Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
HA!
Give Aman a cookie!

Amazing Update.

Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry Aparna for being late... But I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!! 😳

Usually while I'm reading FFs, i keep wondering how a particular scene written in them could turn out better than what is written... But in this one I have no suggestions. This is the best way this story can go. Arshi are in their element, Dia is blissfully ignorant, but she's not an outright evil, Aman is purrrfect!!!

Waiting to see how Aman will tackle Dia -- When will you update?
Until then, hugs for the fantastic part 3.

P.S. Just as you suggested a face for Dhruv, can you suggest one for Aman too??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved Dhruv - Khushi exchange.
And Arnav I can understand besotted Diya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago




Lovely update!!!
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haww - Making a Khushi wala face and expression. How did I miss this update so long. Madamji when did you update? Whole yesterday I was waiting for the update but didn't see any update and finally in the morning I checked the PM and saw that you have already done the update. Need to keep an even more close watch on when you update this story. Aparna ka story and no comment from moi for the next 5 pages - Yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta and dubara nahi hoga.

So can our Khushi be any more naive? She is such an expert in hitting her leg on the proverbial axe. She herself cajoled her husband to give the trainee another chance and this has definitely put Dia in the clouds dreaming about ASR/Arnav. It is good that Aman noticed that Dia is besotted with Arnav and hopefully he will talk some sense into her. Loved the Dhruv-Arnav-Khushi moment. It is after such a long time that Dhruv got really his bhaiyya and not the fire breathing ASR, so loved the way they were teasing each other. Beautiful update. Can't wait for the next part now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
adorable and lovely update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love the way uve understood the essence of arshi's relationship; its abt being completely into each other. in ur FFs, they have graduated from the pull-in-the-corner-to-steal-a-kiss couple to a couple who understands each and every nuance of their partner
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update ! What it feels too small!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i cant believe u started a new one and i missed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
each tym i complete reading the update my mind automatically goes into some other world my dreamworld from where i never wish to come back ..these updates they are so so beautiful that i fall short of words to explain how exactly i feel about them..
the whole arnav-dhruv-khushi scene aww ausumness at its epitom..and this kind of relations do exist in real life as i have seen it happening with my sister..this was real and aparna dii you are making me craving for such things to happen with me as well..although its too early for me to get married😆
so aman mathur to the rescue of dia..mm aman and dia will make a good pair and i hope il get to see them together..and hope that dia will get to know the truth soon...

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