#3, My Heart Whispers , but I can't hear..Part-33 to 42 - Page 53

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Really loving ur work!

Originally posted by: -LECHU-

beautiful dear...👏 👏

shlok's inner turmoil

has started hurting me...its so intense...

for me,i never read your stories for leisure

i feel it ...every word..

so his pain pricks me...

however short is his life,

i wish he gets all happiness

he deserves...

iam sure even cvs of soap writers

cant even frame such an intense

love story like you...👏 👏

well done ...

i love you🤗...i respect you😊

commenting for your works are a bitter

task for me bcoz,i sometimes find myself

out of words...may be bcoz am a very sensiive person

Peace, my heart, let the time for the parting be sweet.
Let it not be a death but completeness.
Let love melt into memory and pain into songs.
Let the flight through the sky end in the folding of the wings over the nest.
Let the last touch of your hands be gentle like the flower of the night.
Stand still, O Beautiful End, for a moment, and say your last words in silence.
I bow to you and hold up my lamp to light you on your way

Originally posted by: latha_555

nice update as always

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

wah jeenia...wah...

superb yaar...awww shlok he is so cute...na bhi karta hai or care bhi karta hai...fir bhi accept nahi karna hai...how rude he is...😉

Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Lab namak rame na misri
Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Tujhe preet purani bisri..
Mast Maula, mast Kalander
Tu hawa ka ek bavandar
Bujh ke yun andar hi andar
Kyun reh gaya.

Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera maan jaa
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan...

but aastha never give up easily...uska emotionally blackmailing chalu hi hai...now she is order to him where is my ice cream...just like salaam namaste...i need this chocolate flavours... i need another flavour...😆 or shlok ko pura karna padega...morning sickness part was so nice...personal experience hoga na aap ka...coz mom kehti hai aisa hota hai pregnancy me...and yes i agree with you... I think pregnancy is bigger disease than blood cancer...

arz kia hai

Jal chuke kwab to woh aag bujhane aaye,
Ek naye dhang se woh hume sataney aaye,
Mom ke pul se guzar kar jana tha humein,

Aur woh shama ban kar sath nibhame aaye...

shukriya shukriya...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear...first of all i have not watched salaam namaste but as i am getting feedback, i think, the track is alike... it was on live in relationships na?

ya, she is torturing him, emotional blackmail aur wo becharaa bura fansa huya hai... don' worry not much time to go now...

morning sickness was really my personal experience,, at that time i always needed my hubby around to support me...

aur wo na na karte bhi han kar hi jata hai har baar...

I think pregnancy is bigger disease than blood cancer...

This is my personal favorite line form the complete update...

wonderful shayari s always...and moreover i loved the song you referred above...which movie?

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Thanks dear...yeah salam namaste is based on live in relationship...starting prity zinta and saif ali khan...and this song is my fav...ye jawani hai diwani se hai, kabira...lovely song...you also like it...and I must you are very lucky because you have wonderful family...your hubby like shlok and you like aastha...made for inch other...😛

Hum? She asked with closed eyes...

Why are you suffering so much? What's the need? He caressed her pulling closer into his arms and placing soft kiss on her hair...

Because I love you stupid and i need you forever in my life... She smiled softly.

What is this nonsense Astha? Get up from ground and go to bed...Shlok shouted at her...

Only when you will sleep on bed with me... Astha too spoke loudly...

Its not possible but you are not lying on floor, saying he picked her in his arms and softly laid on bed. While Astha too pulled his arm and made him lay on bed...

Let me go yaar...its...difficult for me...Shlok spoke almost pleading...

Difficult? But why? Astha spoke with naughty smile...

Shut up astha...shlok was irritated...you know , I mean how will I manage sleep near you on bed, how m I supposed to control myself...I mean...no way...he spoke...

but Astha pulled him closer placing her head on his chest and wrapping her arm around him...ummm...as you were controlling yourself in the police station on the way to Pune...remember? She smiled...

Humph...Shlok sighed..nahi manogi? He looked at her...☺️

Uhuun...either we both on bed, or I will be on floor... Astha spoke naughtily...

Demn...why I have to lose all the time from you...speaking shlok too wrapped his arm around her pulling her closer... While Astha placed a good night peck on his cheek sleeping into his arms with a smile...😳😳😳😳

And this was sooo cute and hilarious...

I think pregnancy is bigger disease than blood cancer.

so heart touching part...loved it sooo much...

You know, how much I love you...how much I need my family...but I can't be with you and our baby Astha...I want to be with you, but I can't till you leave your rigidness...I want to feel my baby...I want to touch our baby... But I can't, because i know, once I feel it in your body...once I feel it as part of our life...I will never be able to stand on my decision...you know Astha... how much I loved children...how much I wanted our baby after our marriage...

Why did you come back? Why could not you go away Astha? Why are you making me wish to live...to live long? I want to carry my baby in my hands, I want to feed our baby...I want to play with our babies, I want to laugh with them, cry with them, scold them, teach them... I want to see each and every small moment of our baby...he sighed with tears...but I know, its not possible in my life..then why? Why are you showing me those dreams which can never be fulfilled... he wiped his tears...

so total mila ke i loved it...

i loved it...

i loved it...

i loved it...

i loved it sooo much...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">@ Meerab...
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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">@ Ridzy...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">@Niki...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Yr you are my friends na then whya re yuo making me fat and fat and fat...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Mere miyan ji mujhe chod ke bhag jayenge...😭😭😭aur meri angel to pehle hi kehti hai, muje slim mamma chahiye...😭😭😭...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Jokes apart...thanks a lot dear.i really feel blessed having friends like you...</font>