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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Tacken aback because.. not everyone can put Swayam's condition, his thoughts this easily..

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Swayam's and Sharon's images flashed in my mind and I kept on wandering why do I feel connected to SwaRon when am reading a KR OS?!! n the end I discovered it was a SS OS only. 😛

Coming to the OS, its been penned down BEAUTIFULLY. I am totally in love with it. Its like you have expressed every tinch of Swayam's emotion. And one can totally connect to it. Great work done Anky. 😉🤗

-Ash. :D

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Amazing Os..

I actually do not read Swaron stories but I culd nt resist this 1..

Fab OS a Anky DI...

N I'm missing u soo much...

Miss tlkimg to u too...

Just let my boards get over then I'll be back...

Love u loadsss!!!!:*:*

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice one Anks...

This slap scene i can never forget..

perfect usage of words and everything was amazingly written... completly describing Swayam... and Sharon too..how she was in te beginning..

amazinggg... :D

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

awesome OS dear...

swayam's feeling were written amazingly 👏

loved it...

thnx fr d pm...

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesum os Anky Di...

Loved it...

Thnks fr d pm...

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I really loved the way u described swayam's emotions. .
It was all perfect.

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome

Ahmazing

loved da way u expressed swayam's point of view :)

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

You created a whirlpool of emotions in just 500 words. The piece was so so so Beautiful and enchanting. The thoughts were thorough Swayam. Innocent and yet so deep. And those last two lines ended it perfectly. The piece is brilliant. And writing it within 500 words is seriously commendable. Great work.

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

lovely... well described... 👏

It took me a while to understand that its swaron.. not kriyansh os... 😆

& my mind diverted straight to the oldest scene of swaron.. 😊

I've seen that scene quite a hundred times & always felt so bad for him.. hurt n insulted poor innocent loverboy...

& the diva standing there in grace ... like she have done the most valid justification to the guy... by treating him like shit in front of whole college ... god how much i hated her at those times... 😡

& his feelings wasn't shown... yahi toh problem hai d3 ki.. shuru se rahi hai... things are always rushed up... explore nhi karte emotions ko... 😵

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