ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 2- Chapter 15 to Chapter 23

First Previous

Page

112

Next Last

Frequent Posters

princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

AWWW I LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

Quote

pinkugarg

@pinkugarg

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

very nice update

very cute scenes especially of changing clothes

pls update soon😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

great work...😊 beautifully written
thanks for the PM 😊

Quote

Rosered1

@Rosered1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Congratz for ur new thread dear.
Asad- Dishad convo was soo cute 😛

Zoyas fear. reveal it soon 😉

Thx for the pm and thx for mentioning my name :D

Quote

-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: swapno

I am your favorite writer!!!!!😲 😲
Oh my god... ☺️ 🤗
You are really so sweet..❤️
love you honey😃

Ohhh love u dear...😊

Yeah u r my favourite one...

Quote

-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

sooo beautiful it was !!!!!!!

Zoya invented many things about Asad...his OCD problem...his akdu behaviour but kind heart...

that flashback scene was so cute...his arrangements for her comfort...his care for her...

so the next morning zoya is there for his help...

i like the way u narrate every emotions of asya in that whole scene...

zoya was so concern when she saw him trying to up from the bed alone...but he was hesitant...

when he touch her hand...her concern changed into guilt, rejection & fear...& he obseved her each changing expression...

both r so embarrassed...

that moments in bathroom...washing his hair & changing his Kurta...so awkward for both of them & their awkwardness is visible in their each move...each whisper...

why Zoya feel fear in his proximity...which she can't explain...

but plz u explain that soon...coz i can't wait...

continue soon...

Thankew so much for pm 😊😊

Quote

Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
OO THIS WAS SO GOOOD!

They got to be alone in the house and Zoya got to do things for Asad heheh

Oh...Thank you so much dear🤗

I am glad to make you laugh..😆

I will try to update soon😊

Quote

Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part

Thank you so much🤗

I will try to update soon😊

Quote

Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: madina12
So cute na tis two...Lol 😳
Lookimg forward to ur next update

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

I will try to update soon😊

Quote

Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: aashiqua
asad and zoya r coming close

Yes they are coming close😊

Thank you so much🤗

Quote

1 ... 20 21 22 23 24 ... 112

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

This story has been inspired by the 2002 Malayalam film Nandanam, and was written at the request of Jasminerahul. It is my humble attempt to...

Expand ▼

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 2- Chapter 15 to Chapter 23 - Page 22

Related Topics

Explore Topics