Arhi OS - Winner takes it all

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OS - Winner takes it all

Khushi stirred sleepily and rolled over in bed, her eyelids snapping open when a familiar voice catapulted her into wakefulness. "You're finally awake. I've not been able to sleep a wink last night and you sleep like a log' Arnav greeted her dourly. "It's because I won the challenge; fair and square, Arnavji and I have no reason to lose sleep over anything," she told him sweetly, tossing the comforter aside and correcting her night clothes. She looked at him with a naughty smile to add "Don't underestimate the power of a common woman." Arnav eyed her with annoyance; she had won the silly challenge and had been gloating about it the previous evening. He had to acknowledge her achievement, he had set a difficult task and Khushi had completed the job with ease. She had got Manorama Mami to spend an entire day without a lick of makeup on her face and dressed in a pale pink chikankari chiffon saree, as per the challenge he had thrown at her. He had flung the dare at her and she had accepted it with enthusiasm. Arnav had been sure about two things; one, Khushi was bound to fail at the second and important factor in the challenge; Manorama Mami would give up food and gossip for a day but not her makeup and garish clothes.

ho maine to maanga tha, saheli jaisa saiyaan
ho maine to maanga tha, saheli jaisa saiyaan

mua palle pada, paheli jaisa saiyaan
paheli jaisa saiyaan, paheli jaisa saiyaan

Arnav sat on the bed with a thud, clearly displeased with the fact he had lost and to his wife; to add to his woes, she looked beautiful that morning and he could not touch her without her permission. The loser had agreed to do everything the winner demanded for a period of one week, the time starting from when the challenge was achieved. Arnav had grudgingly accepted the fact Khushi had won the challenge the previous night, as Khushi danced with gay abandon to some pathetic Hindi film song. Exhilarated with her win, she had told him, he had to listen to her and cater to her demands for the coming week. He was not allowed to touch her without her permission; Arnav had a sullen look when she had voiced her demands. He could not go without touching her for a week and he was sure the other demands would be just as difficult to meet. He wished his wife was the diamonds and expensive cars loving kind, that would be easier to deal with, instead she had weird ideas and weirder demands.

"What do you want me to do?" Arnav asked, irritated as Khushi as she pulled her hair into a tight bun. Crossing her arms over her chest and a smile which would put a pleased Cheshire cat to shame, she spoke "It is a Saturday and till next Friday, you are to do my bidding, agreed?" Arnav scowled at the rude reminder of his defeat, he bobbed his head in answer. "I will let you know, what I want you to do for me today and at the end of the day, I will share the plans for tomorrow" the proud princess explained. Arnav cocked an eyebrow at her attitude and before he could say anything, Khushi held out her hand "Arnavji, you agreed and you made a deal. You would know how important it is to honor a deal" batting her eyelids to drive home her point. "Fine, what is that you want me to do today?" he snapped as he watched Khushi get off the bed. With her nose up in the air, she announced "After breakfast, you take me shopping and we have lunch together. We then watch a movie" pausing to take in his horrified expression. "I want to watch an English movie, don't act elitist for no rhyme or reason" she admonished and grinned on seeing Arnav release a breath in relief.

bhoola bhoola sa rehta hai, jhoola jhoola sa rehta hai
nayi dilli main, bareli jaisa saiyaan
bareli jaisa saiyaan, bareli jaisa saiyaan
ho maine to maanga tha



Arnav got off the bed to get ready for the day which seemed daunting in parts only to be stopped by Khushi, "Wait there is more" she said with intended malice and burst out giggling when Arnav grimaced at her words. "After the movie, some more shopping and then dinner; would you be able to manage?" she threw at him and took a step back as he took a menacing step towards her. "Khushi Singh Raizada, don't act cocky because you won one challenge. I ask you to bring it on and see me meet every challenge you throw at me with lan" he said softly and smirked with satisfaction on seeing her gulp. "Now that we have that sorted, can we get on with the day? I have no issues doing nothing, this is a once in a lifetime opportunity for you and I am sure you want to maximize it. Would you shower and be ready in say fifteen minutes and then we can have breakfast with the family" saying that he left their room. Khushi glared at his retreating back, she was the one who had to do the ordering and he had to listen, it was clearly not happening and she had to fix it and fast.

saara din afwahon sa, udta firta hai gali gali
gali gali mora saiyaan, ho.. aake ghar angeethi sa
baatein karta hai jali jail, jala jala mora saiyaan

Arnav had dismissed the driver, wanting to take Khushi around that day; he may have been sore to the core having lost the dare but he was secretly happy to be ordered around by his wife. The only flipside being her unimaginative ways of getting back at him; had he won the challenge he would have whisked her off to a resort and kept her with him for the whole week. Unfortunately he had lost the bet and was doing something as silly as playing chauffer and porter to his wife. He sat down on the chair outside the trial room with a defeated sigh; this was the third hour after their lunch and the sixth store they had entered to shop. His wife seemed to have a list she was shopping to, picking up clothes like she was going off on a beach holiday. He wished for the nth time he had won the challenge, they would be shopping similarly but he would ensure she included stuff he wanted to see her in. He refused to acknowledge the fact; she was choosing clothes he approved of and did not react when he asked her to buy something scandalous. He heard the door to the trial room open to find her step out in a floral jumpsuit; he got off the chair to take a better look. "That is cute Khushi, but what is the point of buying something you will not wear?" he asked adjusting the twisted spaghetti strap on her left shoulder. He could understand lingerie and cotton dresses but not this jumpsuit, she had gotten over her salwar kameez and saree obsession but the thigh length jumpsuit was stretching things a bit.

Khushi grinned with pleasure "Fine, I will take this too and when we are done with the movie we can shop for footwear" saying that she walked into the trail room to change. Arnav let out a groan of frustration, he had no idea what was cooking in his wife's mind while she seemed to be working on a set agenda. He handed over their purchase to the shop assistant for billing and waited impatiently for Khushi to hand over the jumpsuit. She handed another bag containing things which he had not seen her try on and before he could question her, she said "Arnav go get the tickets for the movie, while I look into this" pushing him towards the store exit. Muttering under his breath, Arnav walked out to buy the tickets, having bought them, he turned to find her walking towards him, carrying the bags with a happy smile on her face. "Let us go leave these in the car before the movie starts" she chimed cheerfully forcing Arnav to let go of his irritation for a few minutes. They got to their seats in time for the movie to start; Arnav had just raised his hand to put it on Khushi's shoulder to be stopped by her. "No funny business Arnav, I want to watch the movie" her warning clear and his irritation just as clear

baawre ne hi bawari kiya, haaye maine kya panga le liya
joona bhooton ki haveli jaisa saiyaan, haveli jaisa saiyaan
bareli jaisa saiyaan, haan maine to maanga tha
saheli jaisa saiyaan

"Did you enjoy the movie?" Arnav asked a clearly infuriated Khushi, she did not bother answering and marched to the spot their car was parked. Arnav unlocked the central locking of the car and walked slowly with a smirk on his face, watching Khushi sit in the car and close the door with anger. Arnav slipped into the driver's seat and turned to look at his wife's flushed face, "You did not answer me, Khushi; did you enjoy the movie?" Khushi turned to face him with a finger pointing accusingly "You had your hands and mouth all over me. I could barely watch the movie for thirty minutes put together" she yelled at his smirking face. "I would not dishonour my word by touching without your permission, Khushi. I may have touched you accidently once or maximum twice and you are acting like I was making out with you in the dark theatre" he managed to look offended while Khushi had her jaw touching the floor of the car. Recovering quickly, Khushi poked him in anger "You had your hand inside my blouse all the time and kissed me enough, making out my foot. Heavy petting it was, Mr. Raizada" she yelled again, forcing Arnav to cover his ears. Visibly upset with his behavior, Khushi fell silent not wanting to say another word to him and looked out of the window to avoid any conversation. He was smiling when he started the car, knowing well he had clearly pissed her off. She had kept silent not wanting to create a scene, she had warned him to keep his hands to himself during the intermission but he had upped the ante post interval, leaving her squirming and breathless in her seat.

Once they left the mall, Arnav asked "Where do you want to have dinner? What about the footwear you wanted to buy?" Khushi snapped her head in his direction noting the teasing tone he used. "I don't need footwear, we can do the shopping another day; I am really hungry let us go have dinner" she said amicably throwing Arnav off guard. Narrowing his eyes he asked "Where do you want to eat?" fearing the answer even before he could hear it. "Paranthe wali Gali" Khushi answered with clear intent only to giggle when Arnav shouted, "What the f**k!!! No way," slowing the car to stop it at the side of the road. "Listen Khushi, I cannot take you there and I am not going to allow you to eat at such places. Challenge or not, there is no way I am going to listen to this" Arnav said shaking his head firmly; the idea of Khushi navigating through those streets and chances of her getting groped disgusted him deeply. Khushi sulked in answer only for her face to brighten with another idea, "Fine, let us go to Happy Singh ka Dhaba and you cannot refuse this too" she said as her smile widened when Arnav grunted in agreement.

ho uthte hi akhbar pe, toot padta hai subah subah
bhookha sa mora saiyaan, biwi se jyada to ye
TV se hai juda juda, chipku sa mora saiyaan

Arnav watched with distaste as Khushi relished the greasy food, tucking away a lot like a hungry soldier. He decided to play it safe by eating roti with dal and green salad, happy to note his wife was enjoying the food. "Arnavji" he heard her take his name with her mouth full of food, seeing some gravy on her chin he reached forward to wipe it off with his handkerchief. "Khushi, finish the morsel and then speak" he chided softly and smiled when she chewed the food and swallowed it noisily to speak with him. "Arnavji, since you did not listen to me completely today" she started to be stopped by his loud "What the!!" She placed the glass of lassi on the table with a bang. "What the!! What the!! Will not absolve you Mr. Raizada, you cheated the whole day and hence this day does not count in the agreed duration of the punishment" she said waving an accusatory finger at him. "Starting from tomorrow till next Sunday, you have to do my bidding and I mean everything and no tricks will be entertained" she warned as Arnav let out a groan. "Khushi, today was not bad but doing this for the next eight days is not possible" he tried his hand at getting her to understand his stand.

Khushi looked at him with surprise "We are not going to this every day, I am yet to tell you what is planned for tomorrow" she said disappointed he thought she was stupid enough to do the same thing daily. With his curiosity piqued, he asked "What have you planned Khushi?" She shook her head refusing to answer him, "I am done, let us go home and I will answer your question." Arnav tried his best to get her to reveal her plans throughout their ride back home but Khushi refused to answer. They had reached their carport to find Aman waiting for them; Arnav looked surprised while Khushi smiled at him warmly. "Is everything in order Amanji?" Khushi asked excitedly, taking the large envelope from his outstretched hand. Arnav looked at his assistant and wife with wonder, they seemed to be doing something and he surely had no clue about it. "Everything is in order Bhabhi" Aman answered with an easy smile. "Thank you Amanji. Good night" Khushi chimed and wishing the couple a good night, Aman left before he could be questioned further. Arnav got off the car and tossed the keys to the waiting driver to park the vehicle. "What are you and Aman plotting?" Arnav demanded as Khushi got off the car to request Omprakash to get the bags to their room.

baawre ne hi bawari kiya, kaise na bhala jale ye jiya
man jhele na jo daily aisa saiyaan, jo daily aisa saiyaan
jo daily aisa saiyaan

She walked away humming a tune without stopping to answer Arnav, who was clearly irritated with everything that was happening to him that day. He stormed into his room to find his wife checking the contents of the envelope Aman had given her. "What is happening Khushi?" he demanded and watched Khushi wave her passport with glee. Was she planning on going somewhere without telling him or worse without him, was that his punishment? A week without her. He would not allow that, he grabbed her by the waist to plead "Please Khushi, I will not challenge you again and never question your ability to do anything. Don't leave me and go" his voice low and beseeching. Khushi hawed' with surprise at his words "Arnavji, what do you think this is all about?" she demanded in return. He looked at her perplexed face keenly before answering "You are going somewhere without me" he answered, only to force Khushi into a fit of giggles. "What the!!" he swore again holding her closer; Khushi stopped giggling to answer him. "The next eight days you will do my bidding not here in Delhi but at Seychelles." He looked at her keenly, wanting to know if he had heard her correctly.

Looping her arms around his neck she confirmed "We are leaving for Seychelles tomorrow and the flight leaves at 6 am." A happy grin replaced the frown on Arnav's face "You had all this planned" he stated and she bobbed her head in answer. "The challenge, convincing Mami to comply with my request and winning; it was all planned and Amanji helped me with the travel procedures and things at work" Khushi answered with a happy smile. Arnav placed a kiss on her nose, "That is cheating Mrs. Raizada, you did not play fair" he murmured over her lips. Khushi pulled back to ask with full seriousness, "Would you have come with me if I asked to directly?" Arnav was honest to accept he would have not agreed easily citing some excuse or the other to avoid the vacation. He drew her closer to kiss her deeply to show his willingness to the idea of a week away at the holiday destination she had chosen. He pulled back to ask "How did Mami agree to the idea? She cannot do without all the paint she applies on a daily basis" he said with a sneer. Khushi laughed before replying "Don't underestimate the power of a common woman" she replied haughtily, only to giggle more at Arnav's disgusted expression. "I promised to pick up all the things foreign' she needs for six months and let me be fair to her, she thought you deserved some alone time with your lovely wife. Those were good enough reasons for her to do what she did." "Lovely wife?" Arnav drawled with amusement and Khushi bobbed her head vigorously in answer. He kissed her again to stop her giggles, "This hardly sounds like a punishment to me, so who lost or who won the challenge, Mrs. Raizada?" Khushi winked as Arnav carried her to bed "We both win and winner takes it all" were her prudent words.

bhoola bhoola sa rehta hai, jhoola jhoola sa rehta hai
nayi dilli main, bareli jaisa saiyaan
bareli jaisa saiyaan, bareli jaisa saiyaan
paheli jaisa saiyaan, maine to maanga tha
saheli jaisa saiyaan
Song - Maine to maanga tha saheli jaisa saiyaan

Movie - U, Me aur Hum

A/N - This OS is for ...Doctor...(Alanki)...girl I hope I did not disappoint you.

Happy New Year!!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sO1qVteHOww[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res

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Yeh res nahi ramanchi hain!!! 😡

I didnt even know what I was resing for!

Main teko itna thakeyla comment dungi tu yaad rakhegi! 😡

Kitna cute OS tha...

She is a halwai business man's daughter and the wife to a man who owns fashion MNCs in various parts of the world (At least that is what we were made to believe in the intro shot of ASR 😛) Of course she can tedo-fy the ungli to get the ghee out if required 😃. My dear Khushi had to do so much to trap her husband into a long, sexy vacation outside the country. She had to use her charm on Mami, trick Arnav to bet with her, see to it he loses, get heavily petted by her husband in a theater 😲, suffer his moods while he followed her... uff!!

But all of it paid out in the end, didnt it? 😉 😳
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You know what happens when we have a triumphant Khushi, who makes the best out of the bet she has won, a sporty Arnav who does not try to brush off his wife's victory but instead religiously goes through the trials and tribulations and the supporting cast who does a fab job of supporting the protagonists?


A cracking OS of course, with the readers being the winners who have it all!


I must admit that while the idea of an Arnav who was left bereft' was a bit hard to digest (for obvious reasons😳), I enjoyed that he had to dance to Khushi's tunes.😉


And tell you what; a jumpsuit shopping Khushi (nice change, by the way) had me raise doubts but I did not jump to conclusions.


The best part of the entire OS was the one wherein Arnav thought that he would be separated from Khushi for a week...hayee the panic he went through was so heartrending!


Greece in Raizada and Sons', Turkey in The pursuit of love', Egypt in In your arms' and now Seychelles in this one; you do include some exotic locations!👏


P.S. It is nice to have a Mami who wears a pink sari upon the wishes of phatti sari👍🏼


P.P.S. I hope the multiplex was dark enough☺️

Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os really enjoyed reading it 😳
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brillant piece of writing👍🏼
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Kay, I am sorry for un-resing so late. But I know you understand and that I am shameless 😛


Kay, you write romance so well. I am J! I am sure you can make a 90 year old couple also very lovey-dovey and hot. That is indeed your charm and your writing. Hats off! Seriously!


This is the kind of OS that makes me feel like reading it over and over again just to feel blissful. ArHi are happy, I am happy! Bas. Aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhko!


First it was very Khushi-ish to trap Arnav in to this. And it was very Arnav-ish to cheat 😉 (I love it when he cheats like this 😳)


And it was very Mrs. Raizada-ish to plan such a wonderful honeymoon for them. Honeymoon main kya kya kiya inn dono ne Kay? ☺️
Edited by lazyleaves - 11 years ago
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an awesome update loved it !!!! <3
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Dear thanks for the notification.😃

The OS is beautiful and a wonderful gift for new year.👏

HAPPY NEW YEAR🥳

Dear come up with a new story of Arnav and Khushi.

Eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely ... khushi winning Arnav sulking/smirking... could visualize ,Mami without makeup and zari ha ha

great reading your works again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous new year treat kalyani, it would have made a nice track on the show seeing Khushi and Arnav having these sort of cute and adorable tiffs rather than that horrible Mrs India crap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mami bithout Make Up? Ijj it a phigment of mai imagination? Tells tells? - i wonder if even Manohar would have recognised her! But she did sign a profitable deal, not only she gets 6 month make up facility, but also a chance to become a dadi..;) cuz Arnav and Khushi won't play poker while they are away on vacation.. Would they?


I loved it, the way although Arnav sulked about his loss, but did what Khushi said anyways, but in his style! Vaise did they have corner seats in theatre? I hope ppl in theatre were still watching movie 😉

Jumpsuit shopping, eating dinner at Dhaba and finally Aman with tickets, Khushi did plan the day out well and also the vacation!

Best part was when, Arnav told her not to leave him and go.. Making me wonder which Arnav would do this, Raizada and sons one or Pursuit of love.. I guess both of them, maybe!

Wineer gets it all, while the loser, baskes in the her victory, finding his own win! :)
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago

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