TaaRey OS :That Moment

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys
this is Prachi here ready with an OS
whole credits to Sandy she has written it
As i said am here to write it N post it
She has written this in a book N given me




Ting tong
A guy with chocolate brown eyes,tall,smart,Dashing
who was busy with his guitar keeps the guitar in its place N moves to the door

he opens the door
he sees a girl in simple traditional outfit
the dress was perfectly fitting her curves
her curly hair bouncing

girl:may i come in

Boy:ahh...yeah but you are

girl:may i please come in?

boy:yeah please

Girl comes in

Boy:please sit

girl:thank you

Boy:hie am reyaansh N may i knw who u are

girl:am sorry...am taani
Taaniya shekawat

Taani:actually i stay after two lanes
my friends planned to play a prank on me N i some how got to know about plan
N i had no where to go
all my belonging are home
one of my friend told she will help me once they are out of my house
if u dont mind can i stay here for a hour


Rey:yeah sure

Taani:may i know if Your parents are ok if am here...as i dont knw u

Rey fell in love the moment he saw her

Rey: no i stay alone here
And i have no objection if u here...N in some time my kaka will come as woh sabzi lene bahar gaye hai

Taani:thanks a lot


Rey:your welcome

Taani:soo what do u do?

Rey: am a Dancer and own my own acadamy with my friend

taani:wow...thats soo good

Rey:well then what do u do?

Taani: Am a journalist And a NGO

rey:thats really great


There was some silence N more awkwardness

Rey:ahh would u like to have a coffee?

Taani:sure

Rey was going towards kitchen

Taani:rey less sugar N more strong

Rey:actually am not that good at making a coffee
can u adjust

taani:its ok
would u mind if i make coffee for both of us

rey was suprised and was staring at her innocent face,angelic eyes

taani:can i use ur kitchen

Rey:yep sure

Taani moves into the kitchen N makes coffee

Rey was just admiring her sitting in the dining area

taani after some time is back with two cups of coffee

they both sat on dining table And started their conversation
they were no more strangers
they felt as if they had know each other from a very long time

rey:taani chalo balcony mai chalte hai

taani:yeah sure

they both continued their conversation N forgot the world

taani:chaliye andar chalte hai haan

rey took the coffee cup from her hands N kept it in the kitchen

taani:yeh guitar kiska hai?

rey:mujhe guitar bohut pasand hai
its my passion

taani:can u please play me a song

rey:no

taani:please even i love uitar but never gave a chance
plzz one song mere liye

rey:okk sure

taani sat on the bean bag N rey pulled a stool and started playing guitar


(dil ko tumse pyaar huwa)


taani:wow rey its awesome

taani:mera phone?

rey:i think u left it in the kitchen

taani gets up but she steps on her dupatta and was about to fall and closes her eyes

but to her suprise rey catches her

suddenly the power goes off

taani clutches his hirt tightly

rey makes her stand properly

Rey:taani please dont be scared plss take my mobile ill juzz check whats wrong

rey didnt know whats wrong so he goes to kitchen and gets candle
but before that he sees taani mobile

its shown two messages
he opens and he reads "they lefts u can come back"
he leaves the mobile there only

he goes to taani
Rey:dont whats wrong but am here dont worry

rey with candle moves near taani
they both have LLHH
n they were totally lost in each other


power comes back they move back

taani:ill get my mobile

rey thinks :what she will leave if she sees the msg...god please kuch karo

taani comes to the hall with her mobile

just then he gets a call in landline

Rey:hello

Rey MOM: rey tumhara mobile not reacable kyun aa raha hai?

rey:woh mom battery dead hai

REY mom:rey did u forget u had to meet a girl today

rey:ohh...yeah mom i forgot ill goo now

Rey mom:ok beta jaldi karo she may be waiting

Rey:ji mom ok bye

Taani:mi think u have to go out?

rey:haan ladki se milne jaana hai

taani face turns small

Taani:ok u carry on...even i got a msg from my friend even ill leave

Rey:taani

just then again his landline rings

rey moves to pick up

Taani:thanxx rey bye

Rey:wait

Rey mom:beta aap jaate waqat plzz dont forget to take a gift

Rey:ji mom bye

he moves out but taani leaves by then

he goes out on road but didnt find her anywhere


after sometime
he gets ready and move to CCD

Rey goes in and goes to girl who was in corner table

Rey:hi am reyaansh N ur sharon ri8?

sharon:yeah am Sharon

rey:ohhh he sits there

Sharon:i have spoken to your mom shezz really sweet

Rey:yeah

Sharon:soo which type of life partner u want?

rey:he remebers taani
A girl whose traditional

Sharon:ohhh

Sharon:do u want ur partner as a great cook?

rey:well cocking kaa toh pata nahi but she have to make a superb coffee
he remebers taani order for coffee N lost in his thoughts



Sharon:i guess u lost some where N are in someone else thoughts?

rey:actually...u are ri8

Sharon:do u love somebody?

Rey:love?
LOVE?

yeah...sorry i gotta goo


rey goes from there
the next two days he couldn't be himself
he was totally lost in taani
he couldn't concentrate even while dancing


he came home all frustrated
he sat on couch
suddenly he hears door bell

suddenly he jump from sofa
Rey:may be its taani

he opens the door he finds sharon

Sharon:hie may i come in

Rey:yeah please

Sharon:the other day u just left without telling a word

rey:actually am sorry sharon
i am in love...i love her

Sharon:whose she?

Rey: a simple girl
beautifull traditional,with an agel like face


Sharon:taani come in

Rey was shocked to the zenith

taani comes in

sharon:actually rey when my mom told to meet u i was not ready N taani is my friend we both stay in our house
she came up with a plan to
and she came to meet u

the day when i met u i saw r behavior weird and taani hid her feelings N even she started behaving lost from me N then i understood the matter

rey:taani I LOVE U
the first time i saw u that moment i fell in love

Taani:I LOVE U TOO rey

from there started the begining of world's most beautiful love story


soo guys its Sandy's first OS
plzz drop in your Comments N likes
Thanks for welcoming me with ur lovely comments
love u alll
Edited by sandy_amar - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Awesome super cute os
taarey little moments were awesome
loved it
keep writing more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
AWESOME
SUPER CUTE OS
ACCIDENTAL LOVE HAYEEE😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Cute one
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was really cute and lovely.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awesome sweet os thanks prachi 4 pm me
N yeah sandy 1st os or itna accha
Too good taarey moment rocks
Do write more dearo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os dea... Rey had luv at first sight...
dat concept was great..! Keep writin more
Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow,...so cute
Loved it😛
Keep on writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and lovely is
Taarey moment soo cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb OS .. 👏
damn cute .. 😳

taarey were adorable ..

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

keep writing .. 😃

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