Aashlok ss-My family...My Heaven....(Last chapter updated) ..pg49 - Page 11

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U will get the next update tomorrow
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@shavi-lover...your username is really cute...that's why used ur name
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waiting for leechu 's story update

I m waiting too for lechu's update 😛
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Cutest ss ever...continue soon

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very cute story dear and that interaction of shavi and shlok sounds so real for me sooo cute.

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Originally posted by: dakshaavi

very cute story dear and that interaction of shavi and shlok sounds so real for me sooo cute.

thank u sooo much dear 😛
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Originally posted by: meerab147

Aashlok ss-My family...My Heaven

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Astha:just like u ...she muttered...



Astha:whose lines she is repeating...the great shlok agnihotri's lines...she is really your daughter just like u...




She came running as she knew her father cann't ignore her for long...she hugged shlok...he hugged her too...kissing her...




Shlok:no need to say sorry my lil princess...papa saying sorry too because he shouted...papa should play with u na...ok i will play with my princess first then we will do something else...


Iwish shlok says this lines soon..


Yes shlok has to see or future has to sea grow higher and higher for other woman,

shavi was really enjoying her aayi going taller than his father...





Astha:sheee...thori si bhi sharam nahi aati na aap ko shlok...chodiye mujhey ab...but shlok was in a naughty mood...as he was putting her down...he kissed her cheek lightly...astha was blushing...thinking that how naughty his husband is...


Can see this cheesy really.. Aweee can't wait..




Shlok: lifted her in his arms and kissed her ...and said...who told u to do this???






Soon shlok's business partner joined the party with her wife and 2 kids...a daughter about 7 years old named veera...and a son about 2 years old named aarav...

Shavi got friendly with the kids in few minutes...she was playing with aarav as she saw a baby first time in her life...she was noting his little cute acts...which were really adding to her excitement...


Shavi:veera...how u got a little brother...he is shooo cute...i also want a little brother like yours...from where ur parents get him????...

Veera:my mummy papa gift me my brother on my last birthday...when mummy came back from hospital...when i asked her for gift...she said me showing my little brother that he is your birthday gift...

Shavi got confused...but how they manage to wrap your little brother in gift paper???...

Veera:oh no...aisey thora hi hota hai pagal...baby ko tu mummy papa le kar aatey hai na...samjhi...if u want a little brother then ask ur mummy papa for this???...

Shavi listened to her quietly thinking something...

Well the kids really enjoyed the party...have lots of masti...now all were leaving...wishing shavi happy birthday once again...

Veera before leaving whispered in shavi's ear...if u want a brother like aarav do ask ur mummy papa...they will also gift u...as its ur birthday today...

Their parents were watching them with surprise that how in short time their kids have become good friends with each other ...not knowing what they are talking about...

All left...astha and shlok were opening gifts for shavi...

Shavi was happy to see lots of colourful gifts...

Astha makes her to sit in her lap and asked lovingly...now tell me what gifts shavi wants from her aayi and papa...

Shavi:aayi mujhe na...aik chota sa pyaara sa...

Shlok:Koi toy chahiye meri princess ko...

Shavi:no papa...she makes irritated face ...

Astha:tu kya chahiye merey bachey ko...she said caressing her cheeks...



Shavi: mujhe bhi aarav jaisa chota sa cute bhai chahiye...wo bhi abi papa...

Astha and shlok shared an eyelock...


Astha:shavi beta...kaisi baatein kar rahi ho aap...aisa possible nahi hai...she was explaining shavi...while shlok was enjoying this all...his daughter always surprised him...she was just like him when it comes to demand for something...really stubborn...





Shlok recalls that how he in the same way asked astha for a lovely gift on his birthday...their daughter...



Astha:shlok please kuch samjhayen na issey...

Shlok:okayyy baba meri princess ko bhai chahiye na...

Shavi:haan papa aur woh bhi abhi aur aaj hi...

Shlok:par aap ko achanak aaj bhai kyun chahiye shavi???...


Shavi:papa woh jo veera aayi thi uske pass bhi bhai hai aur meri friends ke pass bhi ...bus mujhe bhi gift me bhai hi chahiye...veera ko bhi us ke birthday par us ke mummy papa ne bhai gift kiya tha mujhe bhi aarav jaisa chota sa bhai chahiye na papa please... she makes innocent face...please na papa...



Shlok:bhai aisey thora hi milta hai...



He gave a naughty look to astha...i mean ...uss ke liye tu GOD se bohat sari pray kartey hain tab ja kar GOD ji kush ho kar aap ko bhai de gey na...

Shavi:sachi papa????



Shlok:yeah my princess...

Shavi:papa i will pray a lot before going to bed...then in the morning i will get a brother na???



Shlok and astha both hardly controlled their smiles...

Shlok:woh tu jab GOD ji aap se bohat kush hoon gey tu aap ko khud hi CHOTA sa bhai de den gey...

Astha: ok come and sleep shavi...its too late now...



Shavi prayed for a cute little brother before going to bed...


Astha changed to her night dress and lie down next to shlok...

Astha :shlok ...

Shlok:hmmm

Astha just placed her head on shlok's chest and said ...u both father and daughter are sooo besharam...two akdu's of my life...both of u are sooo adamant...

Shlok laughs ...don't say anything about my daughter...ok...

Astha:u know she goes to bed just praying for a brother...u tell me from where all of a sudden we can present her a brother in one night...



Shlok:naughtily said...brushing her lips with his thumb...so lets complete my daughter's wish na...lets give her what she wants...



Astha:shlok...aap bhi na... she hides her face in shlok's chest...he took her shy wife into a hug...and kissed her forehead...




You delighted me..don't wanna comment and take the most loving bcoz the last in bday is more highlighting,

Wow thanks buddy for this wonderful OS with colors and vision.
So good with visual.
Hey am using your colors too
Gr8 inspirations with your imagination.. And we sill the above all in our dear ashlo.

Or shavi...sh... Shlok and avi ...aviansh got it..

Can the boy be shathnu,,
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@ prasai
Thank u sooo much di

Ur words always encourages me to spread more and more colours

Love u di
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Originally posted by: meerab147

@ prasai
Thank u sooo much di

Ur words always encourages me to spread more and more colours

Love u di


You have it HON just a motivation ...
Me you called DI.

See for you..my sis..me do more innovative the colors affect and imagination motivate one mind more.



Did it for daksha DI post my POV...no more analysis my pic in other friends post..


Edited by Prasai - 11 years ago

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