sandhir FF:Favourite Girl part 13-page 19 *new*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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SANDHIR FF:Favourite Girl

First of all .lemme warn u guys dis FF cud b terrrifically horrible as m writing any story fr d frst tym.so..plss spare me guys n secondly m new here bcz i hvnt seen dis serial frm d beginning so if anythng goes wrong pls crrect me ..n last bt NOT D LEAST if any improvmnts needed thn plss dnt hessitate ...ur advices r most welcm..
Now lemme give u a glimpse of my story i'll post part 1 on page 2

INTRODUCTION
randhir intelliegnt talented vry proud yet soo cute guy in FITE
sanyukta intellignt smart vry straight forward girl
dey both hate each odersooo damn badly
n aftr watve happnd on dat day mattered vry much to randhir
wat actually happend..???he was hurt n she was NT d reason...
Thn..??

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INDEX PROMO INDEX[DIV]
PART 1- PAGE 2 promo 1-page 11

PART 2-PAGE 3
PART 3-PAGE 4
PART 4-PAGE 7
PART 5- PAGE 8
PART 6-PAGE 9
PART 7-PAGE 11
PART 8-PAGE 12
PART 9-PAGE 13
PART 10-PAGE 15
PART 11-PAGE 17
PART 12-PAGE 18
PART 13-PAGE 19
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Start the story ...
Waiting for it ...
😃
N ya welcome to forum dear 🤗
Edited by honestyfirst - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honestyfirst

Start the story ...
Waiting for it ...
😃
N ya welcome to forum dear 🤗


thnk u soo much dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: monihhl

wow nice plz update😊


thnk u soo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue gal... i would luv to read ur FF... its goin to be a funfilled journey seeing as this forum is filled wwith wonderful writers...lookin forward to it..!!
don forget to PM me..!
WELCOME TO THE FORUM..
me safrena😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That sounds like a good start, hope you update part 1 soon ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww cutie, pleasseee continue! im sure it'll be great!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

'tring tring...tring tring'his phone rang..d vibrations were askng hin to pick up d call ..he looked at d phone n threw it qway in such a force dat it broke into pieces as soon as it hit d ground..he paid no attntn to wat happnd to d phone bcz der was smthng dat broke him inside ...he nvr imagined a mistake of his father wiud evr lead him to such hurtfullness...yes he was broken ..hurt ..wat happened??

#flashback#
Randhir entered his room whn his roommate jiggi was talking to his mother
jiggi:ha maa ...mene khana kha liya he ..kitne sawal karte ho aap
randhir gave him a smirk
jiggi:ha ma thik he ..arey uska naam ramveer nh randhir he..
He lookd at him
jiggi:ha use b bol dunga..mujhe kya pqta ma..?? Chhodo abhi mujhe sona he gud nyt ..ha bas abhi gn
he finally ended his call
Randhir:kya hua jiiggi..??
Jiggi:randhir bhai vo meri mummy na kuch sweets bhej rhi he christmas paas he na
randhir:christmas..??
Jiggi:ha mujhe bachpan se christmas ka bohot shauk tha humare neighbour me ek christian aunty rehti thi unhone mom ko sab sikhaya tha u knw tree decoration..sweet making n all aur pata he ek bar kya hua me na...
Randhir:ok ok wait..usme mera naam kahase aaya ...kya tum chahte ho k me santa ban k tumhe chocolate dene aau
jiggi:nh bhai vo ma ne aap k liye b bheje he swweeets ...is liye wapka nam puchh rhi thi..
Randhir:ha ramveer...!!!
Jiggi:vese bhai ek baat puchu ..?? Dnt get mad at me ha..
Randhir:bolo...
Jiggi:aap k mom...mom ne kabhi kuch nh bheja ..or qap to unhe call b nh karte asa q
randhir's face expressions channged as soon as he heard his mon'name
stil jiggi continued:mera matlab tha k aap ko unki yaad nh ati ..aap unse baat kiye bina kese reh rahe ho..me to mom se baat nh k to incomplete feel karta hu ..aapko pata he mom sabse achha support hoti he..alwayz wid us...alwayss loving us...nvr leave us alone...mom is great n i love my mom
randhir:shut up jiggi..enough is enough...i've already warned u nt to talk abt my mothr...y dnt u undstnd...
Jiggi:bhai vo me bas...
Randhir:kya vo me...suno jiggi dis is d last tym m telling u dnt ask me anythng abt my mother...
Jiggi:thik he bhai ...par ek baat bolu aapko ase unse gussa nh karna
chahiye
akhir vo mom he jo bolengi achha h bolengi
randhir:aur agar kuch bole h na to..she has no place in mah life ...she left me ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

'tring tring...tring tring'his phone rang..d vibrations were askng hin to pick up d call ..he looked at d phone n threw it qway in such a force dat it broke into pieces as soon as it hit d ground..he paid no attntn to wat happnd to d phone bcz der was smthng dat broke him inside ...he nvr imagined a mistake of his father wiud evr lead him to such hurtfullness...yes he was broken ..hurt ..wat happened??

#flashback#
Randhir entered his room whn his roommate jiggi was talking to his mother
jiggi:ha maa ...mene khana kha liya he ..kitne sawal karte ho aap
randhir gave him a smirk
jiggi:ha ma thik he ..arey uska naam ramveer nh randhir he..
He lookd at him
jiggi:ha use b bol dunga..mujhe kya pqta ma..?? Chhodo abhi mujhe sona he gud nyt ..ha bas abhi gn
he finally ended his call
Randhir:kya hua jiiggi..??
Jiggi:randhir bhai vo meri mummy na kuch sweets bhej rhi he christmas paas he na
randhir:christmas..??
Jiggi:ha mujhe bachpan se christmas ka bohot shauk tha humare neighbour me ek christian aunty rehti thi unhone mom ko sab sikhaya tha u knw tree decoration..sweet making n all aur pata he ek bar kya hua me na...
Randhir:ok ok wait..usme mera naam kahase aaya ...kya tum chahte ho k me santa ban k tumhe chocolate dene aau
jiggi:nh bhai vo ma ne aap k liye b bheje he swweeets ...is liye wapka nam puchh rhi thi..
Randhir:ha ramveer...!!!
Jiggi:vese bhai ek baat puchu ..?? Dnt get mad at me ha..
Randhir:bolo...
Jiggi:aap k mom...mom ne kabhi kuch nh bheja ..or qap to unhe call b nh karte asa q
randhir's face expressions channged as soon as he heard his mon'name
stil jiggi continued:mera matlab tha k aap ko unki yaad nh ati ..aap unse baat kiye bina kese reh rahe ho..me to mom se baat nh k to incomplete feel karta hu ..aapko pata he mom sabse achha support hoti he..alwayz wid us...alwayss loving us...nvr leave us alone...mom is great n i love my mom
randhir:shut up jiggi..enough is enough...i've already warned u nt to talk abt my mothr...y dnt u undstnd...
Jiggi:bhai vo me bas...
Randhir:kya vo me...suno jiggi dis is d last tym m telling u dnt ask me anythng abt my mother...
Jiggi:thik he bhai ...par ek baat bolu aapko ase unse gussa nh karna
chahiye .

akhir vo mom he jo bolengi achha h bolengi
randhir:aur agar kuch bole h na to..she has no place in mah life ...she left me ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

'tring tring...tring tring'his phone rang..d vibrations were askng hin to pick up d call ..he looked at d phone n threw it qway in such a force dat it broke into pieces as soon as it hit d ground..he paid no attntn to wat happnd to d phone bcz der was smthng dat broke him inside ...he nvr imagined a mistake of his father wiud evr lead him to such hurtfullness...yes he was broken ..hurt ..wat happened??

#flashback#
Randhir entered his room whn his roommate jiggi was talking to his mother
jiggi:ha maa ...mene khana kha liya he ..kitne sawal karte ho aap
randhir gave him a smirk
jiggi:ha ma thik he ..arey uska naam ramveer nh randhir he..
He lookd at him
jiggi:ha use b bol dunga..mujhe kya pqta ma..?? Chhodo abhi mujhe sona he gud nyt ..ha bas abhi gn
he finally ended his call
Randhir:kya hua jiiggi..??
Jiggi:randhir bhai vo meri mummy na kuch sweets bhej rhi he christmas paas he na
randhir:christmas..??
Jiggi:ha mujhe bachpan se christmas ka bohot shauk tha humare neighbour me ek christian aunty rehti thi unhone mom ko sab sikhaya tha u knw tree decoration..sweet making n all aur pata he ek bar kya hua me na...
Randhir:ok ok wait..usme mera naam kahase aaya ...kya tum chahte ho k me santa ban k tumhe chocolate dene aau
jiggi:nh bhai vo ma ne aap k liye b bheje he swweeets ...is liye wapka nam puchh rhi thi..
Randhir:ha ramveer...!!!
Jiggi:vese bhai ek baat puchu ..?? Dnt get mad at me ha..
Randhir:bolo...
Jiggi:aap k mom...mom ne kabhi kuch nh bheja ..or qap to unhe call b nh karte asa q
randhir's face expressions channged as soon as he heard his mon'name
stil jiggi continued:mera matlab tha k aap ko unki yaad nh ati ..aap unse baat kiye bina kese reh rahe ho..me to mom se baat nh k to incomplete feel karta hu ..aapko pata he mom sabse achha support hoti he..alwayz wid us...alwayss loving us...nvr leave us alone...mom is great n i love my mom
randhir:shut up jiggi..enough is enough...i've already warned u nt to talk abt my mothr...y dnt u undstnd...
Jiggi:bhai vo me bas...
Randhir:kya vo me...suno jiggi dis is d last tym m telling u dnt ask me anythng abt my mother...
Jiggi:thik he bhai ...par ek baat bolu aapko ase unse gussa nh karna


akhir vo mom he jo bolengi achha h bolengi
randhir:aur agar kuch bole h na to..she has no place in mah life ...she left me ..

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