Never Too Late - A D3 FanFiction [Updated Chapter 18- Page 69]8-9-2014

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Amazing part looking for next part soon

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

amazing update 😃 can't wait for the next one

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Woah... Nyce concept n very well written... Waiting for the next part😊

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesome update 😊

U described the filmy plot beautifully

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Why are we not getting PMs for this?😳

P.S : pura film set-up, impressed! 😳

Edited by muzzy_sk - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

nice one yr.. 😃
swayam have to talk to sharon 4 kriya, waiting 4 next part.
nd thanks 4 d pm

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Really cool update !!
I love the way you portray every situation so realistically!!
The Kriyam bond is just fab !! Phone conversation *thumbs up*
Sharon's character just went frm being a so called Diva to an intense and interesting person...
Love the authenticity in the way you described the shot...
Good going !!
Waiting for the update ...
And thanks for the pm !! :)

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

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unres

amazingg update

the way you narrate your story is very nice

it has a very strong n well formed dialogs

coming to ur update

it was brilliant

the coffee portion was beautifully penned

the kriyam convo was straight n light-hearted

the convo b/w swayam n his frn was realistic n practical

but in the end the way you wrote the filmy sequence

was very accurately n nicely penned

all in all a very well formed pleasing read

looking forward to ur updates

do update soon 😃

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

the chapter was good... full on film... swayan is get rest less becuase of her
coffee not arrived of sharon and is look into it and next kriya is harries her friend swayan
to help her out in the find of reyaansh and sharon knows him to...
do continue soon and pm me

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Hell long time u'hv taken...dat too an incomplete update...
Anyways...film set was very well described...same with swayam's monologue...sharon's pov...1st time...nyc..i liked it...
Overall it was amazing...bt increase the length plz