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Posted: 18 years ago
hi rameena ur ff iz jus 2 good...will be waitng 4 ur nxt part...cont soon... 😊
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Come Fall In Love.......

" Raah - e - Ishq "

Hmmm itnay Lambay intezaar Kay Baad chalo ab aagay bardtay hain.......
Kyun, Cozzzzzzzzzzz

In my life I learned how?

2 love

2 smile

2 be happy

2 be strong

2 work hard

2 be honest

2 be faithful

2 forgive

but

I couldn?t learn how..

2 stop rembering u All.


Soooooo, I remembered that its been an year and I havent completed my Story Yet....
Sooooo Im completing it..


Soooooo Kashish, Kanan, Soniya Pics dekh rahay hain utnay may Door Bell Ring hoti hain aur
Chameli Door par dekhti hai ki Ek lardi hain.Chameli us lardki ko ghour se dekhti hai aur
enquiries shuru kardayti hain..Utnay main kashish wahan aati hain aur dekhti hain ki khushbu
chameli ki achchi khasi raging karrahi hai,Jaise kashish ko khushbu dekhti hain woh chameli
ko side may karti hain aur andar aajati hain..
Kashish Khushbu ko Nani say Introduce karwati hain ki wo Kashish ki Ek achchi dost hain, par
soniya aur Kanan jaan layti hain ki Khushbu Sujal ki friend hain...
Chalo poora Din khushbu sab ko paka dayti hain...Khushbu aayi to Lunch kay liye thi par
Dinner time hochuka hain aur khushbu jaanay ka naam nahi layrahi hain.
Raat may Mr Sujal Ghar pahonch jaatay hain Khushbu ko pick up karnay kay liye..
Nani ko pata chalta hai ki khushbu aur sujal dono ghar par akelay hain kyun ki
veena, swayam aur Rewa holy visit to gaon gaye hain aur CG office kay kaam say
Mumbai gaye huay hain.......Nani insists Kay khushbu aur sujal yahin ruk jayen...
Sujal laakh minnatay karnay par ruk jaata hain......

Its Evening.......

Every one had a lovely dinner...Kanan, soniya and Khushbu Plans to go for a walk as its
really amazing weather...They go out.
Kashish stays back as Nani's health is not good and even chameli had gone with kanan and Party...
Sujal takes Nani to her room and as kashish is giving medicines to Nani he is engaged in talking
to her, laying Blanket on Legs..

Making Nani feel comfortable...
Kashish- sujal ko hi dekhti rahti hain par sujal pata nahi kis dhun main hain..
Itnay main electricity chali jaati hain, Sujal lights his lighter and sees Kashish through the flame....
Hawa Kuch zor say chalnay lagti hain...Aur sab curtains horror film kay curtains ki tarah urdnay lagtay hain..
Aur phir...

(One Request - Plzzzzzzzz turn on Ur stereos and njoy the song)

Musiccccccccc.......
Tin tin tin......... Tin tin tin....
Sujal's Soul Comes towards Kashish and blows air on kashish's hair from behind ....
S'Soul :Dekho na Dekho na....
Kashish looks at Sujal as sujal is sitting staring at kashish..
Kashish's soul takes a flower from Vase and hits the rose on sujal's Head-
dew drops falls on Sujal : Yeh Saajish hain Boondo
ki koi khwahish hain chup chup si dekho na dekho na..
S' Soul:Hawa kuch holay holay zubaan say kuch bolay bolay kyun doori hain darmiyaan,
Dekho na dekho naaaaa..
They search for the candle but candle ka pata nahi hain..
Nani : Kashish beta zara Chameli say kahna ki chiragh laga day, raat ko lights kab aayegi pata nahi..
Kashish: Nani chameli to khushbu kay saath gayi hain walk par,main abhi lamp lay kar aati hoon..
Kashish Neechay jati hain..
Sujal is still wondering kay woh kab neechay aaye..
Itnay main Nani ko yaad aata hain kay candle Closet main hain,
nani:Aray meri bhi matt mari gayi hain, mombatti toh yehi hain..
Nani starts to get up..
Sujal : Nani aap layto raho main laata hoon...
Sujal candle light karta hain aur room may laga daytay hain....
Nani ko pata hain ki Kashish ko undheray say bahut darr lagta hain...
Nani : sujal zara ja aur kashish ko bula la,woh itnay andheray main kahan candle dhoondaygi...
Sujal is so excited & he comes down....
Yahan Kashish lamp ko table par rakhti hain aur jab light karnay kay liye Lighter jalati hain.
Sujal Fatak say kashish kay peechay aajata hain, kashish is scared...She turns aur
andheray main sujal ko dekhkar darr jaati hain...
Kashish : sujal tum, tumnay toh mujhe dara hi diya..
as she starts lighting the lamp sujal kashish ka haath pakard layta hain aur flame bujha dayta hain...
Kashish thorda gussay say haath churdana chahti hain...
Kashish : Ab aap yahan kisliye aaye hain..
Sujal :Tumharay liye, Nani nay khud bheja hain..
Kashish : Sujal haath chordo koi aajayega..
Sujal : Toh aanay do..
Kashish : Plz chordo na Lamp toh light karnay do , Aur nani bhi akeli hain..
Sujal leaves her hand she lights the lamp..
kashish takes lamp in her hand...
Sujal kashish kay haath say Lamp laykar Table par rakh dayta hain aur
itnay main khirdki say taizzzzzzzz hawa andar aati hain
aur kashish jaise khirdki kay paas jaanay lagti hain, sujal holds one end of the dupatta and sings..

Sujal : Phir na hawaye hongi itni bay sharam,
Phir na dag mag hongay yeh kadam....

Kashish : Sawaan yeh seedha nahi khoofiyan barda,
kuch toh barastay huay kah raha..

Sujal : Samjho na samjho naaaaaa.....
Samjho na samjho naaaaaa.....

Sujal lamp ko buja dayta hain..

Kashish :Hawa kuch holay holay,
zubaan say kuch bolay bolay,
kyun doori hain darmiyaan,
Dekho na dekho naaaaa..

Kashish, sujal dono lamp Nani kay kamray main rakh dayatay hain aur
Balcony main baith kar asmaan may taaron ko dekh rahay hain..
Sujal aur kashish dono bahut chup hain.
Itnay khamosh hain Shayad ek doosray ki company enjoy karrahay hain...(I think so)
Sujal stands up ,takes sum steps forward, laughs to himself and comes back.
Kashish is soo amazed..
Kashish thinks: wats happening to him...
Sujal comes Back and sits again...
Sujal breaks the silence..
Sujal : Kashish kuch kahna nahi hain..
Kashish : mujhe nahi toh.
Phir Sujal chup hojata hain...
Woh sonch raha hain ki kashish say kya kahu....
They both then start at once..
Sujal : Kashish.
Kashish : Sujal.
They start laughing..
Kashish : Sujal, ab kya kahun..jab tum paas nahi hotay mujhe tum say itna
kuch kahna hota itna kuch sunna hota hain, par....
Sujal : par Ab kuch nahi hain kahnay ko, kuch nahi hain bas main hoon aur bas Tum ho ..Hain na.
Kashish : haan sujal.I wish yeh pal yehin ruk jaye aur hum kabhie alag na ho...Sujal hum kabhie alag toh nahi hongay na.
Sujal : Kashish, Hum kabhie Alag nahi hongay, I promise.
haan yeh baat aur hain ki...
Kashish : ki kya ?
Sujal : Nahi jaanay Do, tum nahi sun paogi...
Kashish : sujal, bolo toh kya baat hain...
Sujal : its ok kashish jaanay do khamakhan gussa hojaogi.
Kashish : sujal, main gussa nahi hongi tum kaho toh..
Sujal :Ok, kuch baatein abhi clear ho jayien toh achcha hain, warna baad main shayad.
Kashish : Haan Bolo main sun rahi hoon..
sujal : Haan toh Main subah 8 bajay say pehlay nahi utunga, aur khana aap pakayengi aur agar
kaam waali bayi nahi aayi toh thorda kaam main zaroor karungi...Baakhi rahgayi bachcho ki baat
un ullu on ko main dekhlunga...
Kashish : WAT...
sujal :manzoor ho toh kaho warna,mumma ki nazar main bahut saari lardkiyan hain
jo meray liye sab kaam karlengi..
Kashish starts laughing...and hits him...

Sujal and kashish again sits quietly...

Kashish : pata nahi yeh sab kabhie sach hoga ya nahi,Kaash yeh waqt
yehi tham jaye...yeh subah kabhie naho... Pata hain kyun...
Sujal looks at Kashish...
Kashish : kyun ki yeh subah tumhay mujh se door kardaygi..
Sujal holds Kashish's hands ...
Sujal : kashish, Main chahay jahan bhi rahun par humesha tum mera ahsaas
bankar meray saath rahogi aur rahi subah ki baat main chahta hoon ki subah ho aur woh hum dono
kay liye khushiya laaye..
Both are looking at each other,Kashish stares at sujal and suddenly bursts into laughter..
Sujal : Madam ab kya hua.Abhi toh tum itni serious thi aur abhi has rahi ho...
lagta hain yeh aurton ko samajhna meray bas ki baat nahi hain..
Kashish is still laughing..
Sujal : kashish, bolo yaar kya hua.
Kashish : Sujal main sonchrahi thi ki tumhari naak thordi si..
Sujal : thordi si, thordi si wat ?
Kashish : Kuch nahi..Aur tumhari Smile..
Sujal : Meri smile aur .
Kashish : Aur Tumhari Ankhain..
Sujal : haan meri Ankhain..
Kashish :Kuch nahi.
Sujal : Waise

Now Kashish stands up and starts to walk , sujal grabs her hand, kashish stops
and turns and looks at sujal, and......
suddenly khushbu comes and attacks from behind...
kashish-sujal are startled...
khushbu : toh kya chal raha tha.
Kanan : A perfect scene from Romeo-juliet..
Nani calls and kashish goes while sujal is upset..
Khushbu : kya hua hero.
Sujal :Tum logon ko bhi abhi aana tha..
khushbu : sorry sujji.par better luck next time......

sujal goes to his room while khushbu decides to join kanan and soniya to their room...
Kashish is with nani....

Its Late Night...

Kashish is asleep with Nani as Khushbu is accompaning kanan and soniya while Sujal is given
a Luxurious Guest(Not honeymoon) Suite...
Khushbu along with kanan and soniya comes to sujal's room as they were not able to sleep.....
Sujal is Sleeping with his innocent charming childish style...
Khushbu enters through the window..and Dharam she falls on the sofa laid next to the window..
Kanan starts..
Kanan : khush dekh kar nahi chalsakti agar koi uth jata toh..
Khushbu : toh main kya darti hoon kisi say...ab tum apna lecture band karo.
Kanan : main lecture dayrahi hoon.
Khushbu : hey bhaggu .madam plz kuch kaam karay warna mission fail samjho..
Sonya :Aray dono lardna band karo plzz kuch agay karen..Khushbu plz jaldi bolo karna kya hain..
Khushbu : Soni, just follow me & dont ask questions...
Kanan : ji madam agay chalay hum dono ko thand lagrahi hain aur aap andar araam say khardi ho..
Khushbu moves and Kanan and soniya enters the room......
Khushbu sujal ko itna zor say jagati hain ki woh pareshaan hojata hain aur sujal ko sofa par
baithaya jata hain....
Sujal : Khushbu, kanan, Sonya yeh sab kya horaha hain..tum sab yahan-aise..
Khushbu : Hey sujji baby..Dont act smart haan..hum ek zaroori kaam say yahan aayen hain.
Sujal : Zaroori kaam aur Khirdki say aana yeh baat kuch samajh nahi aarahi hain..
Kanan : Haan Sujal yeh tumhari extra innings kuch bataye toh maloom hoga na..
Khushbu :Ha ! wah wah wah..Yahan to ek say bardkar ek dumbo hain..
Kabhie sherlock Holmes ko ya James Bond ko Darwazay say aatay huay dekha hain..
Sujal : khushbu dekho subah mujhe office jaana hain aur abhi raat kay 2 baj rahay hain...
seedhay bolo baat kya hain..
Khushbu : Ok, toh suno baat seedhi hain mujhe neend nahi aarahi thi aur main bore horahi
thi isliye main nay soncha ki kuch karna chahiye...
Kanan : Wat ?
Sonya : Bas itni si baat thi par tumnay to kaha ki kuch Mission hain..
Kanan aur sonya, Sujal kay bed par hi laite jaati hain...
Khushbu :Haan hain na **Mission wartalaaap**, par uskay liye mujhe sujal ki help chahiye...
Sujal : Khushbu are you mad, tum chahti ho ki raat kay 2 bajay main tumharay kisi silly
plan ka hissa banu kyun ki tumhay neend nahi aarahi hain.....
Khushbu : Baat sirf meri nahi balki tumharay aur Kashish ki hain..
Sujal : ab kashish kahan say aagayi is plan may..
Khushbu : Pehlay tum promise karo ki tum humara saath dogay toh phir main plan bataungi...
Sujal : theek hain agar baat kashish ki hain to main tumhara saath dunga par plan kya hain...
Khushbu, Sujal, soniya aur Kanan charon kuch discuss kartay hain..Bahut serious par Sujal
bahut confused hojata hain...
Sujal : wat ? no, no ways, Have u gone mad..Tum nay soncha bhi kaise ki ...
Sujal :Khushbu just get out from here and let me sleep......
Sujal khushbu ko room say bahar kardayta hain aur.....
Khushbu : par suno to hey sujal......
sujal slams the door on khushbu's face and closes it..Khushbu knocks again, sujal
opens the door.........
Sujal : khushbu Good night......
khushbu : If u dont mind can i have them..
Sujal : kaun ????
Khushbu screams..........
Khushbu : aap dono apnay kamray main chalnay ka kasht karengay.........
Sonya & Kanan : Puhleelzzzzzzzzzz
Khushbu : toh chalo....
khushbu : Bye sujji baby but think about it.................
Sujal : Shut Uppppppppppppp.
Khushbu :Pachtaogay..Bahut Pachtaogay......
Sujal : Just get lost From here.

They all sleep........( Obviously In their respective rooms )

Its Morning:
In D'Girls Room.......
Khushbu : Hai Hai main marjawaana........
Kanan : Are you mad ? No I bet you cant, no ways aisa ho hi nahi sakta..
Sonya : Wat guys, Can any one explain me kya Nahi ho sakta..
Khushbu : kanny dont worry jab khushbu kuch decide karlayti hain toh..
Kanan : Toh kya ?
Khushbu : Toh woh kuch bhi karsakti hain..
kanan : soniya yeh khushbu pagal hogayi hain,yeh.....
Khushbu kanan kay mooh par haath rakhti hain aur usay kuch bhi kahnay nahi dayti...
Khushbu :Kanan kuch pate main nahi rahta kya tumharay..
Sonya : wats this guys..
Khushbu : soniya tumhay jaanna hain ki kya baat hain right.
Sonya : Haan,
Khushbu : Ok, pehlay mujhse promise karo ki tum sujal ko, kashish
ko aur kisi ko bhi yeh nahi kahogi, theek hain..
Soniya : ok baba promise, ab bata bhi dona ...its killing me.
Khushbu : Kandy yahan aao..
Khushbu, kanan and Soniya gather up and I think kuch bura honay waala hain.......
Hey guys agar bore hogaye ho toh bas ab aagay kuch aisa hoga kay bore say aap sab kaho gay moreeeee
Ya no more........Pata Nahi..

Soooooooo Wait N Watch, or simply Come Fall in Love with Sujal & Kashish........

Rameena...


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lovely part... 👏 ..gr8 work... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part 👏 ur doing a gd job 👏 👏 👏 , u knw sumthing i just read ur ff only because the way u protrait sujal n kashish's romantic love story is soooooooooo beautiful 😳 ,waiting to see sum more romantic scene of sujal n kashish 😉 ,and one more thing i love the way khushboo pulls sujal's leg 😆
and one more thing the fanaa songs, really suited the scene but........ it would have sounded nice if sujal n kashish were getting wet in rain (cos we all knw tat rain is their fav season,to do romance)
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Come Fall In Love.....

Its Noon.....
Every one is sitting in the Lawn....
Khushbu is laying on the ground....
Khushbu signals kanan and they both come and sit beside kashish......
Kanan : Kashish, sujal kahan hai.
Kashish : Woh toh subah hi office chala gaya.
Khushbu : achcha, par aaj toh sunday hai, aur sunday ko office..so elless na kanan..
Kanan : haan yaar, mujhe toh nahi lagta ki sujal yahan ruknay may interested hain, warna sunday aur office.
Kashish : tum log itna tense kyun horahay ho, sujal kah kargaye hain ki jaldi aajayengay..
khushbu : mujhe nahi lagta ki woh aayega.
Kanan : Tujhe kaise pata woh nahi aayega..
Khushbu : aray bachpan say uskay saath hoon, woh aisa hi hai, us ki life main sab say important woh hi hain aur koi
nahi..
Kashish : dont worry, woh zaroor ayega usnay mujhe kaha hain...
Kanan signals khushbu as nothing is working.....
Then Nani comes with Chameli....
Nani : Kya horaha hain, tum log kyun kashish ko tang karrahay ho..
Khushbu : Nani ji hum aur kashish ko No ways...woh toh hum raat ki baat karrahay thay..
Nani : haan raat ko neend kaisi aayi, sab theek tha na...
Khushbu : haan Naniji sab ek Dum solid tha....
Nani : solid, yeh kya hota hain..
Kanan : Nani solid bolay to sab theek tha.....
Soniya :Khushbu tu bhi na Nani ko itna tang matt kar..
Nani : koi gal nahi puttar, yeh meray saath aur kuch din rahegi toh theek kardungi isko...
Khushbu : Nani.Im sorry..Main toh aisi hi hoon, agar kuch ghalat kahdun na toh ek lagadayna..
Nani : Chal pagli, kya kahrahi hain....Bachchay masti nahi karengay toh kya main karungi, jo karna hain
kar koi tujhe kuch nahi kahega..
Khushbu sees kashish is busy with nani she goes and Calls Sujal.......
Khushbu : hi, sujji, kya chal raha hain..
Sujal : Khushbu, jaldi bolo kya bolna hai main ek bahut important conference may hoon.
Khushbu : Sujal, tumhari meeting kab khatam hogi..
Sujal : May be 3'0 clock tak kyun kuch kaam tha..
Khushbu : Haan bahut zaroori kaam hain aur ?
Sujal : Aur Kya ?
Khushbu : Abhi nahi bata sakti main sharp 3 ko tumharay office arahi hoon aur phir baat kartay hain..
Sujal : theek hain..
Khushbu ends the call..
At 2:30 Khushbu reaches the Office.......
Sujal comes out of his cabin....
Khushbu says that she has to do some shopping and everyone is busy at home...
Sujal tries to call kashish but khushu makes perfect arrangements such that
there is no contact between kashish and sujal..

Here Kashish even tries to call Him up but every time she calls Khushbu cuts the Call...
Sujal & khushbu is still in the market....
Sujal itna pareshaan hain,he is continously looking at his watch, kyun ki usnay kashish ko kaha
hain ki woh kaam hotay hi ghar aajayega aur phir dono kuch time saath spend karsaktay hain...
Par khushbu ki bachchi nay toh sujal kay naak main dum karrakkha hain....
Sujal sees a fast food joint &.......
Sujal : Khushbu Icecream kahogi..
Khushbu : haan par abhi nahi jab shopping poori hojayegi na tab..
Sujal : par mujhe toh abhi khana hain, tum aarahi ho..
Khushbu : ok, chalo...
Sujal & Khushbu is sitting and sujal is thinking kay woh
kaisay is bala say peecha churdaye...
Sujal suddenly sees one of his office employee and makes khushbu
comfortable with her.......
Sujal :Ohhh my Godddddddd ?
Khushbu : kya hua.
Sujal : khushbu, dont mind par mujhe ab jaana hoga.
Khushbu : par abhi meri shopping bhi poori nahi hui aur main akeli kya karungi..
Sujal : Naina, plz tum khushbu ko shopping karado, theek hain mujhe bahut
zaroori kaam say jaana hain..
Khushbu : No ways, hum saath aye thay aur saath hi jayengay...
Naina : khushbu ji dont worry i m best at shopping and i assure u that u'll have a great time with me.
Khushbu : Haan mujhe pata hai par...
Sujal : Par war kuch nahi tum naina kay saath shopping karna mai chalta hoon.
Khushbu :Hey sujallllll...
Sujal :Byeeeee.
Khushbu(Yeh kahan phas gayi mai) :Smiling to Naina.
Naina :Chalein.
Khushbu : haan chalo.

Sehgal Villa
Phone :Tring Tring.
Kashish : Kanan can u plz take the call ?
Kanan : No... Im busy.
Phone :Tring Tring.
Kashish :Kisnay call kiya hoga.
Kashish :Hello.
?
Kashish :Kaun, kyah......, Woh.., Laykin...,Par,...
Phone :blink.......

After some hours.....
Khushbu comes home....
She calls Kanan....
Kanan : khushbu, kahan hain tu aur Sujal ka kya haal hain..
Khushbu : Wat Sujal ka haal, mera haal bura horaha hain.
Kanan : Par hua kya...
Khushbu : Woh sab chord Sujal hain wahan....
Kanan : Sujal aur yahan...... wo toh tujhe pata hoga na.....
Khushbu : Oh my god.....
Kanan : Wat do you mean by Oh my god Sujal wahan hai ya nahi......
Khushbu : Kanan phone par nahi kah sakti main abhi wahan aarahi hoon, par kashish
toh wahan hain na...
Kanan : Haan yaar nani kay paas hogi.....
Khushbu : Theek hain I will be there in 15 mins..
Khushbu cuts the Call......

Chalo yeh dono toh busy hogaye Par Jaanna Nahi chahogay aap sab Kay Yeh Phone ka
Kya maajra hain........
So here we go.........
Abhi tak toh kuch aap sab nay guess karhi liya hoga......
Lettssss See who it was....
Sujal gets out of the Fast Food Center and calls Kashish......He asks kashish get ready and wait for him
outside sehgal villa and not to induldge any detail to anyone.....
Sujal picks up kashish and they head towards aaaaaaaaaaaaaa Lonnnnnnnnnnggggggg Drive......
Kashish : sujal aakhir baat kya hai, mujhe kuch bataogay bhi....
Sujal : Hai meri kismat, Main tumharay saath hoon aur tum baat ki baat karrahi ho..
Kashish : Sujal, Gardi roko..
Sujal : kya hua...
Kashish : Roktay ho ya nahi..
Sujal stops the car...
Sujal : Achcha baba ab bolo kya hua....
Kashish : Aaakhir yeh kya chakkar hain, wahan pehlay kanan aur ab tum, aakhir maamla kya hai......
Sujal : Baat bas itni hai ki humari khushbu, kanan aur sonya nay ek plan banaya tha kay hum
kisi outting par jayengay aur yeh baat manvaanay kay liye woh mujhe raat say tang karrahay hain..
Par main jaanta hoon tum yahan Nani kay liye ho aur waise bhi yahan Dad aur Mumma nahi hain,
Aisay main hum Picnic ko kaise jaasaktay hain...Bas khushbu ko shayad yeh sab achcha nahi laga aur
ab woh mujhe subah say itna tang karrahi hain....Pehlay office pahunch gayi, phir Cell layliya mera
aur Blah blah........
Kashish : Tabhi main sonch rahi thi kay tum aur mera call kyun recieve nahi karrahay thay,
Aur mujhe lagta hai ki is sab may kanan bhi shamil hain......
Sujal :Hosakta hai.
Khasish : Toh abb ?
Sujal : Abb Kya, Abb Hum wohi karengay Jo ...
Khasish :Jo woh chahengay.
Sujal : Array wah tum toh bahut intelligent hogayi ho meray saath rahtay.
Kashish : Sujallll........
Sujal : array baba main toh mazak kar raha tha... Im Sorry.
Sujal :Achacha lo maine apne kaan pakardta hoon Im Sorry.Im Sorry.
Kashish and sujal plans their new act and they proceed to Sehgal Villa...
Sujal drops Kashish at the Gate and tells kashish not to reveal to any one that she was with Sujal.
Sujal leaves to his house as he will be joining kashish in the evening for Dinner at Sehgal villa.
As kashish enters every thing seems to be tensed...
Khushbu & Kanan starts enquiring about kashishs where about..
Kanan : Kashish, kahan thi itni dair say,hum sab kitnay pareshaan horahay thay aur Sujal kaha hain..?
Kashish : main toh meri friend say milnay chali gayi aur Sujal toh office may hoga na..
Wait main abhi usay call karti hoon, pata nahi subah say uska phone try karrahi hoon par.....
Kashish : Haan kaha ho tum, tumhay meri koi fikr hain ya nahi, tum kah kar gaye thay kay tum jaldi hi
ghar aajagay par abhi 7 baj rahay hain aur tumhara koi pata nahi hain...
Theek hain jaldi aao...Bye..
Khushbu : Kya hua, kya kaha sujal nay, woh araha hai na..
Kanan : Kashish, tumnay sujal ko itni jaldi maaf kardiya..
Khushbu : Tum in lardko ko nahi jaanti, aakhir tumhari bhi koi Value hain...
Kanan : Main toh kahti hoon ki jab woh yahan aayega toh tum ussay baat hi matt karna...
Kashish :haan kanan shayad tum theek kah rahi ho....par...
Khushbu : (Yes to herself) Par war kuch nahi, bas tum sujal ko thorda neglect karo
aur phir dekho woh kaise tumharay aagay peechay ghoomta hain..
Kashish did her job aur khushbu aur kanan ko lagraha hain ki
woh apnay plan main kaamyaab ho rahay hain......

In The Evening Sujal arrives for Dinner & every thing goes accordingly, like kashish not talking with sujal..
Khushbu and Kanan Khush hoying etc etc..
Days pass and one Fine Noon there .......

Main kyun bataoonnnnnnn U all have to wait for the Next part and see for Ur self kay........No ways Im not going to reveal
Wats next....

Rameena..

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hey wow rameenaji..... 👏
kya baat hai finally u contd after a year almost....
m soooooooooooo glad..... 😛
gr8 gng..... 👏 👏 very very cute parts..... 😛 😛
will b waiting for ur next part.... 😳
plz dear update soon.... 😊
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lovely part again rameena.. 👏 ..jus loved it.. 😳 ...do cont soon.. 😊
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Come Fall In Love.......


"Kaun jaane kab maut ka paigam aa jaye,
zindagi ki akhari sham aa jaye,
hum toh dhundhte hain waqt aisa jab,
hamari zindagi apke kam aa jaye..."

So by this shair i want to say kay Humari Zindagi main najanay kitnay log
Aatay hain aur chalay jaatay,
Kuch waqt ban kar guzar jaatay hain toh kuch yaad ban kar dil main ghar
kar jaatay hain, Well dont run away main koi philosophy nahi karrahi hoon,
Par Is Part main kisi ko shamil kiya hain kyun ki Jis ka kaam usko bhaye
aisa Log kahtay hain...

So Introducing "Muzzamil Ibrahim as Aditya Sinha" all the way in Come fall
in Love with ? I dont know just Read,wait & watch wat the story unfold into...


Heyyyyyy Immmmm toooooooooooo Koooooooooooolllllllll Mannnnnnnnnn
Got it.Nooooooooo,
Kashish : Rishhi ....Tummmmmmmmmmm Aur yahannnnnn......
Rishi : Haan par main akela nahi hoon koi aur bhi tumsay milnay aaya hain..
Kashish : Mujhse kaun.....
Rishi : Guess...
Kashish : Batao na kaun hain...
Kashish is looking at the door to see who has come, while Sonya, khushbu And Kanan comes to meet
Rishi...
Khushbu & Kanan is in surprise...
Khushbu : toh yeh Rishi hai..
Kanan : haan, par yeh dude kaun hain yaar..
Kashish Screams with Surprise........
Kashish : Addu Tumm.......
Addu : Hi ! Chumssssss
Kanan: Chumssss, Yucccccckkkkkk.
Khushbu: How sweet.
Kanan : Ab tujhe kya hua..
Khushbu : Mujhe kuch nahi..
Kanan : Kahin tu aur ...
Khushbu : Me no noways, is langoor ka aur mera koi
connection ho hi nahi sakta. ( in her heart, waise itna bhi bura nahi hain..)
Aditya : Hi Babes, Lookking Lovely...( to sonya )
Rishi : oye, shes mine...Yaar
Aditya :Oops My mistake, waise Namaste bhabhiji.
Sonya : Heye, ab main itni old fashioned bhi nahi hoon, U can call me sonya.
Kashish : hey addu tum dono phir shuru hogaye..Rishi agar tum logo ko fursat milgayi ho toh zara yahan aaogay ,
Kashish takes Addu towards Khushbu & Kanan..
Kashish : Kanan- khushbu yeh Addu hain, I mean Aditya sinha, aur addu yeh meri Cousin - Kanan.
Aditya : Hi Kanan...
Kanan : Hello. ( Rookha sookha, waala )
Kashish : Hey khushbu..
Khushbu turns and sees Addu...Scene itna intense horaha hain, Zara ghor kariye....
Nani comes and Kashish goes towards her..
Aditya : Hi, ( He flanks his hand towards Khushbu to shake hand )
Aray khushbu tum kaha atak gayi aagay bardo yaar haath to mila lo..
Addu its seems is stuck by Khushbus beauty, aur humari khushbu pay bhi kuch effect horaha hain,
yeh mulakat jaanay kya rang laaye...
Addu baychara is duniya ka ab nahi raha, par yeh khushbu ka chakkar bahut dangerous hain,
ab main Is khushbu ka kya karu.....
Khushbu : Excuse me....
Addu : Hi.
Khushbu flanks her hand infront but then addu doesnt shake his hand but as she is
about to shake the hand, he suddenly takes his hands away & this makes khushbu
feel insulted.
khushbu comes back to her senses, but she seems to be very upset by this...
but then she knows how to handle herself.

Here Kanan & Khushbu...Are left with no choice but to explore Mr. addu.

Khushbu : hu, addu , perfect dumbo....
Kanan : khushbu, come on humay dair horahi hain remember, Bye Aditya......
Aditya :B BYe.
Aditya goes and meets Nani...

Khushbu & Kanan goes to their Room, kashish follows them...
Kanan : kashish, yeh Aditya hain kaun yaar..Aur yahan kyun aaya hain.
Kashish :Kanan, tum jaanti hona Addu ko, main nay bataya tha tumhay...
Kanan : Mujhe... kab, i cant remember...
Kashish : Hum teeno School friends hain, par schooling complete hotay hi
Addu apnay parents kay saath Delhi shift hogaya aur Rah gaye main aur Rishi,
Par ek baar Mumbai main Papa ki tabiyat bahut kharaab hogayi
thi aur jab Rishi bhi Mumbai main nahi tha...Aur main itna tense thi.
Papa kay Dr nay mujhe jo Doctor refer kiya tha, woh Niklay Addu kay Dad aur hona kya tha hum
phir say mil gaye.And now here we are again..
(Yahan kanan aur kashish baat karrahay hain aur khushbu kuch aur hi kaam main busy hain )
Khushbu :Hey guys Im getting late.
Kanan : Late kis liye.
Khushbu : Ghar jaana hoga yaar Dinner ki taiyaari bhi toh karna hain, mumma bhi toh nahi hai...
Kashish : haan Sujal kahrahay thay ki mumma next week aarahi hai.
Khushbu : hope so, pata nahi yeh rewa aunty kya karrahi hain us Gaon main..
Kashish : Khushbu tumhay kahin jaanay ki zaroorat nahi hain, main sujal ko yahin par bula
layti hoon aur CG uncle kay liye hum Dinner yahin say bhej dayengay...
Kanan : Khush ab ruk bhi jao yaar, (wispers- Yeh addu kis khet ki mooli hain yeh bhi toh dekhna hai )
Khushbu : theek hain meri maa...par sujal yahan ayega ga.
Kanan : dont u worry,Kashish bulaye aur sujal na aaye, ho hi nahi sakta.
Kashish :ab aisa bhi nahi hai, sujal hai hi aisa kisi ki baat taal hi nahi sakta.
Khushbu : oh plzzz,Kashish maan bhi lo sujji kisi aur ki nahi par tumhari baat
nahi taal sakta.
Kashish : Ok, Baba Maan liya theek hain...toh tum ruk rahi ho na.
Khushbu ; haan, of course.
Kashish takes the Cell nokia N95 & makes a Call.
Kashish :The number Ur trying is switched Off.
kashish tries to Call Sujal a number of times but cant get him online.

Then theres a knock on the door...
Khushbu goes & sees that its Addu...
Khushbu : aap.
Addu : haan main.
Khushbu : kuch kaam tha.
kanan : Khush whos it.

As Khushbu is holding the door, addu moves her to one side & without permission
enters the room & sits on the bed.
This seems more disrespectaful to Gurlz.
Addu : Mr. Aditya sinha.
Kashish :kuch chahiye tumhay.
addu : actually kashish abhi Dinner kay liye kaafi time hai aur mujhe
bahut bhook lagi hai, so i thought to grill sumthing for every one.
so wat will u Ladies Like to have.
Khushbu : i will have fruit salad.
kanan : hmmm meray liye Icecream will do.
Addu : so wat are u waiting for neechay chalay.

They all come in the lawn, when addu gets sum stuff to eat...

addu & rishi gets sum thing to eat & addu starts eating himself,
with out before offering the girls to eat.
then he brings sumthing covered,but when he offers the girls to eat
it turns out to be empty dishes.
And the expressions on the girls face seems to be a Heaven for addu
& rishi.
As sonya goes screaming on rishi for his involvement,
Rishi takes sonya out with him for Lunch.

Khushbu & Kanan goes upstairs...
This is really mean for kanan & khushbu..they are horrified
kay yeh kasia mazaak tha,the prank was really stupid.

In the lawn...
Kashish :Addu tumhay aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.
addu : par it was just a prank, U know how Iam.
Kashsih : haan main jaanti hoon, par doosron ko kya pata tumharay baaray main.
addu : oh my god, tumhay lagta hai," it was Rude & I shud say sorry".
Kashish : Ur right...
addu : toh main jaaoon.
Kashish : haan, aur zara tameez say sorry kahna Ok.
Addu :Ok.
kashish : waise, Cooking aur tum ? Kab seekha.
addu : cooking aur main- no ways,i thought jab tum sab cooking karogi, main
tum sab ko grill karunga.

Kashish & addu goes to girls room 7 this time Addu goes first to his room &
gets sum gift for the girls.
kashish : addu aao na andar aao.
there both of them seems to be grilling in anger.
addu comes in 7 with his face facing the floor, offers the gift to khushbu.
addu : actually it was a joke 7 i have come here to say sorry for it.
Khushbu doesnt say a word, but sees to kanan.
kanan joins khushbu & on insistance takes the gift from addu.
addu says them to open the gift after he goes.

Kashish : chalo ab sab theek hogaya hain toh,tumhay bhook lagi hogi, tum chalo main abhi
tumharay liye kuch banakar laati hoon.
Addu : Get it soon, Plz warna main mar jaunga.
addu goes...

As Kashish starts to go out, kanan and Khushbu...
open the box & suddenly the joker jump on
Khushbu's face & they throw the box with the jerk.
Kanan : wat the hell?
khushbu : Samajhta kya yeh khud ko.
they are shocked...
Kashish : now girls relax.
kanan : kashish, main us ka khoon pi jaungi, no i cant tolerate him,
ya toh wo yahan rahega ya main...
Khushbu : yes, enough is enough.
Kashish : girls dont take him wrong woh aisa hi hai, sab kuch sah layga
par bhook bilkul nahi sah sakta.
Khushbu : so wat,woh koi hotel main nahi hain.
kanan : haan, Mr Addu idiot, aisay order karraha tha jaisay khana nahi ehsaan karraha ho.
Kashish : relax, woh kuch din kay liye hi aaya hai, aur itna bura bhi nahi hain.
Kashish : tum dono kuch khaogay.
Kanan : No thanks, us petu ko hi khilao...pata nahi kab tak jhelna hoga is aafat ko.
khushbu : Kashish, meray liye juice bhijwaogi plzz, aur haan chameli ko bhi saath
bhej dayna.

Kashish goes & Here the Temperature in the room is souring to 360degree Celcius.

Kanan :Khush,kya tu bhi wohi sonch rahi hai, jo main.
Khushbu :Haan kanny, main bhi wohi sonch rahi hoon ki dikhnay main toh ek dum
Sukha huwa patta lagta hai par itna bhukkard hoga main nay soncha tha.
Kanan :oye pagal, main yeh nahi sonch rahi thi, par tu kabhi kabhi kuch
akal ki baat bhi karlayti hai.
Khushbu : wat do u mean by that, mera chord khud ko dekh tujhay
dekhnay say hi koi bhi kah sakta hai ki tu khatay peetay ghar ki hai.
Kanan : achcha aur tujhe dekh kar log kya kahengay pata hai...
Khushbu : mujhe dekh kar, tell me Kya kahengay.
Kanan : rehnay day khush,
Khushbu : no tell me.
Both start argumenting & attacking each other by words...
Suddenly Chameli enters...
Chameli : aray Khushbuji aur Kannan ji aap dono ki matt mari gayi hai kya,
kyun aisay lard rahi ho aap log.
Still both doesnt stop...
chameli shouts & both comes to hault...
Chameli : aray, aisa kaisay chalega, mai yahan ku aayi,aap dono say
ek jaroori rikvest karnay, par yahan par toh kuch aurich dikhra meray ku.
Kanan & khushbu :ab tumhay kya hua.
Chameli makes them feel that addu has created a mess in the kitchen &
that she needs help to shoo away addu from sehgal villa.
Kanan & khushbu joins hands and thinks that wat is Important for them is
to Move Addu out from here & for that they will join hands as their Union
can only do that & most importantly they willas for now make no comittments
in making sujal & kashish fight.
Kanan & khushbu have tied their Black belts to show him his place.


Its Evening :

Addu is sitting in the Hall Playing on his Nokia engage series...
with the Tv & stereos On & in full Volume.
The shanti of the home is totally disrupted.
Addu : Kashish , bahut bhook lag rahi hai, Plzz jaldi karo.
He goes & sits on the Dining table beating the plates with the spoon.

Kanan & khushbu enters the hall...
They both seems to be totally disfigures as they cant have a nap in the noon
as Addu had been doing his drums practice.

Will the fights ever end...wat will be the result...

To be continued...

Rameena...


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Posted: 18 years ago

hi Kulbin & guriya, Thanks for taking ur precious time out & commenting for the story...

Rameena.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi rameena ji,
after so many days i m reading ur ff cos i was very busy wid my exams ,
gr8 story contd ,i m waiting for the next part

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