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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This was such a feel good story.

Perfect for Christmas.

Nice to see Khushi and Arnav at this stage of their life.

Thank you for an amazing tale once again.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

This is what I missed...your ability to present the day-to-day life mingled with love and human relationships is something special.

What began as a regular day in the life of Mrs & Mr. Foster ...and IPK teasing/bullying that we all have experienced time and again...ends with Arnav's realisation that holding grudges does not help. It is better to forgive and move on because at the end of the day, it is the person who forgives gets to live in peace.

What an amazing thing to show Jen ...Loved the way you wrote it all from Janet's perspective...that it is pointless to remember anyone of life with bitterness because that bitterness will eat the person slowly but thoroughly.

And it was time for Arnav to move on from the poison that was his past and remember the good things because that he is a parent himself.

Thank you for this wonderful X-mAs gift. I did read it earlier but couldn't comment and you know why. So here it is, love.

Cheers

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res.. 😎 Merry Christmas Jenny.. 🤗

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Oh wow.. Out of words for this one actually.. 😃 And its a continuation of ALS makes me mad with happiness.. I loved that story so much.. Mr and Mrs Foster.. *__* Loved how u took out a leaf from their life and Christmas time.. And Khushi in a way helping Arnav come out of all the past things, heal himself, forgive and make himself a better person for his own peace of mind.. Their kids are utterly cute.. 😆 That eye closing one reminded me of Anjali, Payal, Aakash and NK doing the same on ArHi's wedding night.. Waiting for the next part.. And once again a Merry Christmas to you.. 🤗

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Merry Christmas to everyone...🤗

Jen, thank u dear...waiting eagerly...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

So sorry Jen for undressing so late.

(Will explain the undressing part later)😉

I thought you will post both parts one after the other, so I wanted to comment on both together.

But now I see you have reserved elsewhere for part two, so here I am.

The rub away part reminded me of a conversation we had.

Brought bach memories.

How typical of men not to understand what rabba vey means to us!

I am sure many of us can put ourselves in Khushi's place and understand her.

She forced him to watch the show!

That must have been fun.

The kids not understanding why the parents have to go away alone was a tongue in cheek moment.

Thanks for writing this Jen.

Love Foster and your writing

What a lovely gift for Christmas.

Wish you merry Christmas and a very happy New year.

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seema13

@seema13

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

waiting eagerly nd merry christmas to u...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Merry Christmas to you and your family members.

Miss you a lot. Can't wait for your gift.

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Merry Christmas

Waiting for the gift 😊

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wwooppiieee...

Merry Christmas jenny diii.. <3

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OMG OMG OMG OMG !!!!!

Jenny is back...

cant wait more to read this OS.

im damn sure it will be FAB !!!! 😃

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