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Posted: 11 years ago
kal subah pakka!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: piggie

why is he going along with dem😕

n wat is he actually planning??
p.s ur banner 👏


Your question will be answered soon:)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
I too love the banner, thanks to Aru Di😳

Originally posted by: surlin_chhabra

nice Update
Eagerly wAiting 4 next part


Thank you<3

Originally posted by: Rami92

oh i like ds bad guy so he wanna giv a chance to sexy legs nott bad but y asr particularly framed rastogi here mayb he s innocent here but nt always uh?? waiting

Thank you for ur lovely comment and liking bad boy ASR😳

Originally posted by: wiwy


Loved the chapter Cheesy! Nice twist to the story. So ASR put rohit behind bars for money! Really? he is such a jerk . love him! And for him it is a date with Khushi. ha ha waiting for Khushi 's reaction.😃

Thank you for commenting Di:)
Hehe ASR is a jerk😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nw i m sure u dnt love me anymore 😭

Tera liye sirf tera piyadkar pati imp hai 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chanyaforever

What the.. Arrrggg! This ASR is the first ever ASR I really don't like.. Hope Khushi will change him and show him how real life could be, without every night partying and getting drunk. I don't think that Rohan is a good guy, I think ASR knows that fact and wants Khushi to find it out by herself (that's why he challenged her!).. And I don't think he did it only for money there has to be something else!! Hope so.. Awesome update dear! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Chanya.


Aww do not be so angry on ASR, he will understand everything and that too soon:)
thank you for an awesome comment!
Will update soon<3

Originally posted by: sincereme

Wonderful update...
But not so wonderful ending...😔 I want to see khushi and Rohan meeting... How am I going to wait now...
Back to update... I getting fan of Khushi... She is something... They way she always answer back to ASR is awesome... I love their arguments...
ASR trapped Rohan for money... I m hating him for that ( not the hate wala hate but hate😉) ...
Now the deal is on... Can't wait to see how is going to prove Rohan innocent... Or how ASR is going to stop her...
Continue soon...


I am glad you liked Khushi, she is strong and not at all an abla naari!😃
Your wait is going to end soon:)
Not the hate wala hate😆
Thank you for a wonderful comment:)

Originally posted by: priya247

this ff is different and its storyline is also good . keep on writing 😃

Thank you:)
I am glad you are liking the story!

Thank you:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you:)

Originally posted by: cute_sarun

something is cooking in ASR's mind..continue soon..

Thank you for commenting:)
ASR is shaatir😉

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

Awesome update
I thoroughly enjoyed it

thank you<3

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Cheeni! Whats in your mind dear? Sach much me I have no idea how this is going to lead them into a scene of romance!!

Wonderful! I just feel like whacking him for his attitude!

Will he now feel jealous seeing them be close? any probabilities??

Cheers cheeni


LOL JP wait kar! Romance will make its entry soon😉
Love you<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Nw i m sure u dnt love me anymore 😭

Tera liye sirf tera piyadkar pati imp hai 😭


I am so sorry, I am very tired today😔
I slept just for couple of hours last night and then party, I danced a lot😳
Update, tomorrow pakka!
N I love you<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you<3

Thank you<3

Originally posted by: aashi12

What the need for my Arnav to lie? He's not a coward who fights from behind, ye to front foot ka player hai jo short length ball pe bhi 6 marta hai! ;)- This dialogue, actually made sense! And so i wanna get it copyrighted..😆


sorry Komal di, i like to blabber..:D

i know Arnav is not lying here and Khushi knows that too. That also Proves Rohan innocent but that doesn't really proves the fact that Rohan wasn't with Aisha, or wasn't flirting with her. Maybe he was! He too was responding to Aisha's advances.. ;)


Arnav calls himself a bad guy, to me he's just a part of bad world or the world of politics in India, if not for him, They would have payed someone else to frame Rohan! India mein Paise se Sab bikta hai, its an open OLX around here..(ye dialogue bhi bura nahi hai.. OMG! I should right a speech:D)


Khushi is just getting to see its facets and with Arnav she would be able to see it stark and clear! Arnav is having fun isn't he? Flirting with Khushi, helping her a bit, challenging her, making her wait and being with her.. Iska kaam set hai! ;)


Hehe nice dialogue, I totally loved it. FYI I am crazy fan of cricket😳
Hmm your point is valid, lest see what happens in the next chapter:)
ASR ka scene actually set hai :P
Thank you for ur lovely comment! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnupamaJY

loooved it
that was totally awesome

seriously arnav is really really arrogant
no wonder khushi behaves that way with him.
he deserves that

arnav said that he will help her and he did. but is he planning something?

but i must say i love him for his bad boy attitude but i hate him for what he is doing 😆

oh i love khushi too. for her bravery

waiting for the next update
you gave us a bad cliffhanger


Thank you<3
I am glad you are liking Arnav and Khushi:)
Will update soon! :D

Originally posted by: navjot7

awesome updt
I like this khushi
arnav is helping her but I feel he is planning something else
thnx for pm
updt soon

Thank you<3
Arnav is a smart guy! Lets see what does he have in his mind:)

Originally posted by: Neetz11690

superb upd

glad that arnav is helping her

Thank you:)

Originally posted by: zayana123

That was awesome part dear.. Really loved it... Arnav framed rastogi 4 money... Eager to know how story gonna shape up...

Thank you:)
I am glad you liked the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad



I am so sorry, I am very tired today😔
I slept just for couple of hours last night and then party, I danced a lot😳
Update, tomorrow pakka!
N I love you<3

Ja na kal tera update mein sirf awsm update likh kar bhag jaungi nd p.s I dnt love u
I dnt need ur sorry also bcz u knw i hate sorry by frnds still u said me
Akela akela dance ki besharam bulayi v nai mjhko

Yehii dosti yehi pyaar hai tera
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandz

After reading this chapter it seems highly unlikely that khushi would fall for ASR! I mean firstly she is in love with Rohan and secondly she detests Arnav!
Aisa kya hi ho sakta hai that khushi would fall out of love with Rohan and overcome her disgust for arnav and then fall for him!
It seems a very big task to me! On top of it there is this issue of morality and Rohan's innocence! If ASR framed someone falsely then he becomes liable to a punishment!!!

There is this web formed!
N m eager to see how you pull it off! How will Arnav khushi overcome these blocks in their path! The biggest blocks being they themselves!!!
Waiting for the next part!!!
Can you pm me komal? I mit not be that regular on IF in coming days to follow the threads myslf!
Thanks!


Thank you for lovely comment nandu:)
ASR will get his punishment, don't worry😳
Of course I can, ye koi bolne wali baat hai?😃
Love you<3

Originally posted by: arshi_sush


awsum chappy komal..loved it..
finally arnav confessed that he was the who deframe khushi's bf..nd done all this for money??bt for whom??
now he challanged khushi to prove him as a bad guy..wht the!! now its gonna b intresting onward..to see the tom nd jerry fight of arshi..lol
still i wonder is rohan really innocent??inbestigation kareke padi..till den hello hii bye bye..
continue soonwa:)


Hey Di, thank you for lovely comment:)
Will update soon!

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Tu kya chati hai cheese humse..tu boll de ajj th..kitna tym aur dono ke romance ko strt hone ke liye..its nt dat ki..avi ka track is boring or sumthn..its interestin..bt den too v hav been habitual of arshi romance na..ki wait ni honda aur..*giggles*
N u..framing my arnav a bad boy..ill kill u wid my hands nw..bt asr ko tune bhott hottt banaya hai..th uske liye teko chodti hun.. 😉 😛
N y m havin intuition..ki rohan is a very badboy..n khushi gonna hav a heart break 😲 😕

Aww sorry Sona for making you wait, bharosa rakhiye hum par, romance jaldi shuru hoga!
Lets see if ur intuition is correct or not😉
Thank you for your awesome comment:)

Thank you<3

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