virman& virika ff - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
nice update summy 😊😊😊
it was not crap
better u dont say that 😡
perfectly written👏
thanks for the update 😊
continue soon and

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Frst of all dear thanks for pm...
Abt ur story its sweet and simple...loved it..
Its true I m virmanian...but love ur stry...
In it both couples just awsm...
Its not virmanian or virikian but iits like ehmmbh...
Love virika' s concern and care, , love for their siblings...
Love virman leg pulling..
Love cutie pie ...mansi character...
Actually I read all updates together...and really enjoyed it...
Update soon ...want virman' s marriage as a gift for virat' s b' day...
Keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Very nice update but again short
Jeevika ki Kya hua?
Long update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Im so sorry for the late update but i forgot to mention that i wrote this story due to the fact that i was requested by chandiniebinda to write something on virman. So all the appreciation should go to chandienibinda.
anyways enough of my bak bak and to the story now.

chap5

a week later
virats birthday
virat is in the studio making his singing album and at the vadhera house virats birthday prep is goin on

viren: jeevika sab tayyari ho gayi hein na, weise waha thori decorations baaki hein mein abhi aata hu
jeevika: theek hein viren ji.

a few mins later
viren: jeevika tum ne manvi ko bulaya hein na
jeevika: viren ji iss shaitaan ko kown bhul sakta hein
viren: ha han bolo na
karti raho apne behen ki burayyi
weise jeevika mein kamre mein jaraha hu tayyar ho ne ke liye aur tum bhi aajawo
jeevika: ji viren ji

in virika room
viren: jeevika meri tie kaha hein
jeevika: viren ji ye rahi aap ki tie, aur aap ke shoes aur aap ka blazer
bas ho gaya, aur kuch
viren: ahann mera kiss aur wo bhi lips pe
jeevika:(blushing) nahi milegi, kya karloge aap
viren: ohh mrs vadhera viren vadhera se panga le rahi hein
wow magar aap bhool gayi hein ya yad dilwawu ke mein ek wakeel hu
ab to jurmana bharna padega
jeevika: nahi meilegi
viren comes closer and closer that their noses touch and jeevikas heart beat gets faster and faster
as jeevika was about to kiss their was a knock on the door
and they both seperated
viren: sab ko abhi aana hein kya
koi mujhe apni beewi ke sath romance kyu nahi karne deta hein
jeevika opens the door
tarun: virat bhaya aa chuka hein
jeevika: theek hein hum aate hein
viren ji chalye

in the hall
manvi: jiju
viren: saali saaiba
keisi ho aap
manvi: bindas(upsetting tone)
jeevika:viren ji aap ko viraat bula raha hein
manvi:di
jeevika:mannu to ek kam karegi mere liye
please upar jake wo gift le aawoo
manvi: theek hein di

thats it
precap
virat and manvi meet upstairs

what will happen next
to find out more
do comment and hit the like button


Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Lovely update...
Live Virika romance...
Cant wait for the next update...
Finally Virman will meet...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
it was so cute nd sweet...
loved virika romance... nd virat manvi gonna met soon...
wow.. excited fr ur next update...
amazing... fabulous it was
do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome update it was lovely
loved virika romance
and virman gonna meet soon
do contd soon asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
sorry been a little inactive!!
will read this whole thing again from the beginning as soon as i get back!
thanks for all the pms
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
it was cute atlast u updated virika romance was watin for it but it was so short😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
nice update summy!!!😊
aww my virika they dont even get chance to romance😆
loved it ❤️
continue soon😊

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