Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

amazing start !!! oh god feeling bad for dia.. she doesn't know asr or mrs asr... but loved the start.. do continue soon..

you know i love mera beta so much.. just was thinking about it other day.. how beautifully you have written about arnav and his relations with his in-laws.. loved shashi gupta and his son.. would like to see similar something with buaji and garima.. buaji and arnav had a very beautiful relation there is no doubt.. but with garima he used to always hold back.. hope you do something about it.. also arnav and khushi's best friend happyji.. don't know why i am asking so much from you.. you have always writing so beautiful OS about all relations.. so felt like you should put some light on these ones too..

thanks for pm 😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome

Very interesting start.

How can a girl resist falling in love with ASR who is handsome, dashing n full of energy businessman but Khushi is also right that not very on gain enough courage to work with arrogant n ruthless businessman Arnav Singh Raizada.

This Dia might make Khushi jealous and she might made her appearance in AR, breaking all the sweet dreams of Dia for ASR.

ASR and Arnav are exclusively for Khushi only, BUS.

Looking forward to read the next part.

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome update
Loved it 😊
Pls pm me when u update :)

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Uh oh someone's in for a heart break. Well we can't blame Dia actually. Even a blind person would've felt something if she collided with someone as handsome as ASR. Moreover he said "Please" to her that too in his husky voice. Now that never happened before Khushi came in his life. Aww our Khushi is all possessive. Arnav and Khushi's nok jhok was very cute. Very cute start. Looking forward to reading it. Loved the 1st chapter. Seriously I won't mind at all if you turn this SS which is on Arnav and Khushi into a FF. I specially love reading all your stories focusing on Arnav and Khushi. Do give it a thought. Thanks for the PM :)

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wow you started a Ss based on only Arshi...Yaay...!!!

While reading Dia's thoughts all I was thinking was "Dia you don't know what you are signing...Arnav means Khushi...even if the sun rises in West."

Would love to see a over-possessive Khushi...But I already feel sad for the Dia...Maybe she can take Dhruv and be SISTER-IN-LAW to the first Lady of Indian Business. This is surely going to be a crazy-adventurous-ride for Dia & Arshi.

I loved the Arshi conversation in the last. They are just too cute and sweet. Love them.

P.S-Please please please find me an Arnav.

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Yay! Another one!

I wasn't able to read HRN, but I read the one with Dhruv and I just loved it! And then I love all your OSes, especially the ArHi ones so I'm super excited about this! :)

I'm quite interested to see how this will end up a mainly ArHi SS since it seems the main setting is at office with the introduction of Dia and Fida!

And of course, without their wives both brothers would be goners ;) lol.

Can't wait for the next part!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Oh and I'd like to add, everyone seems to be commenting about Dia's heart being broken. I'm sure she'll be upset, but from what Fida gave, these instant falling love ordeals are common with Dia and I'm sure she will be fine :)

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow! This is awesome!!
Someone's in for a heart break! Would love to see possessive khushi

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

One more added to long line of ASR dreamers. Nice one. Continue soon Please. Thanks for the PM.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hahaha...

That was one day in the lives of Arrnav Singh Raizada and Akash Singh Raizada, without their respective wives to see them of to work!!!!!!!

Poor Anjali...!!!!! She's so much at ease with her 'bhabis' that the poor lady has difficulty in managing her brothers' morning for a day...!!!!! Loved this everyday happening!!!!!!👏

Ahaannn... So both ASRs (literally!!!) got to train new trainees and what do I read??? One is already starstruck!!!?????😳 Poor girl would be in some serious shock when she comes to know about ASR being taken...{Bring in some tadka and bhadka} *Excellent* 😆

Indeed Khushi was right!!!!!! Who can handle ASR's 'ghoosa' more than 5 minutes??? As she rightly says "bus paanch minute ASR ki avtaar mein dekhne do, saari kwaahishen chodke bhaag jaayegi."😊

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