Ariya Dark FF(+16):My Bleeding Heart#2/ *NTL-PG-1&132(/5/7

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#681

wow piya dear...

finally you update this..

thank you so much..

and as usual the update was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, block buster, rocking, freaking and mind blowing update...

just loved it...

and its very emotional too...

i am feeling crying

ohh god arjun decided that he will leave riya..

flashback was outstanding...

omg ariya parents got them married in childhood.,.

i am shocked yaar..

they are kids...

how can they do this to them?

arghh...

arjun know that his parents were going to marry them..

but riya didnt know about it..

her antics were so cute..

she is such a innocent doll

arjun got so emotional when he talking to riya 😭 😭
oh finally mrs mukharjee blame mr mukharjee

loved mrs. mukherjee outbrust...

ohh my god..

my poor ariya...

specially riya..

when arjun says he was going away from her life riya was crying..

her heart want to stop her..

yayy riya ko hosh aa gaya..

but yeh kya piyu?

tune kya jhatka diya..

riya forgte her past memory..

now what will happen?

arjun is going newyork?

ohh god...

aur hospital main riya se milne kaun aaya?

i hope its arjun...

do continue soon..

and thanks for the pm..

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sonycs001

@sonycs001

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#682

Nice part
Ariya ke shadi bachpan mein hi hogaya
Arjun left ri and weent away
But who is the one who entered at end I dont think its sam kahi woh arjun toh nahi
Plz update soon

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nicronyariya

@nicronyariya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#683

very emotional update

no words satisfy through which i can appriciate u

fantastic update👏

kitana rulaya tumne mujhe😭

and who is the men came to meet riya

plzzz update soon dear

thanx for pm

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

nice update she loss her memory
update soon

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

Superb update. Love it. Omg Arjun left Riya. Riya is behaving as if she forgot whole one year of her life. Ariya is married from childhood. Hate mr. Mukherjee. Hope everything will alright soon. Thanks for the pm. Pls continue soon.

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

Part 21
not happy with current track of this story
plz didu dont make ariya go away from each other

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#687

TEASER=PART 22
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"Arjun, what happen to you?"
Why u r looking so tense..???

She alertly asked him as she went close to him and cupped his face. ...
But he removed her hold n step back...

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"Riya",plz go away from me, please don't come near me, I am a monster, i am a monster...

Riya:-Arjun..nnn u scaring me... tum hosh main to ho..tumhen pata bhi hai, tum kya keh rahe ho...??

Look Arjun ager ye tumhara koe pranck hai, then i will not going to talk to u...

Now stop ur acting, do u have any idea how much i miss u..hun...

Arjun turned his face other side with so much dificulties..

I will hurt you again just go !" he yelled...

Riya:- What are you saying Arjun?
Plz stop acting like this Arjun...
Arjun:-I hurt u so many times Riya...dont u understand...Arjun shouted back...

Riya:-You won't...You can't hurt me Arjun, i know...
Bez u love me...u promised me to protect me...
Hena...

Arjun:-Silent...(in mind-How s she know i love her...i confess her when she was uncoinsious, n why she is behaving different, )

Arjun was lost in his thought , he dont even realised...when Riya Hug him...

I will kill u , if u behaving like a jerk Arjun...
U very well knows how much i love u...

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waittt frs dont hurt ur brain in thinking...ki ye kya ho raha hai...??
just wait for the update...he he he...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 11 years ago