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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamanbk

All the best for your exams

Awesome update
Beautifully written
Finally Taani confessed her love
The kiss was hot
Will be waiting patiently for the update


Thanks dear...Thank u so much! I am glad u liked it.. Will update soon.. 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Neha..PM

All the best for exams..
The chaptee was awesome...
Finally, stubborn Tani confessed!
Love tatey kiss!
Come back with bang!
Will miss you.


Thanks Neha...Thank u so much! Missed you too.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: visk

first of all "all the best for ur exams "...
the update was fab..
taani confessed to rey
fianlly the wait s over
update soon


Thanks sweetie...Thank u so much! Yes... Wait is over.. will update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

res
UNRES
ISH MAINE BOHOT PEHLEE HI PARH LIYA THA BUT COMMENT??????
KAISE KARU??????
ANSWER-----1. COULD NOT BELIEVE THAT U HAVE UPDATED AND CONFESSION OVER...
2. AFTER READING READ ONCE...TWICE...THRICE.,...ETC ETC TO BELIEVE THAT CONFESSION DONE

COMING TO UPDATE

LOVED THE WAY THE U POTRAYED IT
TO BEGIN WITH LOVED Mrs RAI'S CONVERSATION IDENTIFYING THE SPARK IN TAAREY'S EYES


Mrs. Rai smiled at Taani. " You are a beauty sweetheart." She smiled warmly at her. Taani blushed.

"Thank you.." She murmured. Mrs. Rai turned to Rey, " Is there something between you two?" She asked.


THEN LOVED THE WAY TO SEE TAAREY DANCE BOTH SO COMFORTABLE IN EACH OTHER'S ARM BUT ULTIMATELY TAANI DECLARES THAT SHE IS UNCOMFORTABLE AND THEN THE DELIMA IN BOTH OF THEM ... AND ULTIMATELY REY DECIDES TO CONFRONT

TAANI HIS FEELINGS...HE WANTED AN ANSWER AS TO WHY TAANI'S EYES DEPICTED LOVE AND HER VOICE SAID SOMETHING ELSES SO HIS DIALOGUE...


Clear me everything damn it. Do you know what are you doing to me? You are making a joke of me." He hissed. His voice was stony. She shook her head.

"One minute, you care for me. And, the another minute, you say you hate me..Do you know how much it hurts??" Rey hissed.


Rey left the grip on her shoulders and put his hand on the either side of her head. Taani looked at his face. His eyes were dull, face was tired. She was going to loose it. She can't do that. She has finally somehow managed to put those walls around her heart, he can't break them. He can't.

"Rey, leave me." She murmured. Rey's eyes snapped at her.

"Leave you? Huh??" He chuckled without humor in it. Taani put her hand on his chest and tried to push him away. But, he didn't bulge. Taani was trying, but Rey was looking down at her, her struggle.

He gripped her wrist and quickly put it behind her back, his another hand snaked around her waist, leaving tingling sensation on her flesh, he pulled her towards him. Taani gasped.

Her breath was uneven. "How are you feeling now, Taani?? Uncomfortable??" He hissed at her. She was squirming under his grip. She threw a disgusted look at him. It actually angered him more. He twisted her wrist behind her back, her another hand was trying to push him. But, it wasn't working.

"Don't give me that look, Taani." Rey glared at her. His jaw was clenched. The pulse was bulging out of his skin on his neck. He tightened his grip on her wrist and she cried in pain. He leaned. Her breath hitched in her throat. She gulped as he eyed her lips then his eyes flickered to her.

"Come on Taani, feeling uncomfortable??" He asked. His breath was fanning her face. Taani scrunched up her nose, as some smell hit her nose.


AND ULTIMATELY TAANI COULDN'T STOP HERSELF AND DECIDED TO SAY TO HIM HER REAL FEELINGS,,SHE COULDN'T STOP HERSELF AFTER LOOKING AT A TOTALLY MENTALLY BROKEN REY...


She looked at her left, no one was there. Her heart was thudding in her ribcage. She looked at her right. She gulped as she saw his figure, marching quickly.

She took the hold of the plates of her saree.

"Reyyy..." She shouted his name and started running.

Rey stopped in his track, he didn't look back. His palms were in tight fist. He closed his eyes and snapped open quickly.

"Reyyy.." He could hear her. But, he started walking straight. He can't do this, anymore. He had confessed her repeatedly.

Taani put her hand on his shoulder , made him stop in his track. She came in front of him.

"Reyy.." She whispered, while panting for breath. But, he ignored her. He walked past her. She quickly followed him and stood in front of him. He was about to walk again. But, she placed her hand on his chest, exactly on his heart. That made him stop.

Taani gulped as she could feel his rapid heartbeat under her palm. Rey looked down at her hand, then slowly turned up at her.

"Rey listen to me.." Her voice croaked. She gulped while breathing heavily.

"There is nothing left to hear." Rey murmured. But, before she could say, she stepped in front of him.

"Rey..Please-" But, before she could say anything , he stopped her. He removed her hand from his chest.

Taani's eyes filled with tears. Not because, he walked past her. Because, his eyes were filled with sadness. His eyes were filled with tears also. She closed her eyes and let tears fall.

WHEN REY DID NOT LISTEN TO HER SHE DID NOT BACKED OFF RATHER SHE WAS DETERMINED TO CONFESS HER FEELINGSSS

Taani jumped. She bite her lips as tears streamed down from her cheeks. She looked up at Rey.

"I am sorry, Reeyy.." Her voice was breaking. She was verge on busting in fit of tears. A sob escaped from her throat.

Rey took one step and cupped her cheek. She put his palm on the back of his hand and closed her eyes, let tears stream down on her cheeks.

"Shhh...I don't want to lose you Taani. I want you." Rey whispered. Taani shivered as the wind howled, her hair blown in different directions. Suddenly, rain started to pour.

Both were standing , alone, all wet gazing at each other with so much intensity. Taani didn't say anything for what he said.

The only three words left from her mouth.

"I love you.." She whispered as another roar from sky appear. This time the wind howls more forcely, rain started pouring heavily.

"What??" Rey immediately whispered. " I love you, Rey. I love you." She whispered and flung her arms around his neck, buried her face in the crook of his neck.

Rey's hand were on his side. But, as soon as Taani hugged him. She burst into tears. She was crying in his neck. Instantly, his arms went around her tiny, bare, wet waist. His another hand rest on her bare back. He pulled her close to him as much as he can. He closed his eyes and buried his face in her wet hair.

AND ALSO LOVED WHEN REY SAID


"Though the rain is here. But, your tears can't hide from me.." He whispered. His both cold plams were on her cheeks, making her warm.

"Say it again, Taani!" Rey whispered. Taani closed her eyes and opened them. " I love you, Rey. I love you so much." She whispered, her voice was breaking.

Rey leaned and put his forehead on her. " Really? You love me Taani? You don't hate me??" Rey asked, while gazing down at her with love.

Taani shook her head slightly. "No.. I don't hate you Rey." She said, as new tears formed. "I love you." She whispered again.

He smiled slightly down at her. He leaned more down, their noses were touching each other, their breaths were mingled.

"I love you, Taani." He whispered. He kissed her nose quickly. " I LOVE YOU.." He said.

Taani raise her hand from his torso and put them on his hand, on her cheeks. Her lips formed a small smile on them. "Say it again.." She whispered.

"I love you, Taani." He said, smiling down at her. Her heart fluttered at his words. "I love you too.." She whispered in a small innocent voice. Both smiled at each other. Rey looked in her eyes. Taani had a small smile on her lips.

"I am not going to let you go away from me." He whispered, the possessiveness was dripping from the tone of his words. Taani took his palm and pressed her lips on his palm.

"I am not either planning to leave.. I have enough... Staying away from you. Not anymore." She whispered.


NOW COMING TO THE POINT ISH I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT I HAVE COMMENTED OR HOW DID I EXPRESSED MY FEELINGS COZ UR SUDDEN UNEXPECTED CONFESSION MADE ME SPEECH LESS ,,,THE AGGRESSIVENESS IN A DRUNKEN REY THEN WHEN HE WANTED AN ANSWER FROM HER THEN REY MOVING AWAY AND THEN TAANIS CONFESSION WITH TEARS BOTH OF THEIR LOVE AND BOTH OF THEIR CARE EVERY THING WAS SO PERFECT AND AWESOME IT GAVE ME GOOSE BUMS... I DON'T HAVE WORD TO EXPRESS I REALLY AM SPEECHLESS .. I REALLY DONT KNOW WHAT I COMMENTED AND ABOUT ITS LENGTH BECAUSE EACH EVERY LINE WAS A EPIC DEPICTING LOVE PASSION CARE AND A START OF A STRONG RELATION FEELED WITH FEELINGS


WITH LOTS AND LOTS OF LOVE

TO MY DEAR SIS ISH

PRIYANKA DIII...

(BEAR WITH THE COMMENT COZ I WAS SO OVERWHELMED THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT I SAID ..BUT ONE THING IS CLEAR LOVED EACH AND EVERY LINE ...JUST CAN NOT STOP MY SELF FROM EXPRESSING MY FEELINGSSS)





Awww...Di...Thanks a lot...Thank u so much.. I am...I am speechless.. I can't.. I don't know what to say! Thank u so much... Thanks a lot.. These thanks can't express my feelings.. Love you too! :) <3

And.. di...This is the best comment I had! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Muskan_TR

I cant expresss how m i feeling at this moment...

I...i...i wanna party
no no...i wanna dance

No i wanna scream to let my excitement come out...

AAAHHH

FINALLY FINALLY THEY CONFESSED...
AFTER A VEERRRYYY LONG TYM THEY CONFESSED...
*FAINTED*

The whole chapter was one of d best updates ever...

Love u alot fr this confession di...

alsooo d dresses were lovely...

I also remembered taarey's small scene when maya said that she chosen d dress fr taani...

N then lobby wala scene...
cuttteee

They entered hall together...
Thank gd press didnt asked anything abt their previous news

Mr n mrs rai r sooo sweettt...

Tr dance...

N then backstsge scene...
ufff

N then lawn wala scene...
My heaet was beating as i n it will b in my mouth any second...

N FINALLY she said I LOVE U

n hen tr's Say again...

Bechare ko vishwas hi nhi ho rha tha...
Like me :P


N dd ending paet was super se ooppeerrr...

Plzzz if u cant update then plzzz give sneak peak

Plz plzzz

All d best fr racticals n exams



Thanks dear..Thank u so so so so so much... I am glad u liked it.. I am grinning from ear to ear.. Thanks a lot! Will update soon! =)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Ossum blossm n evrything abt the update was superbbb n tooo fab
Romantic n beautiful confession finally taarey r tgether now yipeee cherry on the cake was d rain which made d confession more beautiful.beautiful dresses
all d best for d practicals n for exam.will be waiting for d update


Nida...My dear! Thanks a lot sweet...Thank u so much.. Thanks for such a sweet comment... Will update soon and thanks for the wishes! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosalilly12

all the best for your exams


Thank you..My exams gone well! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Taarey conffession is done...👍🏼

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊

All the best for ur exams...😃


Thanks Shubh...Thank u so much! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

Ishuuu

I love u
I love u
I love u
Like seriously
Ye kaise zor ka jhatka dheere se laga
I nevr thot in mah wildest dreams ki
Confession hoga...
Love u so much fr this update yaar
I want to say so much but m speechless
The way u described their love...
In each and every word was
Spectacular!!!
And waiting fr a lovely and ossom update ahead!!!


Awww...Hima...Thanks gal...Thank u so much! :D Love you too! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: disha93

Finally Taani confessed!!! Fab update!!! Loved it!!!! 😊


Thanks gal..Thank u so much!! :)

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