res chapter 206
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I m half way done but Lin I must tell u u r just superb. .. from the beginning there were lines which were so lightening
Shadow, however, was too absorbed in
his morning meal that he didn't pause
his cropping to spare a neighing
answer.
Lord Arnav shook his head, "See grass
and the whole world is worth
forgotten. And to think I'd brought you
out here, hoping you would be
assuring company..."
lol really I mean really if I was successful in holding back my chuckle here I surely failed totally here n it was da main reason m commenting before reading the complete update
Shadow made an annoyed sound in his
throat, presumably not happy about
having the word horse' referred with
the General though the word used by
his Master was not worth a pleasing
support. Leastways he could have
avoided reference to his class in the
animal kingdom and picked on
something more useless, like a bear,
for instance... bearshit...No offence
meant to horses, that way.
😆 😆 😆
omg omg omg is this da reason y nani n all were so worried to let Khushi sleep in his bedroom? This is hell of a chapter GOD! Lin who r u? not a ff writer for sure n not s simple storyteller this was something so awesome n perfect. ... omg when Gen first told Lordy dat I want to thank u for keeping khushi Untouched I thought big deal he will now make her his but omg she can die it can take her life. omg he really is swine the general. ... . But he is right Anjali n Khushi r Lordy's weaknesses but he is forgetting he too has a weakness dat is his cure... THIS WAS hell of a shocking update n I just loved it.
Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago
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