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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome n amazing os..

miss this swayam nowadays.. last 2 lines were d best...

slap scene was explained beautifully.. swayam monologue was not given in d show but now i can imagine this to b his monologue..

diva sharon n poor lover boy swayam facing insult in front of whole college just coz he wanted to share stage with sharon whom he s madly in love with.. i felt real bad wen i saw d episode...

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nifty-nia

@nifty-nia

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

When I read the keywords on top I was all up for the Kriyaansh breakup scene. I was really surprised when I realised halfway through that its Swayam :P
Its was really sad and really nice at the same time. I don't like to see Swayam crying. But you did complete justice to his emotions.

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Superb one Anky di..

Swayam's POV is one great way...

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

it is awesome!!!

the scene it was such a pleasure reading it...

I always wondered what would b swayam's inner feeling...

but the way u portayed it felt like this is how swayam would have felt or this is what he had felt...though it can b true u never noe...just loved it;!!

and the last lines they were like ohhh shit!!! It is actually true... I mean like dey r like this is what he wanna convey...

just loved that!!!!

awesome one!!!

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

simply superb di

loved the way u describe it

awesome

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

500 words... tough...

bt uh did it so welll... ya di...

lovable... <3

sorry fr short comments... exams...

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

okay, so first of all, I thought I wont comment..😆 coz I really don't know how to praise you...😊 this is sooo beautifully written...😊 hats offf Onee-chaan...👏
and then, WOW, you wrote on SwaRon..!!😳 I've not read a better SwaRon OS than this till now in India-Forums...👏 pleaseee write more...😃

lastly, Omedetto Onee-chaan, you are the first to finish the Challenge..!! yeppyyy😆