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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Hey
Vindhya u making me confuse yr... U mentioned on topic that story closed and here a new beggining
Plz explain na whats going on exactly;??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
I closed this story but i am starting this again... After updating trailer, net got disconnected so i couldn't update topic.. Before i could send PM with clear info, you people read and got confused...
---asyarshilover
---Anjinie
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Wht the... But y... Hey pm me... Whn ll u updt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
I had read your this FF in one go it is amazing...😛 and trailer is shocking...😲
Plz pm me next update...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Omg that was hilarious
Why they declined
Btw crazy family
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
new beginning ??
i am waiting for the update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
confused.
now i really cant wait for it.
plz update soon.
hey are u from andhra?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Guys We Need Video Messages for Karan that how much you love him as Asad. Please send it soon till Today Midnight LAST TIME WE ARE ASKING NO MISSUSE WILL HAPPEN DON'T WORRY HAVE FAITH

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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Finally u r starting!!!!
AsYa ko Nikha qubool kyun nahi hai!!????
I m confused!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Friends... This my last part of Meri Duniya in this forum... I am transferring my Asya FF and SS to Fan Fiction Forum... No KSG = No QH Forum... Here comes Part 33... Please do read and Comment...
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Part 33:

Asad's Room:

Asad is busy talking with a client in his phone... Najma came there knocking door...

Najma - BJ...??!!!

Asad - ha Najma... One minute...

Asad spoke his last words to his client and disconnected his call...

Asad - Kya chahiye Tamatar...???

Najma - BJ, mujhe aapka laptop chahiye... Meri laptop mein internet kaam nahi kar rahi hai...

Asad - teekhe... Kaam hone ke baad kamre mein rakh dena aur teri laptop mujhe dedo... Mein Raghav (Asad's secretary) ko uss problem ko teekh karne ke liye dedunga...

Najma - It's ok BJ, Zoya dekh rahi hai...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi...??!!! Kaha hai woh..???

Najma - Apni kamre mein...

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Najma's Room:

Najma opened her laptop and typed names from her mobile in Google which she copied from tablet strips from Asim's room... Google search engine is God of Knowledge... Whenever we are stuck in problem we pray god and use google... Google tala ko humare salam...!!!!

Najma is waitin for results when she saw Nikhat coming to her...

Nikhat - Kya kar rahe hai Baji...??

Najma - Kuch nahi Nikhat... Assignment ki kaam... Kal se college jana hai na...

Nikhat - Kya mein madatt kar doon...???

Nikhat took her steps towards her... Najma raised her defending her not to come...

Najma - Nahi... Nahi... Mein kar lungi...

Luckily Dilshad called Nikhat, Najma got saved from her... Najma waited for results... It showed some 1 lakh results... She opened first two links in new tabs... Web pages loaded as slowly as they can... When we play games or watch movies, we will experience the fastest internet access, but when we have some important work to do same network will give worst experience... After restless minutes web page got loaded... She read few dreadful sentences... She almost lost control of her... Result was a bombshell...

Najma - Yeh cancer ki tablets hai... Par Asim... Hai Allah...!!! Yeh sach nahi ho sakta... Mujhe iske anth tak jaa kar sach jaana hai... Asim ko poochne se kuch nahi batayega... Mujhe kudh jaanna hai...

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Zoya's Room:

Zoya is busy with Najma's laptop... There chips on bed and coke near laptop... Wraffers were thrown hear and there and small pieces of chips are lying on the floor... Zoya's involvement in the work, didn't allow her to see who is there in the room... Asad was annoyed with her dirty room but couldn't take his eyes off Zoya... She is working so seriously yet with an innocence playing on her face... He felt like touching her soft cheeks and play with her lips...Hearing foot-steps, Zoya thought it as Najma...

Zoya - 2 minute Najma, hogayi hai... waise Najma, tu mujhe iss kaam ke liye fees kya dene waali hai...

Before she could say another word, she felt warm lips on her soft cheeks... Her eyes gre big with her gumed lips, She understood whose lips was that... She was straight and stiff not turnig her head... Her heartbeat is visible to her ears, thumping harder and fast... Asad stood smirking seeing her cheeks turning red... Her blushful smile flushed every moment of pain from his life... Zoya controlling her heartbeat stood up, turned towards him...Asad rose his eyebrows up and then down, asking her question, what is she surprised for..??

Zoya - Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai...??

Zoya collected words to question him trying hard not to show her blush... Asad came and hugged her from back...

Asad - kya...??? Mein ne kya kiya...??!!

Asad questioned innocently pretending to have no clue about what she is talking... Zoya reluctantly tried to part from him... But his hard grip around her failed her to move away...

Asad - jab tak nahi batayenge, tab tak nahi chodunga...

Zoya (Blushing) - Mr. Khan...!!!!

Asad - Miss. Farooqi...!!!

Zoya controlling her smile, smacked on his hand around her waist... She turned towards him still under his grip...

Zoya - Aap kitna badmash hogaye Mr. Khan...???!!!

Asad - Kya karoon jab se ek bubbly badmash se pyaar hua hai, tab se badmash hogaya hoon...

Zoya (Surprised) - Aap teekh toh hai na...???

Asad - Nahi... Pyaar ka bhukaar chada hai...

Dilshad - humein woh dikh raha hai...

Asad, Zoya turned towards voice parting them... Embarrasment rounded them... Dilshad with a smirk twisted his ears...

Dilshad - Kya ka raha tha...???

Asad - Ouch...!!! Ammi.. Kuch nahi... Mein sirf Zoya ko yeh batane aaya tha ki mein office jaa raha hoon aur usse bhi office mein drop kardunga...

Dilshad - Accha...

Dilshad left his ear...

Asad - Sach mein ammi... Zoya, chalo office ke liye daer ho raha hai...

Asad and Zoya left from there leaving smling Dilshad back...

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Najma's Room:

Najma was lost thinking all happenings and non-happenings around her... She was dumb-struck to see these tablets in his desk... She is retless to know what's happening with Asim... She was ignorant of Asad and Zoya's presence... Zoya went and moved her with shoulders...

Zoya - Najma...!!! Kaha kho gaye ho...??? Teekh toh ho na...???!!!

Najma - ha Zoya...

Asad - Are you sure Tamatar...???

Najma - Yes bhai jaan... Yeh lijiye aapka laptop... Kaam katam hogaya hai...

Asad took laptop worrying about Najma... Zoya and Asad were out leaving Najma in the room... Zoya observed Asad's changing expression...

Zoya - kya hua Mr. Khan...????

Asad - Tamatar... Tamatar pareshaan lag rahi thi...

Zoya - Aapko issa kyun laga...???

Asad - woh mujhe BJ bhulati hai... par aaj uss ne Bhai jaan kaha hai...

Zoya - Aap kuch zyada soch rahe hai Mr. Khan... Study tension hoga... Finals ho raha hai na...

Asad - Shayad aap teekh hi keh rahe hai...

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Outside Khan Mansion:

Asim - Moti, nikha se pehle hi party change kar li... Humesha office emein drop karta tha, abb Asad ke saath jaa rahi ho...

Zoya - Shut up Asim.. Nautanki matt kar...

Asim smiled and Asad smirked... Asad and Zoya drove from there... Asim got a call which stopped him getting into car...

Asim - Hello... Ishika...!!!

Asim was silent for a moment...

Asim - yaad hai ki mujhe kal tumse milna hai... Teekhe mein 10 baje tak waha pahunch jaunga...

Asim got into his car and disappeared in moments with no knowledge about Najma standing there and hearing his conversation... Najma decided to follow him next day to find the truth...

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Dilshad's House:

Dilshad, Zeenat and Asma are busy in kitchen preparing lunch for everyone... Farhaan came there disconnecting the call connected from his phone...

Farhaan - Phupi, aaj mein ghar shift ho raha hoon...

Dilshad - Kya hua Farhaan...??

Zeenat - itna achaanak...??!!!

Farhaan - Phupi aaj ammi, abbu India aarahe hai... Business ke saare papers ready hai, abbu ko aake finalize karna hai, issi liye aaj aarahe hai..

Asma - Tune pehle kyun nahi bataya... unn logon ko yahi lekar aajao...

Farhaan - Nahi Khala, woh take hue honge... ghar jaayenge toh aaraam karenge.. Baad mein, mein unhe zaroor leke aaunga...

Dilshad - Par, waha ke saare taiyariya, tum akele kaise karoge...??

Farhaan - ha... Yahi problem hai Phupi, mein soch raha tha ki mein Nikhat ko apne saath le chalu... woh meri madatt karegi...

Dilshad - Teekhe... Nikhat...!!!

Dilshad called her to Kitchen... Nikhat busy reading book came out with Dilshad's call...

Nikhat - Ha ammi...

Dilshad - tum Farhaan ko madatt kardo, Aaj uske ammi-abbu aarahe hai aur woh ghar jaa raha hai... woh akela saara kaam kaise karega...

Nikhat - Teekhe ammi, mein apni saath Najma aur Nuzzat ko bh le jati hoon...

Asma - Nuzzat apni dost ke ghar gayi hai... Kuch kitabe lane...

Zeenat - Najma bhi kaam se bahar gayi hai...

As no one is there to accompany... Nikhat went alone with Farhaan...

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Raziya's Cabin: Bashir and Raziya's Phone Conversation:

Bashir - Raziya, humein tender ka jo bhi info chahiye, woh sirf Ayaan ke laptop se mil sakta hai...

Raziya - Ayaan ke laptop se hum information kaise nikhalenge...???

Bashir - Mere pass ek plan hai...

Bashir explained her full plan... Evilness on there face is signified in there smile...

Bashir - Hum yeh plan, kal execute karenge...

Raziya - Hum taiyaar hai Bhai jaan...

Bashir - kudhafiz...

Raziya - kudhafiz...

Raziya disconnected her call...

Raziya (To herself) - Maaf kijiyega Anwar sahib, aapko iss khel mein fasna hi padega... taaki hum uss Gaffur Siddiqui ko itna dard de ki, woh kabhi soch bhi na paye ki kya kare...

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Dilshad Contructions: Ayaan's Cabin:

Ayaan is busy typing in his laptop... He opened google to find information about something... Advertisement of ring popped up in the web page...

Ayaan - Kitna sundar ring hai...

Ayaan, thought to himself for a moment... He clicked on the advertisement when web page got opened...

Ayaan - Mujhe, iss ring ko kisi ko dikha kar confirm karna chahiye... Agar koi ladki hogi toh perfectly bata payegi... Zoya ko dikhata hoon... Nahi, Zoya ko dikhaunga toh pura gang mein spread ho jayega... Najma, Nikhat and Nuzzat ko nahi...

His phone buzzed with Jia's name on it...

Ayaan - hey Jia.. sahi time pe call kiy tumne... Mein ek ring choose kar raha tha... Mujhe teri opinion chahiye...

Jia - Ring...??? Meri Opinion..??

Ayaan - Tumhe pasand aana zaroori hai, kyun ki saare ladkiyon ki pasand ek jaisi hoti hai...

Jia thought that he is selecting ring for her... Ayaan sent her ring picture... She loved it lot and informed Ayaan about same... Ayaan wished thank u... Ayaan disconnected call...

Jia (To herself) - Mein intezaar karungi Ayaan... tum yeh ring kud mujhe pehna ne tak intezaar karungi...

Ayaan - Humeira, iss tender success hone ke turant, mein kud tumhe iss ring pehnakar mera dil ki baat bataunga...

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Thanks For reading...

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P.s: Friends, I need your opinion... Shall I continue story in this script writing form.. I mean the way how i am writing now or in the bookish way...

Bookish Format Example:

He turned sensing her gaze, "Kya hua Zoya...??"

"Aap mujhe kabh chodke matt jana Mr. Khan..." She hugged him tight...

Scripted Format Example:

Asad - Kya hua Zoya..???

Zoya - Aap mujhe kabhi chodke matt jana Mr. Khan...

She hugged him tight...

Which Format u feel comfortable in... Please do reply, so that I can change my format...

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago

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