UPDATE FF:Mujhe Pyaar Karr-The Story Of The Second Lover CH.7P20 3/15

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Anusha

@Anusha16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I am loving this... please do update more...

intresting to see the changes in both shlok and astha...😆

lovely update!!!

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banoo2012

@banoo2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Loving it amazing story kyp up the good work

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
I really loved the conversation between shlok and aastha. Love the precap

yeah it was nice

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
This a very different story but really well written. Im excited to see how things unfold especially Shlok's family.

true it will be interesting

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Anusha16
I am loving this... please do update more...

intresting to see the changes in both shlok and astha...😆

lovely update!!!

yeah me too the story is different I live how it's written, can't wait to read the next update

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

wow awsm update
loved it u are fab
you do write in very impressive way like a writer explaining every singl thing
whether its the character, situtation or the surrounding
when i read ur wrk i almost visualize every thing in person
keep it up

grt going
continue soon
:-):-):-):-):-)
;-);-);-);-);-);-);-)
:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Lovely concept.
Loving it totally.
I want pms.

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

ok so astha is always in some kind of embarrassing situations in front of shlok

and shlok has keen observations he noticed dat astha is claustrophobic

precap seems interesting

do update soon

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pt311288
wow awsm update
loved it u are fab
you do write in very impressive way like a writer explaining every singl thing
whether its the character, situtation or the surrounding
when i read ur wrk i almost visualize every thing in person
keep it up

grt going
continue soon
:-):-):-):-):-)
;-);-);-);-);-);-);-)
:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D

agree with you everything is described really well