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Niyatiswaragini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANKS FOR YOUR Likes and cments i'l update it today by 3 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok, so next part i need mre likes and cments..
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Edited by niyti07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awesome update... srry for late cmmnts..
I just read it. I was busy so... sory..
Well update was too good... o god why cant asad understand , shama ke piche pada nua zoya dikhi nai rai h use.. i luved d part where asad takes zaayd in his hands... realisation was nice...
I hope asad will understand n give his life a scnd chance...
Thanx for pm, update soonish. Merry christmas!!!
Nxt part is main as d story starts frm der...
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Part 10- section A . . Neha's words enough parted them. . . Zoya left without saying a word. . . Neha stood with open mouth o.. . . Asad: "what?" he replied to hs strange stare. . . Neha left the cabin, she ran to zoya. . Neha: "what was that zoya?" zoya lookd her out of her work. Zoya: "i just fall by mistake" these words realived neha. . . Neha: "ok ok relax" she made her calm as she could feel her anger. . . . Zoya left frm there fr sm work. . . . Khan villa. Nikhat and farhaan cme to meet zyaad.. . . When dilshad told them abt asad, nikhat was filed with joy. Nikhat: "ami, nw zyad and bhabhi vl be setld" she expresed her happiness. Dilshad: "r u mad? M i so stupid to leave zoya again with that untrustworthy man, no way nikhat" dilshad regreted her words. Nikhat: "ammi, try an undrstnd, today it is easy to handle zyad bt when he'l grew up, what u guys vl tel hm abt hs abu" nikhat tried to clear her point, bt dilshad was upto her decision. . . . Blue wells constructions. . . When zoya returned she found her mising. . . Zoya: " neha, where s my phone" to which neha lookd her. . Neha: "mr. Asad took ur phone, i askd hm why bt he left gvng me a stern look" she said. . Zoya: "hw dare he?" she murmured and left to hm. . . She went in hs cabin. . . Zoya: "hw dare u take my phone" asad turned to her. . . Asad: he gave her phone back, " i just wanted my son's pic, that i took thanks" that iritated zoya till core. . . Zoya: "what u r to mr. Asad ahmad khan" she askd hm with anger. Asad: "zoya, dnt take me wrng i want my son" it was enought for zoya. . . Zoya: "u, dnt dare to be close to my son" she left and went out of office in full anger. . . She lost her way, and reached a clumpsy place, there were many men staring her.. . . A man: "oho, we'l die for u, cme baby" he blockd her way. Zoya was silent, she dint knew what to do.. Soon all of them circled her, and started touching her seductivily. . . . A man was upto snatch her pallu, when a strong punch made hm fall away. . . Another man: "who r u? We first saw her she'l be ours" he said making asad angry till end. . Asad: "she is nt ur property, she is my wife.. Go away otherwise i'l nt leave u to even walk on ur legs" hearing the wife statement those men couldnt gather courage to move forward.. They left.. . . . Asad took zoya to hs car, she silently sat covering herself tightly. . . They crosed the area, there was silence in car.. Those wife words stuck to zoya. . . . Zoya shouted: "stop the car" asad stopd the car. . . Zoya came out of car and so asad did. . . They faced each other. . . YET NT CMPLETED, CHECK BELOW
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 10- section B. . . Zoya: "what u want to prove that u still r my husband" she burst on hm even she knew it was cz of hm she was saved bt her past never let her move on. . Asad: he holds her tightly, " zoya look i said i left cz of sm personal issues, dnt misundrstand me" he tried to clear. Zoya: she jerked hm away, " what. Personal? Did ur son is nt a personal mater for u, nt i..." she stopd as she dint wantd to argue. She left frm there. . . . Asad knew she was right bt he couldnt even tel her abt shama, bt nw he wantd zyaad, his son. . . . Khan villa. . . . Zoya's room. . . Zoya: "i'l nt let hm take my son away, u dint care fr us, nd nw i'l nt let u ruin my life" she said to herself bt was distractd as zyaad woke up. . . . Zoya took hm to nearby park. . . Zoya was playing with hm , zyaad sat taking lil blnce.. He was nw able to lil crawl. . . Zoya made hm sat by taking her suport, he gigled making her feel like happen. . . When she saw a man standing infront it was asad, zoya stood up in anger , to which zyaad was abt to fall when asad and zoya both holded hm, zyaad gigled with thrill.. Zoya and asad both laughed, bt then zoya jerked zyaad frm hm and stood up taking hm in arms. . . She was abt to go when asad oposdd. . . Asad: "nt anymore zoya, he is my son also" he nw shoutd making zoya face hm. . . Zoya: "oh realy! He is ur son, u knw wat when he was born u dint cme to see hm, what type of father u r, dnt cal hm ur, he is just mine" she replied in anger. Asad: "zoya i apologised a hundred times" he said clenching hs jaws. Zoya: "apology! Wow.. First gve pain then apologise, cn u gve me my lonely mnth bck filed with happiness.. No u cnt so please just go" she left. . . . Next day office. . . At 1 pm noon. . . Neha came to zoya who was busy with sm consignments.. . . . Neha: "cngrats, i m so hapy fr u" she huged her making zoya cnfused. . . Zoya: "for what" she smiled. Neha: she took seat, " r u kiding me, dnt u knw, mr. Asad ahmad khan, chose u as hs partner architect frm our office, u'l work with hm, mm by the way day before yesterday i was a lil sure that he'l choose u" she teased her making her remember the fall incident. . . Zoya: "what, hv u lost it? Mr. Qureshi is our head and he is suposd to get this position" she got tensed at thought of working with asad. . . Neha: "offo! It is ur hardwork that made u get this position yr," she said concerning her. . . Zoya: "i knw why he wantd to work with me" she said with low tone. . . Neha: "u said smthng". . . Zoya: "she left saying no". . . . She went to asad's cabin. . . Asad as saw her: "commin mrs. Asad ahmad khan" making zoya mre angry. . . Zoya: "dnt cal me that, i dnt hv any relation with u, i m nt ur wife, what u did? I'l nt work with u" she showed hm finger. . Asad: stood up, " realy, ok feel u r nt my wife, bt u r my son's ammi, in that u hv sm relation with me" he said and then cntinued, " and ya i liked ur work mrs. Asad ahmad khan, so u'l be my partner" zoya was full of anger nw. . . She clutched hs collar. . . Zoya: "he is nt ur son, did u get that and i'l nt work with u.. Mind distance frm my son" asad to which softly smiled. . . Zoya left hs colar: "why r u smiling m i joking" she shouted. . . Asad: "no, u r nt joking, u r trying to disprove reality." he folded hs arms. Zoya: "oh, reality disprove which u did a mnth ago"her these words always made hm guilty til core. . . She left. . . Asad: "i knw i was wrng, i just thought of shama, bt nw i'l gve u and my son hapines that u want, bt plz alah dnt let her think it's love, cz any1 cnt take my shama's place. . .=.@@.=@@@= . . Its all do pm me and send budy requests. Do like and cment
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love the update please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
love this part as always...n merry Christmas to u all frd...pls mere request Qubool kar ek bada waalaaa update this time pls😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read last four updates...
so much happen...
Asad left zoya & zyaad...
Zoya suffer a lot...
but now he is return...
continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
asad trying give zoya her happiness back
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.
loved it. feeling bad for zoya.
plz update soon.
thanx for pm

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