#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 64

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear...i said so in your last comment because i just wanted to keep a bit suspense...
As all had already guessed but if i too would have nodded, the craze of this update was finished already...
Thnaks for liking the update, i think you are with medico background...
Thanks for liking it... i didn't add or subtract anything at my own, just wrote the details as i got from internet...
Obviously, all the parents will be worried, if they find their girl getting pregnant without marriage, no matter how much they love Astha or shlok but their concern is also right here...
avdhoot had to say yes knowing he doesn't have any other option...
Thanks for liking the pic... Meerab just gave them to me and i used them ...also put a banner on page-1...

Originally posted by: Anusha16

no problem... everyone is a layman at the start... I must say your right that we get to learn a lot while writing FF's...

And you know what... more than all the characters... more than astha...

I LOVE SHLOK!!!!!☺️ his character is really deep and caring and I have come to love this persona of him... do you know someone like that???

did you base his character on some real life person???please temme...

It'd be really awesome if the CV's read ur ff to pick some tips to characterise shlok...

would love to see him in a caring avatar!!! btw... loved the precap... but sad to see it's not gona be for long...😒

Originally posted by: naina..

you are right , the suspense needed to be maintained , even i kept on guessing this weekend😆

to know what will happen next we all try to get some clues from your comments...😉

n ya m a medico m a dentist n preparing for pg entrance exam now but always try to spare time to read ur story,just love it...

u really put a great effort gathering all the info...👏 n it paid...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

I saw them today, you know i don't access net on weekends...thanks a lot for liking...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

you are a sweetheart dear

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Yaar, frankly speaking, shlok in my FF may be just a dream man, not in real life...but try to keep charctares constant or change them with time..i don;t like t swing their moods like once too coll and gain that arrogant, i love consistencies...
ya, in precap ha is like old Shlok, lets see till when, i think just upto first break.😉

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update dear
loved it
superb
loved your detailed description of stem cells
so NA and anjali are not biological parents of shlok ...
felt sad for them... They love their son but can't do anything right now
loved kalindi 's concern for astha
loved the friends support for astha
I'm loving this shlok ... He is such a sweetheart
even in his semi concious state... He denied to go intimate with her...
he remembered his promise even in such a state..
poor astha .. Felt bad to her


When Astha spoke... Gauri why? Why every time he makes me fall in love with him more and more... why? Why now I think, if I will not able to make him live, I would love to die with him...
What happened Astha... Gauri asked worriedly...
He denied... even in his dreams he denied to get intimate with me... She looked towards Kalindi who was also shocked...
But why? Gauri asked... As per doctor, he is semi-conscious, and he love you so much ...then...
He said, he has promised ayii...she looked ta kalindi, we will not move ahead till our marriage...saying she hugged Gauri crying badly...



loved the above part the most..
waiting for next update
continue soon

Originally posted by: niki795

unresed my comment