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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
I dnt like riya cry without her mistake
she feel sorry😒
I feel she is being stupid like this😔
hope u will make riya strong plz
I can understand arjun pain but that's not done he hurt riya
without her mistake😡
anyway it's awesome update as always
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Awesome update
Can't wait to read about riya's past
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I like it very much,superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awesome story...
read all the parts in a go...

loved arjun and riya...

riya too has painful past...

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
superb update yar...!!
poor riya... arjun scolded her alot...and riya.. she was hurt coz of arjun's pain and not his scold...!!!
feeling bad for arjun also.. he is in so much pain...!!
love the way riya tried to console him but he misunderstood her...!!!
what did riya mena by she can understand his pain??? does she also have a similar past?and whose pic was that??
arjun's scene in the end was very heart touching...!!
precap looks very interesting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Hello guys...
i know last chapter me mene riya ko bahot rula diya na???
sorry guys...
so this part is quite long in concession..😉😉😉

hope u r enjoying my first ever story...

Part 6:
Next morning ETF office:
Riya was the first one to enter office. She directly goes to her desk. Some time later when she was sitting in conference room arjun enters. She wish him GM...but he ignores her.
Riya: good morning Arjun sir!!!(she said a bit hesitantly)😕😕
Arjun didn't reply her. 😡😡She can still see anger in his eye for her. She becomes upset.😲 Arjun can see this but he ignores. He see directly in her eyes expecting pity and sympathy for him but what he saw shocked him. He saw the same pain of him reflecting in her eyes.😭😭 There is no pity , no sympathy for him but was same pain which is in his eyes too. Without saying any thing he goes directly in his cabin. Riya uske liye chai order karti hai.(sad hai fir bhi utni hi chinta hai... how sweet...<3<3<3)...
After some time:
Riya was doing some work and was on her desk. Though she has work and she was a responsible cop but today she can't concentrate in her work. Her head was paining due to headache. She rests her headrest of chair and closes her eyes for while. But it had done worst effect. As soon as she had closed her eyes she see some flashes in fornt of her eyes. Her ears hears some gunshots. Someones schream. 🤢🤢A 24-25 year old man's lifeless body whose cloths are all drenched with blood. She hurriedly and with a jerk opens her eyes. She was sweating badly. Her face was all sweaty. And eye is having flowless tears.😭
She took out one pen from her bag. On pen there was something written. "VIKRAM".("VIKRAM"??? now yaar who is this??? *wink*)😲
She took out one photo frame from her table drawer. In photo there was a man and one woman nd between both of them riya was standing with winking expression. The other two have a big smile wale expression.it was a kodek moment photo. She caresses the photo. A lone tear made way from her eyes.😭😭😭
At from far one pair of eyes was watching all this. It was none other than ARJUN. He had come here to apolozise to her for his bad and harsh behavior.
Before some time:
Arjun was in cabin,
He was thinking about what he had seen in her eyes. The same pain of his reflecting in her eyes. He wonder What was that???. He was actually feeling guilty for his behavior and thought to apolozise to her becoz he felt this time he had actually crossed all limits. So he marched to her desk and saw all this. So now he was confuse. He thought she is crying bcz of his rude behavior.
Present:
Arjun was very guilty for his behavior and continuously thinking about riya.
Arjun(MV): muje ese behave nahi karna chahiye tha usase. Pehli galti to meri hi thi. Me ne hi galti se use wo file baki ki file ke sath de di thi study karne ke liye. Isme uski kya galti thi??? Shayad kuch jyada hi bol diya hai mene.
My pov:
(jyada!!!! Man ye pagal lagta hai.. bechari ko itna rula diya itna sab kuch bol diya aur bol raha hai jyada bol diya.?? Bolte vakt ni socha tha??? Huh..)
Arjun(MV):I think i should apolozise to her now.
My pov: (ye lo abhi bhi soch rahe hai janab ke unhe sorry bolna chahiye.!!!1ofcorse u should say sorry to my cutei pie... huh.. she is so hurt... kitna rulaya meri sweety ko??? )
Arjun goes near her. She was not aware of his presence. He put his hand on her shoulder. She was startled by this.. hurridly she wipes her tears and put frame in drawer back. She now stood in front of him.
Riya: arjun sir?? Aap?? Kuch kaam tha??
Arjun: haan wo... riya ... wo...(aare aaj tak kisi ko sorry ni baola na aur aaj pehili baar kisi ko bolne jaa rahe hai wo use jo use sabse jyada irritate karti hai apne childish antics se iss liye janab ko thoda ajib lag raha hai.)
Riya confusedly looked him.
Arjun: umm.. I am sorry riya.. (riya eyes wide open.) (me :" finally bola.. pheeww" ) muje tumse ase baat nahi karni chahiye thi. Muje wo sab nahi bolana...
Riya cut him short...
Riya: its okk sir.. isme apki koi galti nahi thi. Agar me pehle file pe naam padh leti to esa nahi hota... so its okk.. (give him a small smile which actually reach his lips too)😊😊😊
Riya saw arjun giving her small smile. She had seen him giving smile first time.. so she was actually lost in his smile admiring him and his smile in her mind.😊😊😊
Her trance was brocken when arjun cell ring. He received call.
Yaa as always it's a indication of arrival of new case..😆
He call every one in conference room. By this time riya has composed her self.she was back in her normal cop form. Arjun also was a bit relieved by this time. As rathod was on other mission arjun is now heading ETF as head in his absence. He briefed case to every one they left for crime scene.
Crime scene:
It was a case of bruthal murder of a house wife. They reached to their house where murder was done. Liza checked dead body. Shree checked her mobile and other call details. Riya was consoling her family and interrogating them and sakshi was interrogating their neighbors. Arjun was investigating and searching around for any clue or anything he find suspicious.
The lady's mother in law was crying uncontrolabbly.
MIL: haye kya ho gaya meri bachhi ko.. kisne kiya??? Kisne mara meri phool si bachhi ko??? 🤢
Shree and riya share a knowing look and raises there eyebraw. 😉😉
The lady's husband was in to shock. He had went numb.he was neither crying nor speaking any thing. His state was very bad. He was continuously staring at his wife's lifeless body. Arjun looked at him and he can actually understand his state ri8 now. He had gone through this phrase. While investigating riya once see husband andthen she saw arjun lost somewhere. She knew it very well that what must be arjun feeling seeing that man's condition. While here arjun is having flashes of roshni's murder. Her face full of pain and seeing her lying on floor helplessly streaching her hand to meet his.😭 He jerked out from his thought when riya loudly called him.
Seeing arjun she understood that what must be he is feeling and his condition. So she thought to distract his attention to case and make him busy in case so he didn't suffer much as case is reminding him of his love, his wife, his roshni...😊😊😊
So she called him thrice. But he didn't respond to her call. So she called him quite loudly.
Riya(loudly): ARJUN SIRRR!!!
Arjun(snapped out from his thought):haan riya???
Riya: sir wo mene ghar ke sare logo se puchtach kar li hai. aur sakshi ne sare neighbors se. sabke mutabik shalini(lady who is murderd) ek bahot hi sulji hui aur samjdar ladki thi. Sabse bahot ache se raheti thi aur inka ye bhi kehna hai ki uske aur unke gharwalo ke bich me kafi achhi bonding thi. Unki saas unhe apni beti ki tarah hi rakhti thi. Unhe society ya apne ghar walo se koi problem nahi thi.
Arjun(he was back in his no non-sense cop form): hmmm. Aur kuch pata chala.??? Koi aur clue mila???
She felt relief after seeing him normal. She herself didn't know why she feel like this.😉😊
Riya: nahi sir... aur kuch khas pata nahi chala.
When riya bring arjun back from his thoughts and started giving him details.he feel comforted hearing her voice. It soothed him. He expected him self to get angry on riya for breaking his thoughts but it give him quite relief. Why?? He him self didn't know why he feel like that. But it give him some amount of peace and he mentally thanked her for bringing him back from his thoughts.😊
They came back to ETF. All were in conference room. Shree was checking call details and records. Riya was analyzing the details and clues they have collected. Arjun was reading case file. Suddenly sakshi enter Conference room. He gave all details to arjun she had collected. They started discussing case.
Riya(attaching notes and links on glass board): shalini, shalini vaidya. She was murdered very brutally in her own home. Wo bhi tab jab ghar pe koi nahi tha.
Sakshi: na kisi se dushmani aur nahi koi problem. Infact apne sasural walo se bhi achhi bonding thi.
Shree: call records me bhi kuch suspicious nahi. Normal call to arun(shalini's husband)and her home and her friends.
Arjun and Riya: friends!!!(something strick in his mind nd same time riya ke bhi)😃😃😃
Both look at each other. And there was a cute eye lock. Arjun first one to broke eye lock.
Arjun: shree shalini ke friends kaun kaun hai ye details nikalo.
Shree: already nikal di hai sir. Uski do friends hai. neha aur grishma. Neha USA me hai aur grishma yanhi rehti hai Mumbai me. Par shalini ki dono se regular bate hoti rehti hai.
Arjun: grishma ko bulao yanha. Aur uss neha se bhi contact karo.
They all are working on case. All were in conference room including arjun. Suddenly sakshi speaks.
Sakshi: pata nahi shalini ke gharwale kese feel kar rahe honge. Arun to kese numb ho gaya tha.
Hearing arun's name arjun stops swirling his pen and again lost in thoughts. Riya notice this and curses sakshi under her breathes for bringing that topic again.😡😡😡 She signals sakshi to not to talk much on this topic. Sakshi understands her mistake and try to change topic And continues but quite loudly.
Sakshi(loudly): aur uski saas wo to kese tut gayi thi.
Hearing her loud voice he came out from his thoughts and again starts swirling his pen.
Riya: sakshi, tumhe kuch ajib nahi laga uski saas ka behavior.
Now arjun concentrate on riya's words.
Sakshi(confusingly): kya matlab???
Riya: pata hai gaun(village) ki purani kahavat hai. " bachhe ki maut(death) par maa se jyada chudail(witch) roti hai"...😆
Arjun amusingly looks at her. She was right. Shalini's MIL's behavior had surprised him too.😆😆😆
Sakshi: matlab.. tum ye kehna chati ho ki khun uski saas ne kiya hai???
Riya: shayad... ho bhi sakta hai nahi bhi...
Arjun again met a new form of riya. He had thought that she must be emotionally weak. Jo bhavnao(emotions) me beh jati hai. but again she had proved him wrong. She thinks perfectly like a responsible cop.she considers each and every clue. He was again amazed by this girl sitting in front of him.😆
Precap:
Further progress in case so was in relation of ARIYA.
Rayesha and chotu back from mission.

pheww finally done...😉😉😉
how's it??
let me know if u like it or not???
plz do comment guys...

Love u all...

...@smile@...

Edited by lipi007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
LIPI Really good dear amazing
i loved the Case n bonding
In fact it was really well written
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
superb update yar...!!!
arjun is still angry on her.. poor girl and it reminded her of her past... btw who was in the pic??? 😲 and arjun saw her in pain but thought that its coz of his scolding...!!
woahh did arjun say sorry to her?😲wow./..
the case is interesting...!! love how riya tried to divert arjun's mind and he felt relieved on hearing her voice...!!! cool...!!!
and he is even impressed by her presence of mind and the way she thinks rationally... 😉awesome...!!
precap looks interesting/...
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice, super, awsm update,con soon
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Super duper amazing update dr...!!!!!
Awww she wished him morning but he ignored her as he was angry on her n that kinda upset her...!!! Poor gal...!!!!! Wow how easily Arjun read her eyes n saw pain in thm...!!!!!!
OMG all these reminded her of her painful past n shocked her to the core...!!!!!! Who is Vikram...???? Who was the couple in the pic with her...???? Awww Arjun witnessed all these n thought that she was depressed coz of him...!!!!! Glad that Arjun realized his mistake but he also apologized to her for his rude behaviour... that's quite surprising...!!!!!!
Oye hoye Riy's smile also spreaded smile on his face...that's sweet...!!!!!
The case was heart touching dr...!!!! The victim's MIL behaviour quite strange n that was noticed by Shree n Riya n that's why thy winked at eachother... i guess...!!!!!!! Awww her husband's condition made Arjun remind his horrible past n he was lost in that incident n that didn't went unnoticed by Riya... so she tried to divert his mind n got successful in it n her that gesture soothed his pain n he felt himself at peace...!!!!!
Awww something clicked in their mind at the same time at the mention of friends n that eyelock was super cute...!!!!!!
Riya's comment on that victim's MIL was quite hilarious...!!!!! Oye hoye Arjun seemed too impressed with her skills...!!!!!
Loved it...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!!


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