SS: Ardent Desires - Thread 2 - LAST Part 12(24/01) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was amazing
loved it a lot
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... read all the parts from the start till now.
I'm hooked on this story.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely story, read all parts in one go ⭐️
The reason why Arnav broke the marriage was a mystery and you maintained it well. It was heartening to know the decisions made by Arnav were in Khushi's best interests and not a retaliation.
Anjali & NK planned it well to bring them together again 👏

Please update soon..hopefully no more MU's 😳😉

Cheers
K
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Posted: 11 years ago
i have read all the parts in a go and must say i am in love with the story ...too good,loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wondeful ss read it in one go
thoroughly enjoyed it guess did deserve to go through with all this drama to get back khushi
will be waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read entire thing last night. It's awesome! One misunderstanding took four years to settle it. Love the understanding Amjali and NK showed..
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Posted: 11 years ago
came across this Ff recently & loved it...pl update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sneak Peak of Part 11

He nibbed her shoulder blade leaving some serious red marks on it while her hands fisted handful of his shirt so tight to supress the pain that few shirt buttons broke and fell down. He smelled perfume at her neck which was still the same. She was a girl who always stuck to one thing. She hated changes and that included even her perfume brands. She felt extremely shy when he guided her hands to reach his belt. She opened it in one go while he continued licking the marks he gave on her shoulder. Her Night dress top was hanging loose in her arms just like an off shoulder dress and seemed like she would never be able to wear this top again in life. That worse was its condition. He made her walk back and take the walls support so that he would be a bit free enough in taking care of the rest. They panted for breathe and kept looking in his eyes as he moved his finger from her neck towards her Cleavage. He stopped right at the start of her mounds seeing her biting her lower lip with excitement. Her eyes questioned him why he stopped but seemed like he did that purposely. He gently leaned on her and whispered near her face.

Arnav: Joh main kahunga woh karogi ? (What I ask , will you do?)

She agreed with a Nod but not meeting his eyes as she was extremely shy at the moment.

Arnav: Darogi toh nahi? (Wont you get scared? )

That added more to her unsettled feelings. But she still nodded giving her approval and he held her hand tight in his. He moved her hand looking in her eyes towards his trousers and she had a slight idea on what he was planning to do. They never broke the eyelock of theirs because of these actions. The moment her fingers lingered on his hard form above his trousers, she pulled back her hand and feeling completely embarrassed she hugged him tight breathing abnormally as if she touched the most scariest muscle in this world.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read this SS.. Honestly, you are an awesome writer.
And about the sneak peek - it is SO hot..!! Do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very very very HOT Teaser😳☺️

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