Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Lovely ending... Very real. Just exactly what I would have wanted for her...no OTT drama???just a simple acceptance and understanding that Arnav and Khushi... Are together and one... hamesha.

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Simply awesome . Loved the ending. This is true ASR style. No drama. very very subtle.

that is what I like about your stories.

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Like I had said from the beginning, Dia would be perfectly fine at the end of this.

I mean, she can't be the first who's heart has been broken by ASR!

It was interesting how despite Khushi not being a major major part of this she was there the entire time! ;)

She not only wrapped ASR around her tiny fingers, but his family and employees as well!

You brought this short story too a wonderful conclusion :)

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Oh and I can't wait for your next story/one shot! :D

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Fantastic ending to a wonderful story!

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

A very practical ending!

j'ai ador!

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ambili123

@ambili123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

what the will khushi come to know abt dias crush on her husband poor asr has no clue abt it

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-Dil-

@-Dil-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

That was such a mature ending to the story Aparna. Just loved it to the core...👍🏼

I loved how you ended the story with Diya reminding Khushi of Lavanya. Wow. That was a stroke of literary genius!! I could imagine that scene in front of me..Like always Arnav is unaware of anybody elses's emotion but Khushi's..LOL The guy really really is in love...😆