Arshi SS Key to your heart..Chapter 15...*COMPLETED*

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Fantastic update.

Anjali and Akash plan her sudden arrival in AR and that too to see designs of coming fashion show especially, very smart.

She saw sparks fly between Arnav and khushi and she knew very well whats going on with her chotte's mind and heart. She is observing everything very closely. She even tease them in the end.

Sheetal and khus are becoming very good friends. In the party though Arnav was with Akash but he was having a close eye on khushi, he was mesmerize of her simple beauty.

The effect of previous night and Arnav tying khushi the waistlet is making khushi shy and profusely blushing. She is falling in love. I love khushi's sarees.

The end was lovely and romantic. The night ended pretty well. I am guessing sleep will far from their eyes this night as well. They can't stop thinking about each other.

Can't wait to read more about this lovely story.

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

thanks fir the pm

arshi rabbave in air now

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic update.
Anjali and Akash plan her sudden arrival in AR and that too to see designs of coming fashion show especially, very smart.
She saw sparks fly between Arnav and khushi and she knew very well whats going on with her chotte's mind and heart. She is observing everything very closely. She even tease them in the end.
Sheetal and khus are becoming very good friends. In the party though Arnav was with Akash but he was having a close eye on khushi, he was mesmerize of her simple beauty.
The effect of previous night and Arnav tying khushi the waistlet is making khushi shy and profusely blushing. She is falling in love. I love khushi's sarees.
The end was lovely and romantic. The night ended pretty well. I am guessing sleep will far from their eyes this night as well. They can't stop thinking about each other.
Can't wait to read more about this lovely story.

A big huggie for you dear...thank you for this awesome feedback...believe me..it motivates me a lot...well...the next part was going to start on a different day..but after reading your comment...i just might insert a small section dedicated towards the party's after effect the same night...😉...keep commenting and once again..thank you..your comment means a lot to me

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Really really nice n romantic update.

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Nice update! Though Arnav giving Khushi a lift would have been cuter... Oh well, things don't go that fast in real do they..

hi..thnx for the comment...😊...well..arnav dropping khushi would hav been kinda repetitive at this point...hence i chose sheethal...i might inlcude more romantic moments to sort of set a steady pace and not to quicken things up...

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

jasoos Anjali happened to gathers some hints about her chotta n khushi

haw khushi u don't like men with stubble but they look more manly n hot with stubble

rating men hmmm seriously sheetal

nice update

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: aayt
jasoos Anjali happened to gathers some hints about her chotta n khushi
haw khushi u don't like men with stubble but they look more manly n hot with stubble

rating men hmmm seriously sheetal

nice update

that rating guys part was autobiographical...😉...thanx for the comment...xoxo

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago