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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: roofiya


yayyy Maine saare padhliye yaara...
awww u'r os banner is chooo cute...
loved each n every os...
kya kamaal ki writer hain yaar aayu tum...
mast ekdum...
love u loads...


hayyee... padh liya kya baat hain ...
hehe thank u ...
i know...
hhehe😆😆
i luv me too... 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

thanks for this.

now I can read your os whenever I want.


plzr is all mine dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

os gallery???
aur mainu nahi pata..haww...😕

chalo abhi mujhey mil gayee thread toh here i'm..😉

congooo baby ji..🤗

hope u write 100th OS soon...😃

luv uu..❤️




heheh i made it affter that PM of OS on sms bday...
so thought alge OS ke saath bata dungi... sholllyyy...

hehe welcome sisi...
thank u soo much ...

haye 100 aab toh 6th bhi nahi likha 100 toh hufff...
heheh i will try ,...

luv u too di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-


heheh i made it affter that PM of OS on sms bday...
so thought alge OS ke saath bata dungi... sholllyyy...

hehe welcome sisi...
thank u soo much ...

haye 100 aab toh 6th bhi nahi likha 100 toh hufff...
heheh i will try ,...

luv u too di



ho jayega balike.. mein ashirwaad kar rahi hoon.. lol... mahabharat ka kuch zyada hi asar hoying mujh pe..🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Poured out heart...




Ridhima-Kya hua armman aaj tum aise kyun bethe ho kya... Armaan chinta maat karo kuch nahi hua h hamari ardhima ko... Dekho vo bhul kar khelne bhi chali gai... Usse yaad bhi nahi aab vo giri thi... Dekho kitni khusi sw aapne room mein khel rahi hai...

Armaan look at ridhima and then again look at the sport where ardhima had fallen while running around..

Ridhima- armaan vo aab theek hai Toh phir tum kyun itne udaa ho rahe ho armaan... Aur dekho mein bhi theek hin dekho mein ne bandage bhi kar li hai...

Armaan was sitting watching his angels running ardhima running from milk and fallwn due to which the glass in ridhima's also fallen and in fear of their daughter getting hurt ridhima run and a piece of gkass enter her feet she care less but armaan was so shoked that he keept sitting there only where he was sirting earlier.. And after making ardhima calm and making her happy while hitting the ground with her hand as if beating ground in punishment for making ardhima fall ridhima sent ardhima to play in her roon happily.. n ridhoma saw armaan shocked and not moving... Ridhima know something is not well with him so after dressing herself first.. As ridhima know soon thw mpment armaan will see the blood comong out from ridhima's body he will freek out and will hurt himself too.. So after dressing she came and talk to armaan..

Ridhima- armaan tum kyun pareshan ho.. Acha ek baat batao..(to divert his mind but nothing happen.)tum kisse jayada pyaar karte ho... Hamari Ardhima se ya aapni ridhima se


And armaan setting there without a word but suddenly...



Armaam-
Mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hun ridhima par Mein toh had se jayada tumhe pyaar karte hua bhi tum mein nahi samaa sakta par mera aansh tum me samake ardima ke rup mein mera samne hai... Toh isliya mein usse tumse thoda jayada pyaar karta hun...kyun ki jaab bhi mein usse dekhta hu toh mujhe lagta hain mein ne tumhara bachan jo miss kiya hain vo jee raha hun... Aur uski meri jindagi mein hone ki ahat hi mujhe ehsas dhilati hai ki hum milkar ek dusre ke saath pyaaar ki had par kar chuke hain... Aur pyaar ki uss bulandiyo ko chuya hai aur saath hi aapne ussi pyaar se ek nai buladiyan banai hain...ridhima mein bata nahi sakta meri choti si ridhima ne mujhe jo diya hai vo kabhi koi de pata... Vo ehsas ki hamara pyaar itna pavitr ho gaya ki ek nanhi si hamare pyaar ki murat mera samne hasti kheli gati ghumti dodhti bhagti hai... Mein tumhe bata nahi sakta ki jab meri nanhi ridhima meri badi ridhima ke andar saansein le rahi thi toh iska mehsus karne ke liya mein kitna bechan tha... Mein uska har moment ko mehsus kar skta tha toh vo bhi tumhare karan
... Jo tum aapni sare ehsas mera saath baat ti thi na unse mein ne bhi aapni ardhima ke har sparh ko mehsus kiya hai...
Mein nahi samjha skta ridhima ki mein kya mehsus karta hun ardhima ko dekh kar...

Uski halki si kharoch (small wound) bhi mein nahi seh sakta.. Mujhe aisa lagta hain ki ek aacha pita nahi hun.. Meri beti ko dard ho raha hai aur mein kuch nahi lar sakta...

Ridhima mein kaise samjhaun ki ardhima kya hain mera liya...
Meri beti hi nahi vo ek mera jism ka aisa hisa hai ji par halki si anch aane ke dar se hi mein bejaan sa ho jata hun... Mein nahi jaanta ki mein jo bhi bol raha hun vo mera pagalpan lag raha hai ya mera over protectoveness but mein kya karun ... Mujhe ardhima ke har ahat mein aapni jindagi simitti si lagti hai... Ek ardhima aur tum hi do log ho is duniyan mein jinki choti ki kharoch par mein aapni jaan de sakta hua... Kyunki meri jaan tum dono mein samai hai... Tum dono mein se kisi ko bhi kuch hua na toh mein pagak ho jaunga.. Nahi bardash kar sakta mein ki koi dukh ka saaya bhi tum dono ke aaspass aye...


Both armaan n ridhima where crying alot while sitting on the floor ridhima infront of armaan and her hands holding his tightly...

Ardhima came in while playing with her doll...
Ardhima- dadda mumma dekho ba pinky(doll name)...!!!
She stop on between seeing her dadda n mumma haing tears...
And leaving her doll she run to her dadda n mumma where they were sitting... And

ardhima- dadda mumma lo laye ktun...(dadda mumma kyun ro rahe h) lote nahi (rote nahi h)wipping the tears of both...aap dono na lo na..(aap dono na roh na).
Aldhima piti kalegi lulaya kish ne.(ardhima pitegi karegi kisne rulaya)

armaan took ardhima in his arms and kissed her all overwith tears still swiming in his eyes...

Ridhima too was crying and admiring armaan n his love for their daughter then armaan while hugging ardhima from one arm open other arm for ridhima to come... Ridhima too wrap her arms around ardhima and armaan...
And ardhima take her one arm and spread around ridhima to...

And the family hug eachother..
Ardhima smile sensing all the love and warmth of her lovely rocking parents
and armaan n ridhima feel complete being in each others arms with ardhima between then...






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and sing in
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
res


unres...


hayye hayye Aaayooo...
I m first one to comment...
dhinka chika dhinka chika

Hahaha now about the os...
it was veryyy cute and emotional...
the way Armaan pour his heart infront of Riddhima, each and every words reach to my heart...
How much he love the two angels in his life, how much he care and if anything ever happen to them how he would broke in to piece's...
u describe his emotion and feelings beautifully...

last bit was too cute...how their daughter wipes their tears and three of them hug each other...
the little one smiling whole heart forgetting the incident and feeling the love of her parent...
masha allah, too good...

Keep writing more OS...
takecare...
Love u muwaahhh :*
takecare :D
Edited by RihooHaws - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
beautiful os loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for your next work
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
baby.. i'm really srry dear dat i wasn't OL wen u pm-ed.. nd so i couldn't hlp u.. :(
but
u've chosen beautiful title.. i luvd it.. <3
par
os kal padh ke cmmnt karungi,ok? i've severe headache now.. juz roaming here n there.. cnt read much.. but will read asap n recommnt.. dnt wrry <3
t.c dear..
hope u r better now..
luv u..
di.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Aayu di awesummm os...
Hav no words.. Luvd armaan's every line
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
sry for coming late...
awesome os aayu...
agla waala os romantic sa likhna please...
love u

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