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Will comment later :)

OHMYGOD, I'm so glad I got the first post because this is going to be one looong comment. :|

Starting with, I LOVE YOUR STORY <33

It's so unique and the characters are so damn cute, most of them anyway. ;)

I remember thinking, "this is such a serious story" when I read the prologue and saw the cover but no, it isn't. 😃

Yes, yes, I told you I'm sadistic par itna bhi nahi! 😳

The character development has been so good in your SS <3

I loveee the initially confused wala Armaan. He is so damn cute. And I love how Muskii and Rahul can trick him into doing their bid. LOL. Armaan ke khud ke saath talks are entertaining in the first chapter. 😆 Rahul ki kya batti jali. I lovee Rahul because uske vajah se the looovee starts ^_^ I love Riddhima's thoughts, they're so damn entertaining 😆 She called Ammy pretty boy ☺️ But I love Ridzi's thoughts. They are so damn cuuuteee <3 She's like a choti bacchi <3 And those diary entries, god :') Itna sweet che, pura Ridzi oriented rant. 😆 And Rahul is sooo perfect in your FF. Matlab ki, it reminds me so much of DMG, like how Rahul was the first of the friends to figure out uska pyaar. They share itna unique bond. <3

Then comes Chap 2. I must say, I love the size of your updates <33 Rahul is such an awesome cupid. Har cheez pe he gets them closer. Aww :D All Armaan-Rahul conversations are always so fun to read in your FF coz they're sooo in character. It was one of my favorite bonds (all are 😆) and seeing it renewed in your FF gives me itna saara khushi :') Fir Atul-Armaan. Aww, just aww. Atul is so damn cute <3 I love smarties and since Anjie is not there (:(), I call dibs on Atul. Again, Ridzi ka talk. God, I could hug her tight. She's so damn funny. That is truly, for me, the best part of your SS. Those thoughts are just 🤣

Chap 3. Funniest chapter yet 🤣 I already love Ben Cooper, I want to see him aage bhi 🤣 Don't get me wrong, I just love Ridzi's reactions to him 🤣 Good lord, he's too good. How does he look? 😳 Bechara Ben doesn't know what he was saved from 🤣 And then again Rahul-Armaan. God, I love these twoo. Rahul toh idhar bhi Muski se darta hai 😆 The Muskii effect :') That Ridzi thought with the songs, I laugh so hard at her thoughts ki it hurts 🤣 And then confession :O So shocking! You enjoy giving readers a heart attack? Fir ek aur jhatka, that good for nothing ex of hers -_- And oh my god, Muskii is adorable when she's jealous 😆 Also, I love how Armaan's all bossy with Rahul just like a best friend is :') I LOVEE THEM. I know I say it everytime but I can't help it. And then the third jhatka, Armaan bhi in love. :O You will kill me with your surprises. -_-

Did I mention I love the name furit loop? No? Then I do 😆 That ohsoadorable one word convo, too cute <33 And Eva idhar aa gayi. I loooveee kids in AR ke stories. They are so awesome with them ^_^ love how Ridzi convince him 😆 Abhi se uska bas chal raha hai. And oh no Ridz ka insecurity I love funny Ridzi 😃 GOODDD, I LOVE RAOOOL. He's itna accha and helpful! Har insaan ko aisa friend mile 😳 And yay, they found her!

Chappy 5, mera favorite 😳😳 Hayye, I love Muski's reactions 🤣 They've always been fun to read, hear, write, listen and watch 🤣 I fell in love with Eva when Muskii got all pareshaan 😆 Anyone able to do that to Muskii is on my favs ka list 🤣 Goodness, Eva toh model nikli, what with all thelipstick <33 And then her outburst 🤣 Bechara Rahul. I pity him kyunki he always HAS to put up with Muski and even though I love her, it must get stressful at times 😆 And oh my god, she called him Aman :O And Muski ko crazy curly haired lady boli voh, I love this child already 🤣 And Eva's such a cute name <33 And yes, he does deserve an award 😳 Aww, she called him skittle head again :') I love this patient and calm Armaan who doesn't get angry <33 And did I just read an RM moment. AWWW, they're my second favorites after AR <3 Awwie, I loveee it <3 I made the right choice when I loved Rahul :')

That midnight phone call was just awww <3 I'm soo happy Armaan is already daddy like with Eva and so is Eva baby like with him <3 That one thought, ohhh Armaan, how I love you. Tashu, I'm writing this at 12.30 in the night with an exam tomorrow. Shows how much I love it? And that DARE. Rahul is so amazing :') He's fulfilling the dream of millions of fangirls <33 That blackmail was just 🤣 And Eva, oh she's so cute :') Bechare Armaan ko hi fasaa diya 😆 I love this guy <33 And just when I think he's about to leave, BAM, confession and Ridzi is still. Shock mein chali gayi just like me 🤣 Then that Rahul-Armaan convo, aww! I so wish they were gay right now 🤣 But then AR and RM wouldn't be there. Maybe a foursome? 🤔 I love Muski and Ridzi too so I wouldn't mind 😃 Also, why is it that hamesha only Rahul ki batti jalti hai? 😆 And then the confession. AWWWIEEE <333 Mere AR ;') Okay, so that diary note is the BEST diary note I've ever read. It was so well described and it was exactly how I felt Riddhima would write. It felt so damn real and I love how you've conceptualized it with her father and husband plotting against her and I love how she's not abused normally, unlike many other women. Ridzi is one STRONG woman and Padma is adorbsss <33 And aww, Anjy is dead :( I absolutely fell in love with the story at this point and hence this very looong comment <3 Also, I love how Armaan's not judgmental and doesn't ditch Riddhima, instead he stays by her side. Aww, I love Fruit Loop and Skittle Head <33

Continued in the next comment :D

and where is armaan and eva...

armaan come to save ur ridhima

It's just making me more impatient for the update :(

Please update soon

cannot wait to read the whole chapter

sounds superb