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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Nainital*sigh* i wish i could get a break now and go there..those descriptions are so beautiful..i love them and you should be really hired by indian tourism becoz reading your descriptions will certainly increase the number of tourists visiting those places😆

at a point i was feeling all the gilly and thanda hawa around me and the moment certain hottie made an entry the thandaness just disappered and i was feeling hot suddenly😆 and thanq for describing arnav from khushis pov because i feel khushi to be close to reality and i can see myself in her..

the whole encounter in that greenhouse..that gave me goosebumps..you rite them them so intensly that every emotion is felt perfectly perfectly..that closing the door and trapping her between her passion at its epitom..

eagerly vaiting to see wat will happen next now...

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Awesome update...
Finally got an insight of Arnav feelings... And he is in for this battle of love... But still I m confuse, Is he ready for commitment? I hope he won't hurt khushi this time...
Their green house scene was awesome... Where Arnav admit that he kissed her bcuz he wanted to, Khushi sticked to her resolution... Loved it. .
Continue soon...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

It was a very sweet and intense chapter. A fantastic update.I loved the way you started the chapter with Khushi and her thoughts...I love this Khushi...she is such a sweet...she is so positive that she finds happiness in everything no matters where ever she is...the way she was thinking about Arnav and their last meeting in his room...it shows clearly that she in love with Arnav...you're title is so appropriate for Khushi's state of mind...she is so concern about her friends happiness that she was thinking only about PalPal and Akash...I think she will take a lead to talk to mamiji...

We finally have Arnav's thoughts over the entire thing...thank you Sandhya for giving us Arnav feelings regarding Khushi...the way he is thinking about Khushi...surely he is in love with her but his insecurities are more than his love...but what Mr. Raizada is jealous...I really happy to see him jealous of Sanjeev...I want to see a jealous Khushi...but he has a fear of losing Khushi...Finally we can witness to their conversation...the green house scene was written so well and description was beautiful as usual...I am so glad that Khushi was quite strong and finally let him know how she has felt over the past four years. So, Arnav has decided he is not going to give up...but now Arnav babuwa you have to try very hard to win our Khushi Gupta's love and trust.

Thanks Sandhya for an outstanding chapter... every time you described how Arnav and Khushi are looking in their attire is just marvelous.

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Stunning chapter. Thanks for pm.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Another fab chapter Sandhya..

Loved the way you have portrayed Arnav's growing feelings and his understanding of the need to express his emotions...loved the way he mused about having someone in his life...it clearl;y shows what he feels about Khushi..

Khushi's confusion is well justified..but dil to dil hai na..it is very hard to control ones heart felt emotions...

Loved the J Arnav...it will be a ball to read about that..I can already see a fuming Arnav...I remember how he reacted the first time Anya had mentioned Sanjeev and now after Khushi telling him that she has found someone..o la la la

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

When the chapter begun I started getting hopeful - for Arnav & Khushi. But looks like it'll take time for them to cover years of distance.
Khushi knows what she wants but she is not ready to risk her feelings at the hands of a man who once told her to forget him. But she is forgetting that he is the same man who didn't give her a chance back then and won't give her now.
Arnav has decided to pursue her and he will continue doing it till he succeeds.
One of them needs to hold on if the other is giving up and specially now when her words made it quite clear that his words have hurt her and she is just trying to save her bruised heart from more hurt.
Ok. so got to know that Mamiji was fine with Payal being a friend to Anya and family but not as a love interest of Akash. What should I call this - hypocrisy!!
I'm happy that at least the whole family is not like this. It'll be good if Akash talks to Mamiji before the thing gets more out of hand and spoil his new made relationship with Payal.
Oh and I loved how you described the weather and its effects on our two lost lovers. That morning jog/run is incredible with the way you describe nature.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3Ztq2hu5Kg[/YOUTUBE]

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Lovely update!!!!! No one does scenic descriptions like you do. I could literally visualize what you were describing ...the early morning landscape scene where Khushi goes to the green house and Arnav is returning back from his run???the chilly crisp air! the magnificent of the backdrop! the beauty of the morning...

Then the emotions!!!! Arnav is now questioning and may be discarding long held beliefs in front of his emotions that he is forced to feel for Khushi...she is still in her self preservation and sane mode, asking very logical questions of him? What I love about this girl is her utter honesty and courage as she faces her feelings...she is not into self deception. she has long known and accepted the power of this man on her emotions but she is not giving into those emotions and being a slave to them.

Now that he is setting out to conquer her...life should get very interesting.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Ahh ... being in Nainital and that too during the winters ...

I could literally feel a shiver go down my spine ...

Just loved the scenic description of the early morning sun ...

"A sunny morning awaited her. Each resplendent dewdrop clinging to

the green tendrils of the lawn were spot lit by sunlight, lovingly..."

"Running along the mountain roads, Arnav welcomed the warmth of

the sunrays by looking up into the eastern sky where the sun shone

brightly. The roadside was paved with silky bed of pine needles. The

woods beyond remained in shadows as the morning light struggled to

filter down through the gaps in the treetops..." gave us a good feel of

being up in the mountains ...

and then Khushi's monologue of the various thoughts going on in her mind ...

Firstly Christmas ... wishing herself a Merry Christmas ... being thankful

for being with her best friends during the festival ...

Then thoughts about Arnav ... and their kiss 😳 and then feeling all flustered

about her reaction to him and the kiss ...

Then we have Arnav and his monlogue ... the conflict quite apparent in his mind ...

mind versus the heart ... "he had decided that romance and love were not

his cup of tea ..." till a certain "Nymph" landed in his arms destroying his equilibrium ... and his intense desire to be near her ... with her ... sigh ... 😳❤️

The greenhouse conversation was interesting ... his interest pretty apparent while she is still in runaway mode ... or rather "Self-Preservation" mode ... 😉

"You can try pretending that this doesn't matter, Khushi Gupta.

You can fool yourself.

Not me.

I'm Arnav Singh Raizada.

And I never give up..." Arnavs last thoughts ... 😆

Thanks Sandhya ... with the intensity of the passion between them hope

the snow doesn't melt in cold cold Nainital ... 😆