ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 3- Chapter 24 to Chapter 32 - Page 18

Originally posted by: swapno

Thank you so much buddy 🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

No they wont get divorce...now be happy😊

this chapter is only to understand that sometimes little things leads to a big thing...

I will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh man! No... This is bad! It's great how you highlight the divorce part. In jest (and anger), one should never play the divorce card! Alas, people do it anyway! It is quite realistic, when I think about it. Misunderstandings happen because of miscommunication, or lack thereof. Great update, as usual.

And in response to YOUR response to my comment , the story is definitely written beautifully. Granted, there are some errors, but they may be overlooked, as they are just that, errors. Mere typos, if you may. And let's not forget, to err is human. So it is quite natural that you may find your own work needs slight grammar improvement. And so long as there's a mistake, there's room for more potential!

And I'm glad (and quite proud, honestly) that you chose to go with your gut and not change your style of writing. This is who you are. It wouldn't be the same if it's something forced. Of course you can always try something new and see where that takes you. However, ultimately, do what feels right. Take all criticism, be it constructive or otherwise as an encouragement and a challenge to explore your potential! Coz you have it in you!

Oh wow. I sound like those motivational books that nobody pay heed to or even bother taking a look at.. Sorry! Ha-ha, I guess I got carried away! Hope I didn't bore you too much!

Anyway, you've only just updated, and already I want more! Whattado? You've spoilt us! Can't wait!

Love,
FaRz

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I've updated my comment on page 19! Lalalala (wanted to fill the space)

Originally posted by: BeYourself

now asad will go to new york and bring back his lady love...😳
nice update...loved it...😛

Originally posted by: zoyaah

wooow this is good

continue sooon

i like it

Originally posted by: princess101

THAT WAS A VER GOOD UPDATE LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

Originally posted by: akaswan

I hope that she will learn the lesson and never played prank like that 😉

And i'm very happy i was a little sad but now i'm fine 😆

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Awesome update...loved it🤗

Originally posted by: swapno

Ha ha ha...this is Zoya buddy...you think she will learn alesson???

I know...that's why I told you...

Originally posted by: akaswan

It's sad but the true is that she will never learnt anything 😆

Awww bubby you know me so well and i really like that 😉🤣