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wat an update buddy
i was completely into tis update
sply the begining dude
you Made that sensuous moment of two lips meeting
explode out of the page
ensuring that i was panting for more,
desperate to turn the page and melt into your words
you Wrote the scene with as much detail
tat i cud actually picture the environment.
Reflecting parts of the environment
as facets of the characters inner turmoil n uncertainty
you made me feel this tension tat heightens
the urgency and immediacy of the scene
tat it made my own heart race faster
take a bow man for writing sumthing
tat emerges so directly from the heart.
the small bits of sharon's thoughts
were a treat to read
brilliantly penned 👏
i was happy tat sharon did not give in to
swayam so easily
waiting eagerly for the next update
do update soon 😃
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