SS: EHSAAS PART 8 PAGE 64 - Page 22

Created

Last reply

Replies

504

Views

37.2k

Users

43

Likes

790

Frequent Posters

MonaKhan96 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.owsum
Sorry for.late comment I.just came now
Edited by MonaKhan96 - 11 years ago
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

great
awesome update
love it
cont soon

Thanks sarita glad u liked it dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😛
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaKhan96

Wow.owsum
Sorry for.late comment I.just came now

Mon adarling koi baat nahin chalta hai
Love u
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago


PART 4 A

Here in Aishas house Aisha was talking to her mother n said "Maa kaise ho aap sab theek hai na bhai kahan hai?" avantika said "theek hoon beta udhar mujhe teri chinta rehti thi tu akele kaise yahan manage karti hogi aur us anant ka naam mat le usne mana kar diya aane se to amin akele chali aayi use wahi rehkar apne dosto main maza karna hai use apne parivaar ki kya parwaah hai?" Aisha said "accha ab shant ho jaao maa bhai ko to tum jaanti ho na "Avantika asked "Accha ye bata ye jot ere saath aaya tha mujhe lene ye tere boss hai?" aisha said "Haan maa wo hamare chief hai hum sab unhi ke under kaam karte hai bahut acche insaan hai" Avantika said with a smile "Haan aur bahut acche sanskaar hai warna aaj kal ke bacche kaise hote hai apne bhai ko dekh lo khair jaan kar accha laga kitere aas paas ke log itne acche hai ab mujhe chinta nahin rahegi" Aisha said "accha maa yue batao ghar kaisa laga?" avantika said emotionally "Bahut accha meri bacchi ab bahut badi ho gayi hai jo kaam tere bhai ko karna chahiye wo tu kar rahi hai" Aisha said "Maa please tum phir shuru ho gayi accha raat bahut ho gayi hai chaliye aap aaram kijiye" with that both go n sleep. Next morning aisha introduces everyone to her mother and all are happy that someone from the family has came to live with them. All treated avantika like their own mother and she too quickly adjusted with all ETF members. She specially loved arjun & riya a lot as avantika reminded him of her own mother.

Few days passed by suddenly one night one night they heard someone shouting at the gate of galaxy towers. Aisha n Avantika immediately recognize him and avantika said "Ab kyu aaye ho yaha mujhe koi tamasha nahin chaiye tum mujhe aur meri beti ko chain se rehne do tumne uski zindagi barbaad karne main koi kasar nahin chodi ab yadi tumne kuch kiya to main tumhe nahin chodungi itna upkaar karo ki chale jao yaha se" Man replied "aap mujhe bina bataye yaha aagayiaur ab keh rahi hoo ki main chala jaau" Avantika said "haan nahin bataya kyuki main apni beti ko aur dukhi nahin kar sakti hoon tum usse door raho isimain tumhari bhalayi hai" Aisha said "Maa please yaha koi tamasha mat kariye ander chaliye" Avantika said "nahin aisha tune bahut she liya ab nahin iski kartoote din pe din badti jaa rahi hai ab isko koi haqq nahin yaha aake ye sab karne ka" Hearing voices sameer came out n saw avantika n aisha indulge in the argument he went towards avantika and aisha n said "kya baat hai aunty kaun hai ye aur apko isse ulajhne ki zarrorat nahin hai main sambhal loonga app dono ander jaaye" Avantika said "nahin beta tum rehne do ise kaise theek karna hai main acchi tarah jaanti hoon isne narak bana ke rakh diya hamari zindagi ko meri maasom bacchi ki zindagi barbaad kar di isne" sameer was surprised hearing this aisha said "Sir hum sambhal lenge I am sorry ke"" cutting her short sameer said "Aisha just relax kuch nahin hoga" man said "Kya baat hai itni jaldi humdard bhi bana liye" before he could say more sameer punched him hard on his face.

Samper said "Ab yadi tumhe apni jaan pyari hai to nikal jaao yahase" Aisha said "Sir please aap rehne dijye" turning to man"Bhai please aap chale jao wapis main appko yaha rehne nahin desakti" sameer was shocked to the core when he heard that he was aishas brother. Sameer said to aisha "Aisha ye tumhara bhai hai?" Aisha with teary eyes nodded in yes as he was fully under the effect of alcohol so no point in saying anything to him he asked the gurad to pick him up and and put him in custody tonight he will speak to him in the morning , Avantika n aisha with the heavy heart moved towards the house n sameer followed them. In the room sameer asked avantika "aunty ye sab" Avantika said "Haan beta meri badnasibi hai ki ye mera beta haianant iski inhi harkato ki vajah se mera aur aisha ka jeena mushkil ho gaya koi kasar nahin chodi hai isne hamari zindgi barbaad karne main is raakshas se ab main apne bacchi ko door rakhna chahti hoon" Aisha said "Sir please app rehne dijiye hum sambhal lenge thanks a lot" then turning to her mother "maa aap shant ho jaayiye kuch nahin hoga aur kya bol rahi hai aap" Sameer said "Aisha relax waise mujhe tumhare family matter main bolne ha koi haqq nahin hai par main tumhara chief bhi hoon aur dost bhi aise logo ko kaise theek karna hai main jaanta hoon aur main nahin jaanna chahta ki kya hua tha par aage kuch bura na hoye meri zimmedari hai don't worry " with that he left towards his flat.

SCROLL FOR PART 4 B😊

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago


PART 4 B

Aisha really felt helpless suddenly her scars n her pain beagin to rise up which she controlled for a long time. Samper had noticed it so without ant further questions he left. Next morning he spoke to anant in strong voice saying "Anant main janta hoon tum aisha ke bhai ho par is tarah tumhe aunty aur aisha ko pareshan karne ka hqq bilkul nahin hai yadi tumne bhool kar bhi unko pareshan kiya ya unke kareeb bhi aaye to main bhool jaaubga kitum kaun ho" Anant said "Tumhe kya padi hai unki kaun lagte hai wo tumhare?badi humdardi hai unse" Before Anant could say any thing he receives a tight punch on his face by sameer saying "Mera unse kya rishta hai main zarror bata par tumjaisa ghtiya aur ceap insan ye samajh nahin sakta" He looked at te gurds n said "Gurds ise lejaake jo hamara rehab centre hai usme daal do yadi waha se bhagne ki koshish kare mujhe batana aise logo ko theek karna mujhe acchi tarah aata hai" n leaves from there. After a while sameer reaches to aisha place n meet aisha n avantika n informed them saying "Aunty maine anant ko Rehab bijwa diya hai wo sudhar jaaye uske liye use nashe kilat se bahar aana zarrori hai" avantika joining her hands "Beta tumhara bahut bada upkaar hoga mujhe ummed nahin hai ki wo sudhar jaayega par tumne jo kiya uska ehsaan main is janam main nahin chukka sakti" Sameer said "Aunty please aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hai meri poori koshish hogi ki wo sudhar jaaye" with that he leaves from the house to his office.

All reached office n started to work on their daily routine. Suddenly sameer cell buzzed it was a call from commissioner n they had a new case. It was regarding the attack on the few government buildings and people in it were safe but ETF is called to investigate regarding the safety of these buildings and moreover find the real culprit who dares to intervene into the security of national n government buildings. Commissioner briefed them the case and handed over the complete charge of case to ETF with proper authority so that they can solve the case and properly finifh off the matter. Sameer n entire ETf took the charge n Started working on the case. It was a very hectic day for all of them finally they got some clue regarding these activities they came to know that some Bilal basher is behind all this but his hide out is not fixed at all he does not come at any definite place so sameer said "chotu apne informer ko activate karo aur pata karo kiye basher kaha hai use pakadna bahut zarrori hai" Chotu checked the details from his informers n informed sameer saying "Sir pata chal gaya hai wo hamari jo informer hai bindiya rosy baar main wo aksar waha ke chakkar lagata hai maine pata kiya hai shayad aaj raat wo wahi aayega" Sameer Arjun n chotu went to the Rosy bar to meet Bindiya and Riya n Aisha waited in SUV outside the bar. As soon as Bindiya saw rathod she signaled him to wait in the SUV and after a while she came out to meet Sameer. She with a smile said "Salam Sahib ji kaisa hai aap?" Sameer said "main theek hoon" Bindiya asked "Aur saab kaise aana hua kaun chahiye" Sameer showed her the photo and said "Ye bilal chahiye hame" Bindiya said "mil jayega saab aaj iska deal hai na abhi aata hi hoinga"

Bindiya offered sameer and all to come inside her cottage n told them she will signal him when bilal arrives. Sameer and all the other members got inside her cottage and started waiting for Bilal. Bindiya offered water to all. Aisha was watching her with surprise she said "kya memsaab kya hogaya?" Aisha nodded in negative n bindiya said "Yahi sooch rahi hai na ki main aise pan ye sab sameer saab ki vajah se hai ek dum dev manush hai main isliye jitna ho sake saab ki aur police ki madat karti hai par kya kare haalat se majbor hai isliye ye sab -"with that she walked to the bar side. After a while Bilal arrived and as soon as he entered the bar bindiya signaled them to come. They entered the Bar and started heavy firing started and ETF too was ready they sealed the bar n blocked all the exits for them to run away so after a while Bilal and and his men were getting weak as they too were not prepared for a sudden attack. Sameer and aisha and Arjun and riya were standing behind the pillar and firing and riya n aisha were giving cover fire to sameer n arjun. Finally Bial n his men were nabbed n they were arrested n taken to the custody. While taking them out bilal snatched the gun n pointed towards aisha but before he could fire sameer pushed aisha and bullet hit sameer

P RECAP: Sameer Serious in hospital n aisha saves him 😊

So kaisa tha please do let me know by ur comments as I write for u guys and it will help me to improve my work excuse for typing mistakes if any waiting for ur comments n suggestions love u all

Regards

Goldie 😊

Snehajain thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...
That Anant...😡😡😡 😡😡😡
Sam saved Aisha from bullet...😭😃😭😃
But precap samajh nahi aaya...how vll Aisha save Sam????😕😕😳😳
Aisha ki past life ka flashback kab milega????😳😳😳 😳😳😳
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*
awesome update..loved it..
sorry for my short comment and late one,also...
continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm...:)
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
angle1shanu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
the way u write make people love ur story...
😡..that idiot anant
sameer taught him good lesson...
sameer got hurt...😭
plz..update soon..
SATRISHI thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice

precap se koon dararahi ho? updatesoon

thanks for pm

My previous parts padke phir comment dethi hoon

__________________________]

Meri Ariya in my dreams (My Ariya srories index)


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3823710/meri-ariya-in-my-dream-world-my-ariya-stories-index-note-pg19aug22


Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angle1shanu

awesome update...

the way u write make people love ur story...
😡..that idiot anant
sameer taught him good lesson...
sameer got hurt...😭
plz..update soon..

Thanks a lot shanu dear
That was a big compliment
Send me a buddy request if u want to receive PM of my work
Love u Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1018 page no 28 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1018 page no 28

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

9 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".