it and I just hope Khushi realize it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Revenge...

Revenge on him her goal ultimately
Her heart deceives her unknowingly ?
Emotions a pretence she thinks to be
But care for him she does unknowingly

His past to us is now revealed slowly
Love, respect and proud of his family
Every obstacle crossing successfully
Creating an empire very determinedly

The love of his life was his Khushi
To have her in his life he felt lucky
By his side she stood in harmony
Her silence he understood perfectly

Her childhood spent unhappily
By her mother abused physically
The proof etched in his memory
Causing him to feel rage & fury

Fasted for his life she did ironically
A wife she would be very dutifully
His strength he claimed her to be
Little did he know the harsh reality

She was deceiving his love sadly
Destroying him very slowly slowly
To appease her Guru trying was she
To take revenge started her journey

Who all were a part of this treachery
Someone introduced to us already
The aura of suspense and mystery
Zee, I am mesmerised seriously




Vandana you've a knack for writing perfect poems.
You cover all the aspects and emotions with your words. 😊
The revenge, deceit, Arnav's hard work regarding the empire he has created over the time, his love for Khushi and her ignoring her feelings as pretense, abuse, guru - everything. How do you write so beautifully?!! Awesome 👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
ahaan...
its getting more n more interesting...
can't wait for the next part...
eagerly waiting to know the reason behind khushi's revenge...
n
so sorry, couldn't comment earlier...
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting.. who is her guru? waiting ,

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