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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

thnx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Lovely update
Thanks for PM
Asad realised his love & hope, he will save zoya.
Continue soon

thnx dear, ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maz8


Oohhh gettin interestin. Fabulous work!! But a tinnyyy winyy complain, plz can u space out the paragraphs it will make it abit easier to read. Everything else is superb. Lastly Yhanx for the PM.😃😊

mmm.. Ok , thanx for cment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">superb update...</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Asad being so protective towards zoya...</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">he now imagine her in place of shama...nice...</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">continue soon...</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks for pm😊</font>

thnx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update❤️
the brewing romance is a treat for readers😃
but asad ko kab realize hoga arghhh??😭
his yearning for zyaad and his family is beautiful😳
update fast plzz

Maha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha2012

<font color="#0033cc">loved the update❤️
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<font color="#0033cc">the brewing romance is a treat for readers😃</font>
<font color="#0033cc">but asad ko kab realize hoga arghhh??😭</font>
<font color="#0033cc">his yearning for zyaad and his family is beautiful😳</font>
<font color="#0033cc">update fast plzz</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Maha</font>

thnx thnx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
when do we get next update?😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 14-section A
Zoya tried to escape bt qureshi dint alowed her to..
Zoya hid herself under a desk.
Qureshi: "come, darling, i'l gve u hapines and pleasure" zoya cried hearing this.
Qureshi came searching her
. Zoya placed her hand on her mouth cntroling her sobs.
Qureshi finaly found her.
He hold her hand, nd took her out. Zoya: "please, no leave me" she cried.
Qureshi:" no baby noone is cmng to help u" he smirked. He forcefuly placed her on desk. Zoya: "no, no pleasd help help.." she shouted.
Qureshi was abt to kis her when he felt a hard hand on hs shoulder, he turned and before he could do anythng he felt punched and fell.
It was asad, seeing hm zoya huged hm tightly.
Zoya: "mr. Kha. Khan.. He . He tried.. Ahh.. " she cried buring her head in hs chest.
Asad holded her: "shh, no zoya.. I m here nw na, i'l nt let this b**t**d touch u" he made her sit in a chair.
Qureshi got up: "look mr. Asad that nt ur busines, she is my employee.." asad once again punched hm.
Asad: "dnt u dare touch her, i'l kil u" he badly threw hm away and took zoya with hm..
Before gng he turned: "dnt think she is alone. I m with her always" zoya couldnt stop her tears, it was man who left her nd nw claming that he is with hm.
They were nw out of office.
Zoya moved away frm hm.: "i think i should go. Thanks mr. Khan" she said with brimed eyes.
Asad huged her tightly: "i m sory zoya, forgve me" zoya realised that he nw he is sory.
Zoya: "its ok mr. Khan" asad was cherished hearing this frm zoya.
Asad covered her properly with her sari. He dropped her to Khan villa.
KHAN VILLA
zoya as entered dilshad realised her flngs.
Dilshad: "zoya what hpnd?" to which zoya burst in cry and huged her. She narated her all the incident.
Dilshad: "shh, alah saved u beta, he'l be there fr u, bt nw asad, what he is trying to prove" she disguised her words.
Zoya: "no phoophi, he is nt trying to prove anything, he saved me fr my sake" zoya cleared.
Asad: "if i wouldnt be there on time bt could hv hpnd to her" he remembers hw he cme there.
He was in hs house, when biswas cald hm and askd why he told zoya to staybck as qureshi told hm. And zoya askd biswas to tell asad to cme soon. Which stuck to hm and hs went there.
Asad stoped driving: "she forgived me nw i cn take my son and her bck" he was hapy.
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IN MORNING
Asad came to khan villa to take zoya and zyad with hm.
All were shocked to see hm
Dilshad cnfrntd hm.
NT YET CMPLETD CHECK NEXT PAGE
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 14- section B.
Asad presence made dilshad angry.
Dilshad:" why u r here?" she angrily askd siding zoya,
Asad: "ami, i just want my wife n son" asad was sure after yesterday she'l cme to him. Bt he was proved wrng when zoya cme frnt frm dilshad's bck.
Zoya:" what? Son n wife.. Look mr, asad i respect u cz u helpd me many times bt please dnt take my respdct wrng. I cnt cme with u.. Bt being zyaad's abu, i'l nw nt stop u to meet hm.." she smiled and gve hm zyaad in hs hand. Dilshad was shocked at her action.
Dilshad: "zoya, bt" zoya turned to her.
Zoya: holded her hand," phoophi its her right, i dnt hv any prblm" she slightly smiled. Humaira came to her and said," u r right bhabhi, we r with u" she turned to asad," bhaijan, u cn anytime cme and see zyaad" she smiled.
Dilshad: "do wat u want to do" she went to her room in anger.
Zoya: took zyaad frm asad," nw no complains mr. Asad bt i cnt cme again to u cz nw i cnt believe u" she told asad. Asad left stuned, and left.
Humaira huged zoya. Ayan was hapy with her decision.
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Asad was dumpstruck. He dnt knw why he was sad nw. He wantd zyaad nd nw zoya gave hm permision, so what was that what he dint liked.
Asad: "why m i sad? Do i feel for her, why her presence bothers me?" he covered her mouth and sat on bench with brimmed eyes.
Zoya's room.
Zoya: "zyaad, my son, u liked ur abu na, u knw he is very nice man" she smiled talking to zyaad.
"So why dint u go with hm" nikhat entered her room. Zoya: "nikhat, hw r u" she ran nd huged her.
Nikhat:" why dint u go with hm zoya if u knw he is nice." she asked zoya setling herself on bed.
Zoya: "nikhat, ur question is genuine,. Bt u knw wat i love hm. He is my life. Bt if he left me again i'l die.. Frm past a month i m living a blank life. Sme memories r of hatered. I cnt believe my destiny again" she polietly replied her.
Nikhat: realising her isue, " look bhabhi, dnt take ur life nd destiny so easily, gve them chance, bhaijan he is wiling to live with u, life is gvng u a chance, he wants to be with u" she holded zoya's hand.
Zoya sat thinking smthng..
It was night
Asad all day wondered discovering hs flng.. He dnt knew do she feel fr her or nt..
Late at 1 am he returned.
He saw the gate was open. He went in hurry thinking might theif hd entered. He switched on the light. The hall was empty he heard sm voice frm kitchen he ran to kitchen.
Asad: "who r u?" as he saw sm1 stnding he dark.
He switched on kitchen's light.
Asad: "u, here." he was deeply cnfused seeing zoya there.
Zoya: "its late zyaad's abu, today i waited bt frm tomorow i'l take my diner. Cme n hv it" he took a bowl and placed it in dining area.
Asad: "bt what r u dng here?" he said with brimed eyes.
seeing hm crying, zoya huged hm: "no, mr. Khan. I knw u realised ur mistake bt i cnt punish u mre.. I LOVE U MR. Khan." these last heavy words stuck her.
asd huged her bck: "thnks for gvng me my family" he ignord her last three words..
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KHAN VILLA.
Dilshad: "zoya was wrng, she wouldnt hv did that" she said as nikhat told her abt zoya's gng.
Humaira: "ami, i think it wil be ok fr them. Let them gve their relation a chance".
Asad's apartment.
They silently finished the dinner.
They went to bedroom. Asad was relieved to zyaad sleeping he slept right to zyaad and zoya to hs left.
Zoya life was cmpleted. Bt asad was guilty that zoya loves hm without knwing abt shama.
Asad turned and saw zyaad and zoya hapily sleeping.
Asad: "do i ever wil be able to tel her abt shama" he waved hs hands on zoya and zyaad..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.
loved it.
now zoya is living with asad but asad is still confused about his feelings for zoya.
plz update soon. i want to read more.
plz pm me

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