|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series #2 (Part 41: pg 144, pms ltr) - Page 71

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome chappy...
loved loved it.
rey nd kriya both having fun of their life...
bt new entry...
ab ye kon hai...
plaese kr k beech n aaye...
hope for the best...
update soon next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nycee chappy manu... 😊

lol.. poor kriya... this hickey is a big headache for her... 😛

rofl .. I thought sharon ko pata chal jayega... kafi smart h vo ... 😉

good good .. rey deserves it... 🤣

who's this lady... kahin payal zinda to nhi ho gyi 😳 😵
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update plz plz plz...and ya plz include kriyaansh moments in next chappy too
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last 3 updates together
they were seriously amazing
love rey n kriaseach n every scene
who was that ladi?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update update update update update update update update update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so sorry for the delay. I particularly have no reason for the delay, just my laziness. Anyways here's the next installment. And let me warn you before it's short!


Part 38:


"Kriya where is my blue tie?" Rey yelled from upstairs.


"Mommy where are my shoes?" Kaira yelled from her room.


"Uggh, for lord's sake I am a human being and not a robot. Will you both stop shouting?" Kria replied climbing the stairs.


"Sorry." Both of them yelled together. She first proceeded to Kaira's room. After handing all the necessities to the child she advanced towards her room where Rey was waiting for her.


"I can't find my tie and wallet." Rey said as soon as he saw Kria approaching him. Giving him a look she handed him his tie and wallet.


"Someone looks grumpy. May I know the reason behind this grumpy mood?" He asked pinching her nose. She simply smacked away his hand and turned around to leave. He caught her wrist inorder to stop her.


"Kriya what's wrong?" He asked.


"Nothing, just the usual stuff."


"I'm all ears." He replied.


"It's Bua Dadi. I don't understand why does she dislike me? I try new ways to impress her but she finds a fault everytime though it might be a minute one. Am I not good enough to be a wife and a mother?"


"You should stop thinking too much. Bua Dadi doesnot dislike you. It's just that she's very much attached to Payal and finds it difficult to accept you. And dare not you think that you aren't a good wife and a mother. I don't think anyone can handle things like you do. All you need to do is keep trying and I'm sure Bua Dadi will definitely accept you like all of us did."


"Thanks Rey. I guess I needed this talk."


"Anytime." Saying this he continued to do his work.


"Rey." She called him again.


"Yeah?"


She stared at him for a moment before replying "umm...nothing." Giving her a confused look he left the room. She exhaled a deep sigh and sat on the bed. She really wanted to clarify things but was scared to do so. She didn't want him to think that she was doubting him. But she couldn't take it out of her mind as well.


After ending the phone call Kriya bumped into a lady.


"I'm sorry" She said but as her eyes fell beyond that lady they widened in shock. A girl around her age or maybe a year younger approached a man. As soon as she called his name that person turned around. That person was none other than Rey. And the thing that shocked her was that, that woman kissed Rey on his lips. It was a freaking lip lock which lasted for a minute before Rey pulled back. Tears threatened to fall from her eyes but she controlled them. Her body became numb for a few minutes. The last thing that she witnessed was that Rey had his arms linked with her and they walked in the opposite direction. That was when Sharon appeared there and brought her out of her trance.



This incident happened two days back and still Kriya didn't find the courage to question him. She didn't share it with anyone. It was eating her up from within. This incident flashed in her mind like a sinful song.



That woman is not Payal like most of you guys expected. I ain't another Ekta Kapoor to recreat the dead people 😛 Like and review please. PMS will be sebt later
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG..!! M sure there is some MU..

well loved the start of the update..😆

awsum update dii..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update n i hope that girl do not create ny kind of prblm in our kriyaansh's liff n don't u think its quite small but its okay but nxt time want a big one n update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was sweet
and misunderstandings😲😲
kriya not sharing it with anyone
waiting for the next part

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