Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

loved the update..had gala time reading it.

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Anusha

@Anusha16

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

haha... loved the innocent astha...

poor shlok... it's so difficult for him to say I LOVE YOU...😆

lovely update yaar!!!!😉

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

oh i love this changed astha

ye astha layegi shlok ko line pe for sure

do update soon

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

why do i have the feeling that aastha is faking amenisa.
great update. interesting. waiting for more

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

I m loving this story.
Wow...i think shlok is gonna b in problem soon. Would love to see shlok being a love stuck puppy.
Thanks for d pm.

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abi_niki

@abi_niki

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Happy New Year😊

Nice update...

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desikahani

@desikahani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Happy new year! lovely update and thank you for the PM.

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

u didnt pm me this 😡

now m angry

say sorry

and frm next tym dont forget to pm me

awsm update like always

love ashlok lovy dovey update

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Dee James

@DJames

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

OMG! Finally I had the time to read all the parts at one go. What can I say? I am so so loving this Astha who has lost her memory. She is just on a roll and wants to claim her love. Their chemistry is just sizzling esp in the 6th part.

The first few parts were lovely with Astha standing up to Shlok. 👏 Wish that happens in the show too. And she should stand up against NA and AA too. Not to mention the useless Sojal. Very very nice. Your plot is interesting, the twist is amazing and we are waiting for Shlok to fall for Astha, this time for real. 😉

Meanwhile just keep the hot romance going I say. I love this and I would now start reading this regularly. Sorry I couldn't reply earlier since I was having almost no time with my own writing, work and house and son...you know how it is...

And I do hope this is detailed enough 😊. If part 5&6 were the new yr gifts I am so glad of this new year. Very well done. And hey, just one suggestion. If you can ask sometime to glance through before you post it may save you some errors. Just a thought. But you're just brilliant 😊👍🏼