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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Fantastic to see a new story from you. I'm so glad you've started a new one.
I loved the start with its lovely description of khushi's world filled with love and yet, her yearning for that one special person's love!

Arnav seems to have decided that he cannot betray the family that had given him so much love and security, they have made him who he is. hence the procession of girlfriends.

I love that your stories are filled with the most pleasant colors despite the greys mixed in. They are like the colors of golden autumn which bring with them not only the fact that the leaves will fall, and winter will come, but more important that new growth with new colors will come in the spring which has tcome after the winter.

its lovely to have a great story and great piece of writing to look forward to!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
What a wonderful start!
Why did'nt Arnav stop her?
Please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Awesome start...love the concept of an independent khushi..that character had so much potential..looking forward to this
Just as an aside..got a little confused between the first person and third person narrative..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Nice story. Can you please pm me when you update. Would love to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
I love the song!! And I especially love that you're back!! Great start to the story...I have a feeling Arnav told Khushi about Sheetal just to set her free.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I was just about to hit the bed and Liza sent me an IM , breaking news Nidhi has started a new story !😲
Pfft all my neend gayab and i came here in a jiffy !😳
Hume aap paraya bana rahe ho... inform bhi nahi kiya iske baare main ??😭

But main kya bolon ab ! Ek toh the title of your stories are so special and romantic upar so your own enchanting persona getting so aptly reflected here !

Super Duper Hit hai Boss !!!!!😎

Ps: Arnav is a budding cardiologist ?👍🏼 Iski inspiration kahan se mili apko ?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Dear thank you for the email.😃

Thank you dear for not taking a break👏

The concept is beautiful. 😛

Arnav is doing it knowing that Khushi loves him😡

Dear update daily. Eagerly waiting to know the way this story will unfold.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: _disha_

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Pfft all my neend gayab and i came here in a jiffy !😳</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hume aap paraya bana rahe ho... inform bhi nahi kiya iske baare main ??😭</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">But main kya bolon ab ! Ek toh the title of your stories are so special and romantic upar so your own enchanting persona getting so aptly reflected here !</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Super Duper Hit hai Boss !!!!!😎</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Ps: Arnav is a budding cardiologist ?👍🏼 Iskiinspirationkahan se mili apko ?😳</font>


waise hi jaise Sami ko movie watching OS ki mili hogi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
So Arnav know about Khushi's feelings...
What exactly does he feel for her?? There are hints that his feelings may not be completely platonic..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
You really surprise me with this new story...
can't tell u how happy i am when i saw your mail...
the starting is beautiful enough to let us know that how beautiful the next parts will be...
i am a fan of your writing...
you always come up with such story line...we could not even think...but then after all it's
Arnav and Khushi...the two most beautiful character i have ever seen...
plzzz update next soon...
& a BIG THANKS for this new story

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