~~*Zindagi aur Pyaar ka Ek Khatarnak Khel....*~~|Chap 13B: Pg-49| - Page 4

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3:30pm
Payal's residence


Anamika ringed the bell. Payal opened the door.

Anamika: (teasing)Khamma Ghani, bhabhi-sa! Meri honewali bhabhi-sa...

Payal: (blushing)Ana! Tu bhi na!

Anamika: (teasing)Bhabhi-sa, itna kyu sharmati hai aap? Shaadi mei abhi bohot waqt hai.

Payal: (blushing)Ana! Ab band kar ye 'bhabhi-sa', 'bhabhi-sa'!

Anamika: (teasing)Bhabhi ko mai 'bhabhi' nehi bulaungi to aur kya bulau!(laughs) Kya aap mujhe ab andar bhi nehi anedengi...bhabhi-sa!

Payal: Jabtak tu ye 'bhabhi' 'bhabhi' ka drama band nehi karegi tabtak mere ghar mei tere liye NO ENTRY!

Anamika: (laughs)Achcha thik hai! Aur nehi bolungi! Abto ane de.

Payal: Chal aaja, andar.

Anamika entered.


Payal's room

Payal and Anamika entered. Piyali was already there, sitting on the bed talking with Payal's mother.

Anamika: Khamma Ghani, aunty.

Payal's mother: Ghani Khamma, beta.

Payal: Ana, dekh. Pia pehle hi agayi.

Payal's mother: Achcha hua tumsab agaye. Kitni taiyari karni hai. Mujhse to akele to kuch handle nehi hota!

Piyali: Aunty-ji, aap bilkul chinta maat kijiye! Hum hai na aapki madat ke liye. Ab aap jake rest kijiye. Mai aur Ana yaha dekhte hai. Aap jaiye.

Payal's mother: Mai chalti hu.

Payal's mother left.

Payal: Tumdono betho mai abhi ayi.

Payal went outside the room.

Anamika: Tu kab ayi?

Piyali: Mai pehle tujhse milne tere office gayi thi, waha jake yaad aya ki tu to aaj Abhigyan ke saath 'DATE' pe gayi thi!(smirks)

Anamika: Tu phirse shuru hogayi!

Piyali: 'Date' nehito aur kya kahu! Poune ek baje office se nikli thi aur sare tin baje lauti hai. To...almost der ghante? Der ghante to nehi lagte ek credit card lane ke liye!

Anamika: Vo...actually...

Piyali: Ab bol! DER GHANTE tu Abhi ke saath kya kar rahi thi? Hmmm??

Anamika: Mai to card leke wapas arahi thi lekin ussne kaha ki lunch time horaha hai to wahi usske saath lunch karlu. Iss liye...time laggaya.

Piyali: (teasing)Ooo. To maine sahi kaha tha...that you went on a LUNCH DATE with Abhi.

Anamika: (shy)Pia, tu bhi na! Kuch bhi bakwaas karti rehti hai!

Piyali: Sach tujhe bakwaas lagta hai! Tu date pe gayi thi, matlab gayi thi! Vo bhi Abhigyan ke saath!

Payal came back.

Payal: Kaun date pe gaya tha!

Piyali: Ye! Payal, ye gayi thi! Teri ye honewali nanand!

Anamika: Pia! (running behind her to hit her with a pillow)I won't spare you! Mere bare mei jhhothi aavvaye phelati hai!(throws a pillow at her)

Payal: (laughs)Okay, okay, stop it guys!

Anamika threw another pillow at Piyali. And Piyali threw that pillow back at her.

Payal: STOP IT GUYS! Pia stop!

Piyali and Anamika stopped hearing Payal's shout.

Payal: (with serious look at them)Pia, band karo, meri nanand ko chherna!

Piyali: Payal, tu...(Payal winks at her)

Payal: Pia, shut up, meri nanand ko taang maat kar! Achcha Ana...waise...tu sach mei...date pe gayi thi kya?

Anamika: Payal tu bhi!(throws a pillow at her) Tum donoko mai chorungi nehi!

All started a pillow fight.


9:00pm
Payal's room

Payal was standing beside the window, messaging someone, with a smile on her face. Anamika stepped slowly in the room, came behind Payal and snatched her phone.

Payal: Ana! Mera phone wapas kar! Ana...

Anamika: Are, are, mujhe bhi to dekhne dijiye ki aap mere bhai ke saath kya baat kar rahi hai...'bhabhi-sa'!

Payal: Ana! Mera phone de...

Piyali came and snatched Payal's phone from Anamika's hand.

Piyali: Ab ye phone mere paas hai! (reading the messages)'Kya kar rahe ho?' 'Aapni girlfriend ke saath baatei...' 'Achcha! Australia jake nayi girlfriend dhund li, India mei aapni fiancee ko chorke!' Wah, wah, wah! Kya romantic baatei karte ho tum dono...

Payal: (blushing)Pia, mera phone de wapas!

Piyali: Nehi dungi!

Payal started running behind Piyali to get her mobile back. Suddenly, her mobile rang.

Payal: (trying to get the mobile)Pia, ab to de de! Nick ka call hoga...

Piyali: (passing the phone to Anamika and teasing Payal)Nick...Huh? Call hi to hai. Ek din baat nehi karegi to vo maar nehi jayega!

Payal: Pia de na! Ana, please...

Anamika: (teasing)Agar ek din ye baat nehi karegi to ye zarur maar jayegi, bhai ka mujhe nehi pata! Pia, to ise busy rakh mai bhai se baat karleti hu, waise bhi vo mujhe to call nehi karte..

Piyali: Thik hai! Mai ise dekhti hu tu baat kar.

Piyali covered Payal's mouth with hand and Anamika answered the call.

Anamika: Hello, bhai!

Nikhil: Ana...tu!

Anamika: Haan mai! Aap aapni fiancee se baat karsakte ho, behen se nehi??

Nikhil: When did i say that!

Anamika: You didn't say that par aaple harqaato se to aisa hi lagta hai...

Nikhil: Which 'harqaat'?

Anamika: Yehi ki aap Payal se daily baat karte ho lekin mujhe ek hafte mei hardly call karte ho... Not fair, bhai!

Payal released herself from Piyali's grip and she ran to Anamika and took her phone.

Anamika: Pia, tune ise chora kyu!

Piyali: Karne de baat ise. Dekhenge...shaadi hone ke baad ye dono kitni der baat karpate hai...

Payal: Hogaya tumdonoka? Ab aapne aapne ghar jao! Bohot raat hochuka hai!

Anamika: Thik hai, thik hai. Aaj ke liye tujhe chorr dete hai. Hum jaarahe hai! Bye!

Payal: Good night.

Piyali: Good night...

Anamika and Piyali left and Payal continued talking with Nikhil.
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Edited by --Zariyat-- - 11 years ago
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8th January, 2014
7:50pm
JaiSingh House
Shaurya, Priyanka, Zaraa, Piyali and Ameesha were gossiping. Vinay was attending some other guests.

Shaurya: Pia, abhitak tumhare khaas dost nehi aye? Kaha hai Ana aur Abhi?

Piyali: Yaar, unndonoke bare mei pucho hi maat! Donoke dono ek number ke WORKAHOLICS hai! Saradin kaam-kaam aur sirf kaam!

Ameesha: Haan. Par itne der mei to unhe aa jana chahiye tha.

Priyanka: Mai Ana ko call karti hu aur Shaurya Abhi ko call karo.

Priyanka called Anamika and Shaurya phoned Abhigyan. Anamika arrived.

Priyanka: Call karne ki zarurat hi nehi padhi, vo dekho Ana agayi.

Anamika: Hi everybody! Happy Anniversary, Amy!

Ameesha: Thanks! And thanks ki tu agayi! Hume to laga tha ki tu ayegi hi nehi...

Anamika: Mai kaise nehi ati. Tune aur Vinay ne ek dusre ko itne dino tak jheela hai, uss celebration mei mai kaise nehi ati...

All laughed.

Moonmoon: Ana to agayi, lekin Abhi abhitak nehi aya...

Zaraa: Shaurya, kya kaha Abhi ne?

Shaurya: Ussne call nehi liya. Shayad aa raha hai.

Piyali: Shayad...

Vinay joined them.

Anamika: Moon, Vijay nehi aya?

Moonmoon: Vo Chandigarh gaya hai, usske ek cousin ki 'roka' hai. Mai bhi jane wali thi lekin ussne kaha kisi ek ko to party attend karni chahiye. So, i stayed back.

Anamika: Oo. Aur Nirjana...

Vinay: Her sis is sick. That's why she couldn't come.

Moonmoon: Achcha hua nehi ayi!

Abhigyan came.

Abhigyan: Sorry, thora late hogaya.

Piyali: Thora! Bohot late hogaye tum! Aat baaj rahe hai, tum ab aye!

Abhigyan: Sorry!

Piyali: Sab to agaye, lekin bohot boring lag raha hai...

Vinay: To... I'll be back in a minute!

Vinay and Ameesha went somewhere.

Vinay: (on the mic)Ladies and gentlemen! May we have your attention please.

Ameesha: We know that many of you are getting bored. So... Let's have some music!

Music started. Everyone was dancing, Ameesha and Vinay made sure that everyone's enjoying. When they saw that Anamika and Abhigyan were not dancing, but standing alone in different corners, they went to them.

Vinay to Anamika: Hey Ana! Why aren't you dancing? Come, join us.

Anamika: No, please. I am fine here.

Ameesha to Abhigyan: What 'fine'! Sablog dance kar rahe hai aur tum aise akele khare ho, how's it fine? It's not fine!

Abhigyan: Amy, please no.

Ameesha: Ye meri party hai, mai jaisa kahungi waisa hi karna hoga! No more excuses! Come, dance.

Vinay pulled Anamika to dance floor and Ameesha pulled Abhigyan. And they forced them to dance. The song was changed to 'Kahi Toh Hogi Woh', they pushed them to dance together. They had no other option except dancing. So they danced together. And while dancing, both were almost lost in their own land.

Kahin To... Kahin To...
Hogi Woh
Duniya Jahan Tu Mere Saaath Hain

Chaha Mein Chaha Tu
Aur Jaan Bas Tere Mere Zajbaat Hain
Hogi Jahan Saba Teri
Palkon Ki Kirano Mein
Lori Jahan Chand Ki
Sune Teri Bahon Mein...

Jane Na Kahan Woh Duniya Hai
Jane Na Woh Hai Bhi Ya Nahi
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse
Inti Kafa Nahi

Saasein Kho Gai Hai Kiski Aahon Mein
Mein Kho Gai Hoon Jane Kiski Baahon Mein
Manzilon Se Rahe Dhondte Chali
Aur Kho Gai Hai Manzil Kahin Rahon Mein
Kahin To Kahin To Hai Nasha
Teri Meri Har Mulakat Mein
Hoton Se Hoton Ko
Chumti O Rehete Hai Hum Har Baat Pe
Kehti Hain Fiza Jahan
Teri Zaameen Aasman

Jahan Hai Tu
Meri Hasi Meri Khushi
Meri Jaan

Jane Na Kahan Woh Duniya Hai
Jane Na Woh Hai Bhi Ya Nahi
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse
Inti Kafa Nahi


Zaraa: Ana aur Abhi ek saath bohot achche lagte hai na...

Shaurya: Haan. Just like "Jodi made in Heaven"!

Piyali: (in her mind)Are wah! Mujhe to kuch karna hi nehi parha. Kismat khud ba khud mera saath de rahi hai... (smiles)Ab shayad mujhe kuch karna hi nehi parega. Sab aapne aap hi hoga...


9:15pm

After dancing, they had dinner. Now Shaurya, Zaraa, Priyanka, Abhigyan, Vinay and Piyali were gossiping, Moonmoon left urgently after dinner. Ameesha was talking with some other friends. Anamika had gone outside to talk with someone on phone, now she's back.

Zaraa: Kiska call tha?

Shaurya: Boyfriend ka hoga...

Anamika: Shut up, Shaurya!

Piyali: To bol kiska call tha.

Anamika: Payal ka.

Shaurya: Payal...wahi na teri friend jiski tere cousin ke saath shaadi honewali hai?

Anamika: Haan. Aur Sam se bhi baat hua.

Anamika and Vinay looked at Piyali to see her reaction hearing Sameer's name.

Piyali: (seeing Vinay and Anamika looking at her)What??!

Vinay: Kuch nehi, bas dekhna chah rahe the ki Sameer ka naam sunnke tera reaction kya hote hai...

Piyali: (irritated)Please...ab usska naam leke mera mood maat kharab karo!

Ameesha joined them.

Ameesha: Kiska naam?? Sam ka?

Ameesha, Vinay and Anamika laughed, Piyali was irritated/annoyed.

Shaurya: Wait, wait. Tum tino hume bhi to kuch baatao.

Ameesha: Mai batati hu. (teasing)Sam Pia ka 'best friend' hai. Hai na, Pia?

Ameesha, Vinay and Anamika bursted into laughter. And Piyali threw angry glances at them.

Zaraa: Best friend hai to iss mei hans ne ki kya baat hai?

Priyanka: Tumlog sidhe sidhe bataoge baat kya hai!

Anamika: Actually, Pia and Sam hate each other! Hate like Hell! No! Actually, Pia hates Sam, Sam doesn't hate her...

Priyanka: Ye Sam wahi...Sameer Singhania hai kya?

Ameesha: Haan, wahi.

Zaraa: Lekin maine to suna hai vo bohot achcha aur handsome hai.

Piyali: (irritated)Achcha aur Handsome! 'Biggest Joke of the Decade'! Vo kisi bhi angle se na achcha hai, aur na hi HANDSOME hai...

Abhigyan: Pia, Sameer se itni chiir ti kyu hai?

Anamika: Undonoka relationship hi kuch aisa hai. Piyali Sameer ko bardashtt hi nehi kar sakti! Aisa kyu hai...vo to shayad ye dono bhi nehi jante.

Vinay: By the way, kya kaha Sam ne?

Anamika: Kuch dino baad Nick bhai aur Payal ki shaadi hai, tab vo wapas anewala hai. Wahi inform karne ke liye.

Piyali: (annoyed)What!! He's coming back!!! Oh no...

Priyanka: Anewala hai, aya to nehi hai na! Iss liye ab chill kar.

They continued gossiping...

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Sorry for the mistakes.😊

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Edited by --Zariyat-- - 11 years ago
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good going Zaroo baby 🤗

m eagerly waiting Samir entry aka (Shakti Arora entry)😳
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Nice update. Love it. Thnx for Pm. 😊
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Nice updates my little princess... 😃 keep going
...waiting for sameer-piyali story...
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Fabulouss and superb Update ..
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Fab Update !!! Like it n Thanks for the PM!!
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nice updates...
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nice
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