Arshi OS: Thanks, NOTE ON PG 17

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

This is so simple yet so beautiful OS ever , Love their choti si Duniya...

Thnx Aami...😊

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

A very heart warming and meaningful story, said in such simple words...👏

No matter we say that actions speak louder than words, we some times need words to say and hear those feelings...verbal expression of feelings has been only bestowed to us humans...

So when KKG, who is so vocal in all her deeds, wants her husband, who is seldom vocal, to express his love in words, I don't think she is expecting much...and how beautifully her loving husband fulfilled her wish, albeit in his own style...beautifully written...

Edited by mimosa658 - 11 years ago

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iris_iris2

@iris_iris2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

It was a beautiful thought. But I feel like you were in a hurry. It would have a much better effect, I mean the basic outline was great! But the way you have ended it hastily was a bit like..vacuum was created. Its not a criticism i enjoyed it but still felt something left out..

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Sigh...Just lovely! He can melt anybody with his words when he finally speaks them! Great job!👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

that was so cute
so he did tell her what he is thankful to her for
basically making his life that-much brighter

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Beautiful. Once in a while everyone should do this no? Let your family know how thankful we are to have them in our life. Arnav acted just like how he would, he is not open about this feelings like Khushi. Loved his bedroom confession.

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

that was such a sweet os
loved it
especially the last part

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

😭 these r happy tears, i only cry when something touches me deeply and ur story did that, and here i am, crying! i love reading about arnav and khushi post marriage, always clutches my heart somehow, and ur shot is perfect - it's truly beautiful, really sweet and full of pyaar and lovely sentiment, loved it 😛