ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 2- Chapter 15 to Chapter 23 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

AWWW I LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃



Oh...thank you so much dear🤗
I will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkugarg

very nice update

very cute scenes especially of changing clothes
pls update soon😊


Thank you so much dear🤗
Awww...glad that you liked it😊
I will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

great work...😊 beautifully written
thanks for the PM 😊


thank you so much dear🤗
I am really happy that you like my writing style😃
I will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rosered1

Congratz for ur new thread dear.
Asad- Dishad convo was soo cute 😛

Zoyas fear. reveal it soon 😉
Thx for the pm and thx for mentioning my name :D


Thank you so much dear🤗
Zoya's fear will be reveal in time😉
I will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

sooo beautiful it was !!!!!!!

Zoya invented many things about Asad...his OCD problem...his akdu behaviour but kind heart...
that flashback scene was so cute...his arrangements for her comfort...his care for her...

so the next morning zoya is there for his help...
i like the way u narrate every emotions of asya in that whole scene...
zoya was so concern when she saw him trying to up from the bed alone...but he was hesitant...
when he touch her hand...her concern changed into guilt, rejection & fear...& he obseved her each changing expression...
both r so embarrassed...
that moments in bathroom...washing his hair & changing his Kurta...so awkward for both of them & their awkwardness is visible in their each move...each whisper...
why Zoya feel fear in his proximity...which she can't explain...

but plz u explain that soon...coz i can't wait...

continue soon...
Thankew so much for pm 😊😊




Aaah...Thank you so much🤗
I was so afraid to post this chapter because I thought I can't write this kind of stuffs😕
now I feel relieved😛
Coming to your comment..
Do I tell you before that I loved your comment.❤️
Now I eagerly wait for it after posting of each chapter
It always gives me fresh and new feeling and tempt me to write more😳
You are a superb reader with superb analysis👏

I will try to explain Zoya's fear soon😉
and...and...and...keep enjoying and commenting😃
I will love to read your comments more ☺️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome...they are getting coser😳...loved it🤗...update soon😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Awsome...they are getting coser😳...loved it🤗...update soon😃😃


Thank you so much🤗
yes they are..😊
glad that you loved it😃
I will try to update soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Aaah...Thank you so much🤗
I was so afraid to post this chapter because I thought I can't write this kind of stuffs😕
now I feel relieved😛
Coming to your comment..
Do I tell you before that I loved your comment.❤️ & i think i loved ur writing more than that...
Now I eagerly wait for it after posting of each chapter & i am egerly waiting for next update...
It always gives me fresh and new feeling and tempt me to write more😳
You are a superb reader with superb analysis👏 Thank u so much...😊

I will try to explain Zoya's fear soon😉 i am waiting...
and...and...and...keep enjoying and commenting😃 i always enjoying ur updates...
I will love to read your comments more ☺️ 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww...pleasure is all mine...thank you so much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update...😊

Hope zoya soon meet mr. six packs...😉

Waiting for nxt part update soon...😊

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