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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
AWESOME 👏👏
SUPERB OS 👏👍🏼
LOVED IT 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hmmm so... 1st OS haaan... Good

Did I like it?? ummm naaahhh

Did I hate it?? no way in hell...

THEN??

I SIMPLY ADORED IT!!!

this was a lots of Goosebumps wala update...

it was cute, it was cuddly, it was ofcourse romanitc, it was emotional, it was engaging, it was lovable, it was EVERYTHING it takes for it to become a superb OS...

Lovely... i think u shud try ur hands on these light hearted OS/TS/SS more often..

oh just off the records, I have just started watching Miley Jab Hum Tum.. and learned a term.. Januable.. so this is for u sweetheart.. U r truly Januable mmuuuaaahhh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome OS dear...
so lovely and romantic one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
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Though the OS is set in the future it made me recall those days when the Laad Governor was busy masking his love but his eyes said it all and his smirk was reserved for Khushi only. It reminded me of a Sanka Devi who was busy masking her love but her eyes said it all and he was the only reason for the cute, confused frown on her face... Woh di the jab ArHi roz tv par aate theee... Sigh...

The kamarband is as special to them as it is to us ☺️. What a sexy gift by a sexy husband to his sexy wife who only expects some awesome sex as gift! 😉

But the gift Khushi gave him?! They are pregnant!!! 🥳 Priceless! Kaash yeh show main dekhne ko milta! ArHi pregnant and anticipating a child with love... Par humein miley Sheetal aur Aarav! 😡

Koi nahi... this OS more than made up 👍🏼

You write very well. Seriously ⭐️

PS: Happy New Year to you 😊

PPS: Why didnt you start the thread on the IPK forum? That way you would have gotten more readers. Aur waise bhi once it would reach 15 pgs it would automatically get moved to the FF forum...

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
First OS? Are you sure? Just check that you haven't written many such brilliant pieces and tucked them somewhere and shared only this one with us?


This one was so creative. It had Khushi's self talking, Arnav's ever-ending work, Khushi's sankiness, Arnav's brazenness, Arnav's passion, Khushi's shyness, Arnav's naughty and suggestive gift, Khushi's priceless and bonding gift...


You so seamlessly took us from New Year's to Consummation and so creatively *claps*


And I wasn't reading an OS right now. I was watching IPK of 31st Dec 2013 (I know our show ended in Nov, 2013 but if the show was on air, I would want THIS to be an episode for the same)


Words fall short, seriously. Its too good, Please write some more and give me the ArHi that was snatched away from us by several sources :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awww dat was ur first os
I cant believe it
It was flawless
It was super se uper
Very well writend
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awww! So cute! :)

Happy New Year to you :)


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: glamourbird

Aaawww... so cute!!😳😳😳

Loved the OS!! You write awesome OS just like ur fanfic!👏

Arnav & Khushi are just adorable!😳😳 You brought back memories from last new Years Eve!😉😉Very well written!!

Happy New Year!😃😃


Thank you for your comment! :) I was missing the show a lot around December so decided to write my first OS ever...glad that you liked it. :)

Originally posted by: suwin

lovely OS...
thank you...


Thank you!

Originally posted by: dumas

Loved the os so cute loved how she was missing him and talking to his picture loved how she told him he was going to be a dad loved the os beautifully done so cute thanks of the pm loved the os .


Thank you Dumas! :D I wanted to relive Khushi's craziness! hehe...and I really wish they'd ended the show with the news of a little baby Raizada on the way but since they didnt...I decided to include it in the FF.

Originally posted by: Smrikta992

Awww..
I cnt tel u hw swt, cute nd beautiful it is..
I just fell in love with this os..
U brought back their memory..
Happy new year..


Thank you so much Smritika! :) I tried my best to re-create the ArHi as close to the original show as possible...😳

Originally posted by: shruti46

oh it was beautiful..

amazing memories of new year..
this year turned more memorable ..

happy new year


Thank you so much! Here's to wishing that we have another show with the same cast soon!😉

Originally posted by: manikka

tht was soo sweet...


Thank you!


Thanks!

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201

thanx for dis gift ...

it was awesome


Thank you for reading and commenting. :)


Thanks!

Originally posted by: varsha2KD




whoa... beautiful OS...

loved it 😃


Thank you!


Thanks!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: jules25

wow!! loved it! i love ur imagination...even this short os kind of gave us a closure to d serial.

loved it


Thank you Jules! I guess it was my own way of getting closure on the serial..we never got the news of a baby Raizada on board in the show! it pissed me off..lol.

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

adorable os

loved it
thanks for the pm


Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Thanks!

Originally posted by: anu2108

its soo cute

and happy new year u too


Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: henamani

loved their little exchange. its OS like these that make me wish we had seen this on screen


Thank you! yeah, I wished that they had squeezed in more ArHi moments and tied loose ends instead of the Miss India track but oh well...when do the CVs do what the viewers want??😆


Thank you!

Originally posted by: niya55

Such a cute os.

Loved every bit of it.
Do write more.


Thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: skmr.bs

Wishing you a very Happy New Year !!!

Awww that was so sweet. I loved it.


Thank you honey!


Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

What a sweet New Years OS! Lovely :)


Thank you!

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Nice one thanx for pm happy new year


Thank you! :)


Thanks! :)


Thanks!

Originally posted by: badfaith4u

😊😛😉😃😆😳👏

very awesome and sweet story


Thank you so much. :)

Originally posted by: Swaran13

Amazing os :)

Happy new year


Thanks!

Originally posted by: JRia

Nice one Katie.. Happy New Year..

Kash serial mein aisa hi end hota


Thanks Ria! I know..kaash serial ke end mein Baby Raizada ki news milti...

Originally posted by: nnhk

this was so cute, especially when she send HP away so that she doesnt see his face , hahaha!

Happy New Year


Thank you! Haha..yeah, that's a Khushi thing to do innit?😉

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Awww this was such a sweet OS


Thank you! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
CONGRATS for winning OS of the week. 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Congratulations :)



If our show had stayed on air beyond November, 2012 and we had got to witness ArHi celebrating their New Year's as a couple I wouldn't want to see anything played on screen on that night other than this OS.

IPK-ish! (the true and the actual one)

Thank you :)

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