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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Happy 2014...

It was great reading your update after a relaxing holiday... It was flirty good..will write more ...

Edited by msin - 11 years ago

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Thanks for the update in the holiday season:)

Wow! realisation struck khushi that she is in love with Arnav😉 .But the thing is she is still unaware of Arnav's feelings and is unsure if he takes this as just another fling.

The three musketeers ,I would like to call these three girls .

The light banter at the bar with all the youngsters of the family is very refreshing.

Akash and his girlfriend are not to be forgotten at all,they have their own charm

And finally Arnav at his best ,flirting with the girl ,expressive with only eyes,not with words yet.

And Wish You A Very Happy new Year .

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

First of all, sorry for this very late unres...Holidays are to be blamed..

This chapter for me was all about Khushi. Her introspection, her self-analysis, her realization, her
epiphany..

And you wrote it so convincingly that not even once did it seem contrived at all... 👏

I especially liked how you showed the subtle changes in Khushi once she came to terms with her emotions...

Her confidence around Arnav, her sense of euphoria, of freedom even...very well done..

The subtle progression you showed from a girl unsure/ scared of her feelings to a confident woman, who wants to explore the possibilities of what lies between her and Arnav...This was done so brilliantly ...Wow...!

This was a very crucial chapter, I feel and I am really, really scared for Khushi...:(

Especially in light of what you showed us of the future in prologue..

Can hardly wait for the next !!😊

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Wowww u captured Kushis emotions wonderfully

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Awesome, superb, fabulous...marvelous update..i love d way u have maintained d very essence of arnav n kushi...thanks a lot for taking out time to give us an update...wishing u a very happy n a prosperous new year.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

I can't get enough of ur story... Y can't u write a longer update?;)

So finally khushi accepted she loves him... Arnav kind of knows it too ... Eagerly waiting to knw what happens next... Pls update soon..don't make us wait too long

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Finally someone has accepted her feelings ..it was really beautiful ...loved it.. can't wait for next one 😊

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Unbelievable !!! was just trolling and look what I found !!! 😃

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

beautiful update.. loved PAK's friendship.. god bless.. the icing on the cake.. Arnav... he was awesome..

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

super update...
i always loved khushis self convos. i loved todays best.
"heart is controlling her instead of her controlling heart. typical khushi
and arnav hisbrain controls him.

truly polar opposites

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