FF: PAYBACK - Thread 2 - Part 14- Pg 127 (04/02) - Page 71

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Posted: 11 years ago
I was reading the heartbreaker and entrapment stories. In the wait of an update, thought to check your profile in case I missed anything. Here I find this FF. You are quite the story teller.
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update. i rread again.. please update sqoon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting update love the new care arnav is showing towards her anyways loved it and p zzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey dear...another great story...just finished all 14 parts...phew!!!! with a different concept...full of dramas...it just keeps us wanting for more and more...I can't blame only Arnav in this situation...and Khushi is getting effected the most...it is very interesting to see one daughter is making a mistake along with her father and other one is left to repent...which she choose it herself...she knows very well what will happen to her once she gave the child to Raizada...but she choose as she was left with any other option...she is not aware of the fact that she is married...now Prachi is back and that after losing her child for the second time...first time willing and second time God took it... I have no idea why Shashi was dead against Arnav...whereas his daughter is willingly living and sharing her life with him...and she aborts his baby without his knowledge.

But I love this Karan, who wants to be with her all the time, whereas he knows his family is against it...but as usual, stubborn Khushi is not allowing him to think wise...he wants to do anything for Khushi and her family. Shashi was in this business for a long time and he could have started his business from scratch...as he is doing now...why she needs to go to ASR for their business...

I know Arnav loves his family specially Anjali...because when she asked Khushi to leave their house and he will not say anything...he was very much there and not saying anything...but Khushi choose to stay there after talking to Prachi and know the truth...but why are they not stopping Arnav to do all this...why nani is not interfering in his decisions. I loved the party scene where he told everybody that they are married and she is his wife and feeling sorry for Karan...I have few question...how he will raise his child without a mother...what values he will teach the child...I don't know how Khushi will forgive him for all his deeds...and will really feel bad if you separate them...I am confusing you...haan na...waiting for the next update. Please do send me the PM😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read both threads in full
Love the ff
Please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
So in thread 2 Arnav is slowly melting and Khushi is a fire ball lol what a change. What ever khushi said about her was correct her life is a total mess she cannot think straight.
Coming to Prachi I dont think she really loved Arnav because if she does then she would have spoke to Arnav before aborting the kid. Coming to Shashi Gupta to some extent he was correct in asking his daughter to abort the kid but just for once he would have went to Arnav's house and discussed it with Arnav and his family before aborting a kid.

For me Abortion is equal to a murder so I will never support Prachi and Shashi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
u'r outstanding yar ...very nice.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
even though me not regular reader

you are my favorite writer

loved your works

and it also
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing parts i loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing dear i really loved this ff dear thread 2 is amazing...

no wrds to explain dear...

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