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RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Welcome Back !!
The Prologue was amazing !!
The fear , the sadness of a teenage boy was aptly felt ..
And moreover the concept of the story seems so strong ! The last line of the prologue , the promise to make the justice right , seemed to contain a vow which is determined and withstanding .
This wrong justice is what frames his coming future . his persona , his mindset , everything! This will forever be imbibed in his personality as a dark , bad past...

Intrigued !

:-)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Great Update !
After reading the prologue , I kind of expected to siblings to be Arnav and Anjali... I think it was because the character of the brother seemed strong and willed...

Anyways , the dynamics of Khushi's relationship with her mother is undeniably, as Jaya said, like a word which could be defined as more than hate ...
The divorce seems to be affecting the whole family till date... And as expected the brother is a lawyer! But who is he ? Shyam or some new character ..??
The brother is calm and is swayed by emotions ...
Same questions as the ones Jaya had and many more...which me thinks will eventually be cleared with the coming chapters...
Lots to be cleared ... Abhi toh suruwaat hai , aage aage dekhe hota hai kya ...:-)
Bring it on !!

PS: Still incurably intrigued !
PPS : Could I please request for PMs ? ;-)

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Wow the first update was quite a tension filled one yet amazing,

So the sister is Khushi, I wonder who her brother is Shyam or Akash.

Khushi is such a angry, cruel and temperamental person,

Her hatred towards her mum is quite severe but I'm guessing it might be more directed towards her parents being divorced.

Khushi's brother seems very calm and gentle, love the way he tried to quieten Khushi down.

Loved the way jaya has been observing the family, is she a important character in the story and I might be thinking outside the box but do her and khushi's brother share a much better relationship.

Loved the update, it was a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Wishing you a Happy New Year xx

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Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Interesting...would love to read more...

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SA_nimk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

NICEEE!!

new story yaayyy..

who is bhaiyaa?

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lakraj80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Great update and great story! Welcome back. Thanks for the pm.

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BlackNWhite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Single mother n her alone daughter

Pls continue soon

N do pm

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Interesting introduction. Lots of questions to be answered. i guess we will know in the coming chapters. I have sent a buddy request.. Please accept it and pm me.