ArHi SS : Sunshine After Rain - Page 7

Arnav lost his father too!

Another amazing chapter
I think you're doing alright in keeping it neutral great work
Keep it up

Heart wrenching...

ure right. lives were lost on both sides of the border and it would be very difficult to pin-point on one group. u shd concentrate on arshi's pain now

I love this story.. Those times and the pain those people went thru.. Cant only imagine..🥺 Coming back to the SS, I loved how you have explored their feelings.. Similar pain of them both.. Khushi being his strength.. Wonderful start.. Loving it..

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Meri Hattrick ho gayi!! and i'm madly in Love with the story already!

Sorry for the delay in Un-resing got stuck up yesterday and slept really late.. So now i read the chapter again and here i'm telling you what all i felt! :)

the beginning scene was enchganting you've captured the essence of early morning such beautifully that i was left amazed! Infact whenever i stay awake till late almost around 4 the voice from close gurudwara actually is filling up everywhere and the whole scene these days we can get to see only in some villages.


Babey is one good soul! She has seen life and she knows that life isn't fair to anyone.. If it gives, it takes as well! But one more truth is that we get only that much pain which we can handle! Babey understands her pain and provides her comfort she needs!

While with Arnav.. She forgot that that he saved her the last minute. Oh! How i wish she remembered that! But i guess the whole trauma was too much on her mind! She is affected by him though! His mere presence affects her! She starts stammering and shivering! Awww..! So Arnav's attire is firangi lekin dil hai hindustani!


The last scene was enchanting! Khushi i such a kid getting drenched in rain while babey is shouting at her back.. Just like my mummy does at times ;). Khushi was lost in him while Arnav though too was taken in by her, he still realises his responsibilities! Thats what makes me love him more! Infact i love the way that you've charecterised them! It totally suits!


I so wanna read what happens next! Bring on the next chapter! 😉

Finally first one..nice update :)

You r updating so fast :p

I am yet to comment on previous ones :D

You are a wonderful writer. You are doing a wonderful job and believe no one could have done better than you, the way you described Arnav's feelings and his miseries in chapter 2 was brilliant.