Aashlok OS:First love ...Honeymoon special....part3 updated...page17 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
ur os is sooo sweet like u 😳...loved it 😉
want to give a big hug dear🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: avi_ashi

meera.. the way u explain evry scene with pics is just amazing... loved it totally.. and do update 2nd part soon..cant wait dear..😳

thanks my sweety...

will update soon...😛❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti


loved it buddy..missing talking to u🤗

thanks buddy...me 2 missing our talks ...❤️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gomsy

ur os is sooo sweet like u 😳...loved it 😉
want to give a big hug dear🤗🤗🤗

thank u sooo much sweetheart...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aashlok OS-First Love...Honeymoon Special

Part 2









Shlok finally spoke we have to find some place to spend our night ...car will not start without a mechanic...saying this he started walking on the road...




Astha followed him silently...



After a short walk they found a hut ...

Shlok shouted if any body there...but no answer came...



He entered the hut ...astha too followed him...

Shlok:we have to spend the night here ...as its raining outside...and no network here...so we cann't contact anyone...




Astha:was just staring him ...she was trying to find answers of her questions that today why we came close to each other???...when we both hate each other sooo much...why i failed to keep him away from me???...but her heart was giving her just one answer that ...she still loves shlok...no matter how much shlok claims to hate her he too loves her...




They both were sitting near the fire which shlok lighted by gathering some woods from outside...but as the night was progressing it was getting more and more cold there...




Their clothes were wet tooo...astha was shivering badly...

Shlok noticed astha's state ...he get up and searched for something...luckily he got a white cloth there...

Shlok:astha u will catch fever ...as u r shivering sooo much please go and change your dress...

Astha:i am fine shlok...i don't need anything...

Shlok:i can see how fine u r ...go and change these...

Astha:i said na i don't need it shlok...

Shlok:u change it urself otherwise i will do it for u...



Astha:can feel the concern in his eyes...she took the cloth from his hands and went to change...but there was no place to change...her eyes questioned shlok...and he understood her hesitation...

Shlok:i m just outside ...u change ur dress comfortably...saying this he went outside...

It was heavily rainning ...shlok hardly managed to stand there...





After 5 minutes astha called him...shlok u can come inside ...i am done...

He entered inside all wet with water dribbling from his whole existence... but got totally mesmerised on seeing astha in that white dress...her dress was just upto her knees ...wrapped around her body leaving her milky white shoulders bare too ...






For seconds he forgot all things except this beauty standing infront of her ...she was feeling so nervous because of his gaze fixed on her...

Suddenly astha's scream bring him back to reality...he rushed to her ...



Shlok:what happened astha...tell me...



Before she could tell him anything she fell in his arms...



Shlok:astha ...tell me what happen to u ...please speak to me... but she was losing her consciousness...




Suddenly shlok noticed a snake crawling outside through the door slit...he now got that what happened ...he searched for bite place on astha's body ...


Soon he found the bite mark ...it was on her leg a little above her ankle...

Shlok immediately tore a piece from his shirt and tied it tightly on her leg above the bite to prevent spread of poison... and then he started sucking poison from the bite mark on her leg and spit it on the floor...he repeated this thing for sometime to remove all the poison...

Slowly astha started gaining her senses back...she was still semi- conscious when she heard shlok's voice... astha i will not let anything happen to you ...you are purpose of my life...you are just mine...nothing will happen to you ...


She could feel his love for her... at the moment...she got answer for her all questions...

Shlok was tapping her cheeks continuously with her hands asking her to open her eyes...to speak to him...after sometime she opened her eyes completely...she was fully conscious now...



Shlok:thank GOD u open ur eyes...he kissed her forehead in happiness...



Shlok:how r u feeling now???...r u ok???...




Astha nodded her head in yes...

She tried to say something but shlok put a finger on her lips and asked her to relax and take some rest...

He picked her in her arms and made her to lie on the hay near fire so that she feels warm...




Shlok:astha u take some rest ...i will be back in few minutes with some fruits for u ...u need energy...

Her eyes filled with tears as she saw his concern for her...his love for her...which he always hide under the mask of his revenge...


Astha held his arm and asked him not to go...but he caressed her cheek and said...don't worry i will be back in five minutes...

Shlok went and brought some fruits for her in few minutes as he promised astha to be back soon...

He feed her fruits inspite of her refusing to eat...



After eating something she was much better now...

Shlok :now u should sleep astha...u need rest too...


Astha wanted to ask him that... why u always lied to me that u don't love me...when u are having the same feelings for me as i m having for u...but then she thought ...this is not the right time to ask him...thinking this she soon entered sleep valley...



After making sure that astha has slept shlok lie down opposite to astha on other side of fire as he was still wet...and it was very cold there...



Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whoo... an insight into our future track... as usual apt pictures dear...
kinda reminded me of season 1 but still this is more HAWT!!!😆

please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anusha16

whoo... an insight into our future track... as usual apt pictures dear...

kinda reminded me of season 1 but still this is more HAWT!!!😆

please update soon...

thanks sweety...love u 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
but this will be different...
😛😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meera, tumne shlok aur Astha ka HM track likh Dala 😊 Good one!
Edited by Operaqueen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Operaqueen

Meera, tumne shlok aur Astha ka HM track likh Dala 😊 Good one!

thanks sweety...but more to come soon😛😳😳😳😳...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

thanks sweety...love u 🤗
but this will be different...
😛😳


I know dear... you better make it different else na... ( just kiddin...😆)

cmere...🤗

but one thing... let the next update better be HAWT HAWT HAWTTER!!!!😆

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